AvNeil FF : You Again ( chapter 10 on page 20 - Page 5

Created

Last reply

Replies

131

Views

38.4k

Users

18

Likes

247

Frequent Posters

Ifa_Hassan thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: vu1998

Mairaa.. I loved the bonding between Avni, Neela and Aryan..

So cute and sweet family...
What an intro of our hero.. Navy blue shirt... I m in love with blue color now..
How dare that bloody goon tried to threaten Neil...
Really excited for their meeting...
Precap is intriguing...
Kindly update soon...


Lets beat the goon togeather
Yes will update sooon
Ifa_Hassan thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: srividhya68

nice story
interesting
waiting for next chap
cont soon


I am glad you like it
Ifa_Hassan thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: ShailjaShan

Wow yaar...

Awesome update and nice plot...
Waiting for AvNeil meeting..
And happy to know that Rhea and Shweta are not bi**h in the story...
Update soon...


Thanks
Will update soon
I really like their charecter before they start plotting
Ifa_Hassan thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#44

I am glad you like it
ITV_lover thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#45
Great,, love it... update soon
Veenapai thumbnail
Screen Detective Participant Thumbnail Visit Streak 1000 Thumbnail + 9
Posted: 8 years ago
#46
Amazing story.Loved it. Waiting for Avneil first meet
Ifa_Hassan thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#47
Hey guys I am back with another chapter . Thanks all of the readers for giving such lovely comments . Sorry guys i wont be updating any chapter on Tuesday as I have a class test but i will surely update on Wednesday . Enjoy this chapter . I hope you like it

Chapter three

Avni sends her luggage to her home and sets off to to explore the city . The city which once was so familiar but now it seems that she has came in unknown place . Mumbai has changed a lot in these years and she was happy to see so much change in her city .

Avni didnt knew when she came near the bridge but right now it seems the right place to be thinking about her life . She stands in the other side of railing while leaning on the railing .

Avni : 15 saal hogayi . Iss sheher nai merey saath bohoth kuch galath kiyaa lekin kabhi insaaf nehi kiyaa . ab nehi ab yeh sheher insaaf hothey huey dey kai gi

Neil who was passing by the bridge saw Avni standing there .

Neil : woh ladki sucide karney wali hai kiyaa . Yeh iss sheher logo ko ho kiyaa raha hai . Kuch galath huwa nehi aur sucide karney chali .

Neil parks the car and marches towards Avni and stands other side of railing .

Neil : tum aisaa kiyu kar rahi ho

Avni who didnt knew that someone has came , gets startled and looses the balance. Neil quickly extends his hand and catches her but for their dismay they both looses their balance and falls in the ocean .

Neil merges through the water and searches for avni . When he doesnt find her above the surface he goes underwater and founds her sinking . Neil quickly swims towards her . Neil holds Avni's waist and swims towards the surface . When he reached above the surface he sees that a land is nearby so he swims towards it .

After few minutes neil reaches land holding avni in bridal style . Neil lays avni on the sand and starts giving her CPR . After giving continuous chest compressions avni still doesnt spits the water so neil hesitates but gives her mouth to mouth . After few secounds avni spits all the water on Neil .

Seeing Neil so close to avni shocks avni so avni pushes neil so hard he fall on his back . She quickly stands up starts walking . While Neil was following behind her .

Neil : ajeeb ladki ho tum mainey tumhari jaan bachaya aur tum mujey thank you keheney ki badley dhakaa dhey rahi hoo .

Avni : mainey kahaa mujey bachaney kai liyai . If i remeber correct i think i fell in the ocean because of you . Main tumhey jaanthi bhi nehi lekin tum mujsey aakhar baath karney lagi .

Neil : Tum sucide karney wali thi so like a good citizen mein tumhey rokh nai gayi . Yeh bhi meri galthi hai

Avni : SUCIDE

Neil : chilaa kiyu rahi hoon abhi mera kaan sahi salaamath hai . Lekin bataa nehi kabtak hogi

Neil murmurs last past .

Avni : mujey lagaa tumhari dimaag ki taraah tumhaari kaan bhi karaabh hai .

Neil : mera dimaag karaabh nehi hai

Avni : issi liyai tumhey yai lagaa mein vahaa sucide kar rahi thi tabki mein vaha sirf soch rahi thi

Neil : oh hello soch na hi thaa tho railing uss paar jaaney ki kiyaa zarurath thi iss paar hokar bhi soch sak ...

Neil sentence was cut by avni screan as avni trips on tree branch which was above the surface and neil catches her . Neils one hand was in avni Waist and other one holding her wrist while avni both hands was holding neil shirt . They were so lost in each other eyes for few minutes the forgot they were just strangers . Who didnt knew each others name . Avni was the first one to break the eye lock and composes herself .

There start walking in silence . Avni looks arounds they have been walking for few minutes but still they have not seen a road .the only thing they were able to see was trees . So after lot of debating with herself she finally decides to ask the question to the irritating boy she has met .

Avni : where are we ?

Neil : mujey nehi pataa . Mein tumhey Dora the explora ka map lagtha hoon jo tum map map gaa liyai aur mein tumhey rastaa bataa dhoon gi

Avni : arggg ... tumsey baath karnaa beykaar hai .

Avni goes from there while neil takes his phone to see if there is any signal in the forest . But it seems neils luck was on holiday as he was having a such a bad day . So he walks towards the way avni went . When avni saw neil she got a idea

Avni : Achaa hua tum aagayi

Neil was little shock why she was looking for him as he was getting really bad feeling about this .

Neil : kiyu

Avni : tumhari shirt dho mujey

Neil : kiyaaa . Mein tumhari naam bhi nehi jaanthi aur pirbhi meiney tumhaari jaan bachayaa lekin tum toh meri izzath loot nai mein lagi hoo

Avni : What !! If you want to leave from this place fast then give me your shirt

Neil obeys her and gives her his shirt . Avni gladly takes it and hangs it on a long stick . After that place it near a tree . Neil stares at her as she has three head . Avni notices it.

Avni : kiyaa ??? tum mujey aisi kiyu ghur rahi ho jaisi ki meri theen sar hai

Neil : mujey tum itney beyfakoof tho lagi nehi

Avni : kiyaa mathlab hai tumhari mein beyvakoof hoon ?

Neil : haan toh iss harkath ko beyvakoof nehi kahoon toh smart kahoon

Avni : haan shaaidh tumney flim nehi dhekhi . Jab koi aisi jagaah ko jaathi hai toh woh aisai hi karthey hai .

Neil : mein filmey bhi dekhthi hoon aur woh bhi teek sai tumhari taraah nehi

After saying this he takes the stick and runs towards the sea while avni follows her . Neil puts the stick in the sand and looks at avni

Neil : if you want someone to see this and come to rescue us you put this in out in open not in close place where nobody can see it .

They both sit in the sand near the stick . Avni takes her bag and sits hugging it . Neil noticed that since they came here avni has not put her bag down for a moment .

Neil : tumhari bag mein kiyaa hai

Avni : mere bag mein jo bhi ho tumhey kiyaa

Neil : agar tumhari bag mein kuch kaas nehi hai toh tum isey neechey kiyu nehi rakh rahi ho . Aisey seeney sai kiyu lagaaya hai

Avni : iss mey meri zindagi ki sabsey keemthi cheez hai

Neil : woh kiyaa hai

Avni : mein stranger's ko meri bag mein kiyaa hai woh nehi batataa
And leaves from there leaving a curious neil .

Precap : AvNeil nokjok continues . Avni lands in trouble .

pri12 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#48
Hey this is so beautiful...Loved their first meeting
I wonder where will Avni live?
Will she go to Mehta House?
Plz continue soon
Ifa_Hassan thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: pri12

Hey this is so beautiful...Loved their first meeting

I wonder where will Avni live?
Will she go to Mehta House?
Plz continue soon

Hey pri .
To know that you have to wait for few chapters

Kshailja thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#50
Amazing update...
Waise sahi mein Avni itni bewkoof lagti nai fir bhi bewkoofi wala harkat krti h..
Waiting for more AvNeil scenes..

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".