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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hope you guys like it . Enjoy 😊

Chapter two

Avni reached her house and sneaks into the house . She goes to kitchen and keeps the cake in the fridge . When suddenly she hears voices so she goes to see what is happening . The voices were coming from the living room which was so beautifully decorated . There were two figures who were standing in the middle

Man : neela relax karo na

Neela : kaisey relax karoon Aryan avni kahi nehi hai puraa ghar dekh liyaa hai

Aryan : woh yehi kahi hogi . Hamesha tension mein reheti ho . Isi speed mein tension lethi rahi na to tum bohoth jaldi hi old lady ban jaao gi

Neela : mai old lady lag thi hoon

Arayan : haan

Neela : kiyaa kaha tumney

Aryan : mera matlab yai hai ki tum old lady bhi hogayi tab bhi itney hi beautiful logo gi

And kisses neela's cheek while neela blushes .

Avni : awww how cute

Neela : tum kab aayi

Avni : mein toh kahi nehi gayi yehi to ti mein

Avni gestures Aryan to help her out her from the situation which he quickly understands.

Aryan : princess tumahari anko khi samney hai . So chill karo na neela .

Neela : haa bohoth achey when ever avni makes mistake you always come to save her

Aryan : its my duty to save my princess from any problem

Avni comes and hugs both of them .

Avni : ok lets forget this and happy anniversary mom and dad .

Neela : thank you mera bachaa . Okay now Avni go and freshen up mai kaana lagaa thi hoon .

Avni : okay mom

Avni goes to her room leaving aryan and neela

Neela : afte dinner we have to tell her

Aryan : yeah she has already waited for 15 years . If this opportunity goes we dont know if we will get an opportunity like this .

Just then avni comes

Avni : what kind of opportunity

Aryan : princess we will talk about this metter after dinner

Avni : okay dad

They have dinner like a normal family chatting about their day and teasing each other . After dinner Avni brings the cake

Neela : when you got this cake . You again sneeked out .

Avni : woh mom i am sorry lekin mujey cake bananaa athi nehi aur woh log ghar par delivery karthi nehi isiliyai mai leyney gayi . I am sorry

Neela : aryan u knew about this

Aryan : yeah i am sorry too

Both : I am sorry

Neela : iss baar dono ko maaf kiyaa kiyuki yeh mera favourite cake hai agli baar tum dono ko punishment mileygaa .

Both : okay

Neela : ab ek saath baath karnaa band karo ajeeb laga thaa hai

Both : okay

Neela : tum dono kaa kuch nehi hosaktaa

Avni : humey pataa hai mom humaraa kuch nehi hosaktaa . By the way kiyaa baath karni thi aap ko mujesey kaaney kai baath

Aryan : woh princess tumharaa badlaa leyney kaa sahi waqth agayaa hai . Dayawanti kai bas abhi kuch nehi hai . Unki business loss mai chal rahi hai . Meheta house bhi nilaam pai hai . Iss karz sai nikalney kai liyai woh rhea ki shaadhi kar rahi hai . Kisey kar rahi hai woh pataa nehi hai abhi tak . Tumhey india jaakahar kisi bhi taraa iss shaadhi ko rokh naa padeygaa .

It takes minutes to Avni to understand all the things Aryan had expalined her

Avni : agar mein yai shaadhi rokh leythi hoon toh Dayawanti will not have any money . Woh sarakh pai ajaa ey gi . Uss kai pass paisaa nehi hogaa system ko manipulate karney kai liyai .

Neela : bilkul sahi avni . So you are going to india tomorrow .

Avni : aap log nehi arahi meri saath

Neela : we wiill come later . Aryan alredy has planned to shift his whole business to india so it will take sometime to wrap things up

Avni : but i will miss you

Aryan : princess we will come soon you have to focus on Aman and venge on your mothers death . We have to give your mother justice

Avni : you are right dad . Mein iss waqth kamzor nehi padsakthi .

Aryan : yeh lo identity card

Avni takes the identity card and sees that it has her picture but the name was Ananyaa Verma . She gets confuse as why she needs a fake identity.

Avni : Ananya Verma ??

Aryan : nakli naam isliyai kiyuki agar tum avni bankai gayi toh Dayawanti ko asani sai pataa chal jaa ey gaa tum avni hoo

Avni : okay dad mera flight kab hai

Aryan : in two hours

Avni : aap mujey ab bataa rahi hoon mujey bagaaney ki itni jaldi hai

Aryan : princess ma tumhey kabhi nehi chodugaa . Instead you will get fed up and ask me to leave you

Avni : never

They both her whe neela looks at then with teary eyes

Avni : mom why are you standing there come her

And Neela also joins in their hug . It was just like a normal family which Avni has been desperatly searching . Fianally the gods have fulfilled her wish .

After two hours avni bids goodbye to neela and Aryan and starts her journey to get vengence to her mother and get her brother Aman .

Meanwhile in India

Every person in the police station is discussing how their sir had encountered a dangerous gang deal which happened last night and has managed to get hold of the the brother of most dangerous undercover don Mr.Jaggish .

A boy is seen entering wearing navy blue colour shirt with white blazer while a constable is comming behind him talking to him about something . When the boy enters all the people in the police station salutes him . Everyone starts congrulating him .

When suddenly a man is seen taking . Who looks so angry . He was handcuffed and two police officer were standing near him . The man gaze falls on the boy and seems like his anger has reached on another level

Man : mera bhai tumhey nehi chodeygaa Neil . Woh tumhey maar deygaa

Neil : Mujey damki deyrahi hai . Bulo math tum kaha par ho . Aur tumahara bhai bhi bohoth jaldh tumahari saath jail mein hogi

Constable : sir jiii

Neil : kiyaa hua DD kiyu chilaa rahi hai

DD : woh mathaa ji nai aap ko ghar bhulaa yaa hai

Neil : kiyaa hua ab mom mujey kiyu bulaa rahi hai ?

DD: woh toh tab bataa chaley gi jab aap ghar jaa ey gi

Neil : yeah after finishing this paper work i am leaving .

After finshing two hours of paper work neil leaves .

In the airport

Finally avni reaches india and she comes outside of airport

Avni : Dayawanti meheta ab aap apni ulti ginti shuru kyjiyai . Kiyuki aap ka sabsey badaa dushman aap sai badlaa leynai agayi hai

Precap : AvNeil first meeting . Suicidal drama . But who ?????


Edited by -Mairaa- - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: plmzaq

Awesome update

Nice starting
Few things are different but still love it
Beautifully written
Continue soon
Whenever you update plz pm me


Thank you
I am glad you like it


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice we one dear.curious for next episode
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: shikhsk

Nice we one dear.curious for next episode


Thanks . Will update tomorrow 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#25
What an awesome start to the ff!!
Waiting to read more !!!
Plz keep em updates coming ...
Love :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#26
Nice update Mairaa.
I knew it! Neela told about going to India. But let me tell you, as I started reading this chapter I don't know why but I felt like somewhere she was going to tell that she was pregnant lol. 😆 Neela and pregnant cute!
Anyway waiting for the next update. Aryan is just the right papa for Avni.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#27
Diksha Meheta : mentally little unstable but really smart but at the same time foolish women .
Just read the character sketch and this is my favourite line you have written there. 🤣 Totally diksha!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#28
Fantastic update
Eagerly waiting for Avni and Neil's first meeting
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#29
Awesome update
Aryan neela and avni's bond shown beautifully
They are helping avni to take venge from dayavanti
Neel's entry is also good
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
Aise hi pm bhejte rehna whenever you update
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Posted: 8 years ago
#30
Awsome loved it...
Thank God Shweta and Rhea are not negative here...I m so fed up of them
please continue soon :)

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