AvNEIL FF:Woh Humsafar Tha(Chapter21 pg33 parts1-2-3 pg 34,updated) - Page 5

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Posted: 8 years ago
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"My name is Barry Allen and I m the fastest man alive"- The Flash..
My favourite Superhero too...😆
Ye line bina likhe raha nai gya...
And AshNeel is so cute..
But the update was too short...
Ab toh AvNeil ko milwa do..
Wait kr kr k mar jaenge hm yahan...
Update soonish..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely bond between avni and ashneel.
Hope avneil get reconcile

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Posted: 8 years ago
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the kid is so cute😳 even to imagine 😳
flash 😃 I'm the fastest man living on earth
I can't wait to know how Neil will react when he comes to know that Ash is his son
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing
Ashneel is carbon copy of his dad...Always cheering up his mom...Love them
Ab to AvNeil ko mila do
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Posted: 8 years ago
#45
Interesting story. Loved it... Waiting to see how it unfolds
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey! your story is just BRILLIANT girlll! Its completely different from the other FF's and its just amazing like to be honest im like addicted to you FF everyday I wait for your update like crazyyy! I was a silent reader but now I'm writing something to tell you just how brilliant writer you are! Your story is just 👏👏 I love the Mother and son bond their love and I love that how you showed Avni being so strong 👏😊 Keep on writing just like this and avneil ko jaldi mila do yaar😉 and yeah update soon
Love,Dolly 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ayesha134

Hey! your story is just BRILLIANT girlll! Its completely different from the other FF's and its just amazing like to be honest im like addicted to you FF everyday I wait for your update like crazyyy! I was a silent reader but now I'm writing something to tell you just how brilliant writer you are! Your story is just 👏👏 I love the Mother and son bond their love and I love that how you showed Avni being so strong 👏😊 Keep on writing just like this and avneil ko jaldi mila do yaar😉 and yeah update soon

Love,Dolly 😳



😊THANKS for your appreciation to the fanfic, and I'm touched with your enthusiasm,
and 😉I'm a silent reader too for others but this is my first time writing something of my own as fanfic.
Will soon write their meeting in upcoming chapters can't keep them apart. its AvNeil❤️
Had to add some innocence and happiness to Avni, can't let Neil take all limelight for funny and happiness.😆
Yours,Norma😃




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Posted: 8 years ago
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thank you for constant wait for the updates😊😊

Edited by NormaAra - 8 years ago
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CHAPTER 10

AVNI POV

It was four in morning and I just wanted a mattress to drop down but Ash had it easy cuddled in my arms sound asleep not a care of world,

We arrived at the airport and the driver opened the door for me as we exited the car, he retrieved our luggage from back and wheeled it to see us off.

"Ma'am your flight has been already announced. You just have to walk through the doors."

"Thank you. Tim we woke you up so early just to drive."

"Not a problem ma'am I had to see off Ash. Here let me help you with the luggage." And we walked the gate to get seated in plane as our luggage was handled.

Perks of being rich, you can get first class luxury in travel.

I settled Ash in his seat who was fast asleep but mera chaine toh odh gaya tha.

Ja rahi thi wahi, jahan sab chhodakar aayi thi, I was breaking inside out to face a certain police officer who I loved till now but now our situation and conditions were way different. He loved Rhea and maybe was happy with her. I had Ashneel who I loved and when it comes between two. Ash always comes first. Always.

My mind was going haywire I was considering all scenarios.

To confront him but no, then maybe meet Neela ma and papa ji but no they would try to convince me to stay.

Then maybe I should meet Ali and that was a obvious no he would ask question whom answers I don't want to give and go caring to obsessive which was annoying.

Then came Nanno and Bebe, pata nahi Kya soch ti hogi Bebe mere bare me nahi kar sakti face unhe aur Nanno woh nahi ye situation handle kar paaye gee she would burst thinking of Ayesha ma and my life similarities.

I should go meet Aman he should be all grown up in college, in last year of his course. But what if he too didn't see my situation and do something rash.

Only option that came to do things smoothly without disturbing Ash childhood in drama was to go quietly and do things there without any meeting from relatives, a quick go come and go from Mumbai. Resuming our previous lives without any interference and burdens.


The flight landed and it was 6 pm in Mumbai. Ash was jumping holding my hand and I was exhausted but he slept on the whole flight and I thought the whole flight plus jet lagged I was ready to drop.

But entering the terminal from runway, all memories flooded my mind.

Ironic it was the gate no.2 from which I exited my previous life and turned my back on someone specific was now our gate to enter this city.

I could see him again in my mind running toward me desperate for me to stay, shouting wait. But no that gate I turned cold to him then and will turn back cold from it now too.

We spotted a suited man with sign of my name on it. Seriously people who does that it was announcing my come back and for people observing information to know.

We walked to him and he greeted us very warmly and took our luggage and opened the door to the car.

The ride was silent mostly except Ash occasional ohhs and ahhs staring at the monuments in the sunset light and chatter of plans to visit them.

We arrived at company's hotel and found our suite.

I busied Ash in his favorite remote control game on the LED in the bedroom and took a power nap on bed in the background sounds of Ash cheer and game to face Mumbai preparing myself what comes tomorrow.


FINALLY. AVNI AND ASH is here in our city MUMBAI. Coming update will lead us to some anticipated confrontations.

😉Will Ash's visit go unnoticed??? Read and seek the answers.

Please comment and suggest ideas to show support.

Will update soon.😊

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Posted: 8 years ago
#50
Hey Dear!! Read all parts in one go.. I wonder how beautifully you display all the emotions and all I could do is wanting more and more to read from you.. Irony, Is it?😆
Seriously, I just want to see How Ashneel Khanna looks like.. I mean with Neil attitude and Avni's innocence would be best and your imagination is kinda striking..
Well coming to your question I really really want your next chapter to be like Avneil's meet and Ash-Neil moments.. I have started my imagination...

MY SINCERE REQUEST IS I WANT NEXT CHAPPY AS SOON AS POSSIBLE.. It's a request only but demand also.. in some corner😳

Edited by Naina_Arora - 8 years ago

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