AvNeil FF : You Again ( chapter 10 on page 20 - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
#11
Fantastic concept
I also didn't like the fact that Neela is single
Love the bond the three of them shares
Eagerly waiting for next update
Update soon please
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Posted: 8 years ago
#12
Amazing start Maria...
Finally Neela has someone in her life
She deserves all the happiness
Waiting for Neil's entry
Very interesting concept
Update soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: Gurveen

Fantastic concept
I also didn't like the fact that Neela is single
Love the bond the three of them shares
Eagerly waiting for next update
Update soon please


I am glad you like it
Thanks
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Posted: 8 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: Deepti_98

Amazing start Maria...

Finally Neela has someone in her life
She deserves all the happiness
Waiting for Neil's entry
Very interesting concept
Update soon...


Yeah she surely deserves
His entery will be in next chapter
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Posted: 8 years ago
#15
hiii maira...
such a beautiful start...
loved it thoroughly...
finally Neela has someone in her life too...
so happy for her...
loved the bonding between avni and Aryan
hope we will see more of it in the coming updates
plz introduce tillu soon 😳
do update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#16
Awsome Mairaa...Loved it..
Neela is married again..Wow thats a nice twist...
I wonder what will she tell Avni
Plz continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: nimarious

hiii maira...
such a beautiful start...
loved it thoroughly...
finally Neela has someone in her life too...
so happy for her...
loved the bonding between avni and Aryan
hope we will see more of it in the coming updates
plz introduce tillu soon 😳
do update soon


Hey I am really glad you liked it
Even i love writting about Aryan and avni's bond
You will see more updates ...
Tillu will be introduced in next chapter

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Posted: 8 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: pri12

Awsome Mairaa...Loved it..

Neela is married again..Wow thats a nice twist...
I wonder what will she tell Avni
Plz continue soon


To know that you have to wait till tomorrow
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Posted: 8 years ago
#19
This is just to give an idea about charecters . Some charecters i have changed

Charecter sketch


Avni Ayesha / Ananya Verma : she has faced many hardship in life has lost many things in life . Hates dayawanti meheta for what she has done to her .


Neela Singhania : she is adoptive mother / step mother of Avni . Has saved Avni many times during her childhood . Hate mehetas for what they have done to her and avni .


Aryan Singhania : He is a huge business tycoon . Met neela at a NGO party a became great friends which turned into love and they married . Loves avni as his own . Knows about both of their past helps to take revenge .


Neil Khanna : An IPS officer who cant tolerate any wrong deeds and all the police force respects his morals . He is kind hearted and respects women .


Rhea Meheta : she is kind heart but is used by grandmother for her benefits . Wants freedom but is afraid of her grandmother .
( rhea is totally different from the show )


Ali : he is best friend of avni . Has supported avni through all the tough times . Waiting for the day when he will see her again.


Dayawanti Meheta : she is evil can do anything for her morals and power . ( More will be revealed on the story )


Ashish Meheta : father of avni and amol who loves her mother and cant go against her mother's will . He is easily manipulated .


Amol Meheta / Aman Ayesha : Brother of Avni . Spoilt by Dayawanti . (His character will be revelead more in the story )


Ayeshaa Haider / Asha : Mother of avni and amol .she was killed by dayawanti .


Diksha Meheta : mentally little unstable but really smart but at the same time foolish women .


Hetal meheta : loves rhea and amol a lot . Can do anything for them .


Ketan Meheta : only cares about money . Can do anything for it . Follows Dayawanti mehetas footstep .


Nanno : has lost everything due to dayawanti meheta . Thinks avni is dead .


Shwetha khanna : She is kind loves her tillu a lot . ( not evil like in the show )


Prakash khanna : Business tycoon . Respects dayawanti meheta as because of dayawanti his business had been setup .


Bebe : very jolly , loves tillu a lot and doesnt hate shweta . ( except that everything is same as the show )


Mr . Jaggish : a dangerous don , human trafficking, drug deals and murdering people they are normal work for him .

Edited by -Mairaa- - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#20
Awesome update
Nice starting
Few things are different but still love it
Beautifully written
Continue soon
Whenever you update plz pm me

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