AVNEIL FF : NAINA ASHQ NA HO - BOOK 2 (CHAPTER 47 UPDATED ON PG 60) - Page 19

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Kshailja

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I wanna scream but everyone will wake up will kick me out of the flat.
Itni raat ko koi aisa krta h kya???
Mere emotions Idhar Udhar udd rhe h... Koi pakdo unhe...
Update ko complan nai peelaya kya?? Abhi bhi mujhe chhota lag rha h...
And ladki next tym jaldi update krna taki padhne k baad hm chilla sake... Khushi se... Bole toh kya jhannatedaar update tha ye.. But i know next will be the most awaited one..


Coming back to update...
Ye scene kahin suna suna lag rha h..
But you described it so so so well..
I was like Vishakha, are ye toh sahi mein same same wahi kr rhi jo Neil bol rha..
That counting. I was too counting with them.. 50, 40, 30...
And then comes last line." tab karunga na main... HELP..."
Yaar ek baat bata, ye Neil kahan milega??
Same yahi wala Neil.. Show ka Neil bhi thik hi h but I love this Neil far more than him. Matlb mujhe ye Neil chahiye.. Ab kahin se bhi la k do ye tmhari zimedari..
Nai toh main sachhi wala Vishakha k types nas kaat lungi😆.. Hehehehehe...just kidding about nas katna but not about Neil... Kahin se bhi order kr k mujhe Neil parcel kr do... Kitna pyaara h ye..

And tune toh precap mein last time dara hi diya tha.. Mujhe toh lga Mark sachhi mein aa gya... Thank God abhi nai aaya wo.. Waise use toh main pehle hi maar dungi.. Mere AvNeil k beech aane ka koshish kiya toh wo..
Or chalo Vishakha is safe..
Lekin plan toh bhayanak tha bhai.. Agar sachhi mein kuchh ho jata toh saaf ho jati wo...😆
And ye Dr. Singh ne sachhai qubool li..
And that Avni's dialogue, " qki wo mera Pati IPS Officer Neil Khanna h." Hayee kitna achha lagta hoga ye bolte hue.. Ab toh done main bhi ek IPS se hi shadi krungi but khud IPS banne k baad..😃

And precap toh bhai kya hi h...
1st episode se hi iss din ka intezaar tha..
Finally, wo shubh ghadi aa hi gyi...
I am going to call news channel wale. They should also witness this moment.
"Aakhir kya h ye Khanna-Kapoor mystery? Q kiya Dr. Singh ne aisa?" Janne k liye padhte rahiye, Naina Ashq Na Ho written by Vihu..
Chalo maine toh promotion bhi kr diya ab mujhe ek copy update se pehle bhej dena...
Update jaldi jaldi..
And itne mast wale update k liye jhappi-pappi sab.. With speed of light (in ur language).. 😆






Shailu... Complan pila kar itna lamba ho gaya ki mujhe do parts me divide karna pada...
Meri neend chain sab gayab... I m so excited to write next part...

Yes the scene wasn't original... But I'll call it inspired...😆😆
Avni...
Juhi...
Rhea...
Tanu...
And if you noticed somewhere Vishakha too...
Buy even then I'll pack and parcel him to you... But you'll have to deal with the girls yourself...😉😉

Precap was misleading... Ullu banaya bada maza aaya...
Mark bhi aayega.. But abhi wo busy hai...
My good wishes are with you... You'll definitely accomplish all your dreams... And I m damn sure your prince charming will be a perfect blend Of Neil Khanna as well as Kapoor...

OMG!!! Media n all... Main naha loon... 10 din se nahi nahayi... I hate bathing.. Such a lazy girl I am... I know🤣

Update bhit jaldi aayega... Because I m getting very impatient this time...

Thank a lot Shailu for uncountable praises you showered on me... I just love you ji...
Vihu...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: nimarious

Finally u r back...
Omg wat an amazing update...
Read both the parts in one go...
First one was full of cuteness ...
Paratha and pani scene was so sweet ...
Precap was painful
But. When I read the next part
It was just flawless
Wat a twist u have brought in ur story
Loved it thoroughly
I loved the scene when avni did the same as Neil predicted the most
Awesome. Writing
Yayiee finally the mystery is gonna end
I m so happy
Can't wait now
Do continue soon


Hii Sneha!!
Thank you so so so much..
I was really missing you guys..
Yes! Finally mystery will open up..
I'll try to update asap so you don't have to wait long..

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: pri12

Wohhoo We r reaching towards Climax of story🥳

This part was superb..I loved Avneil cute nok jhok near swing
I really feel bad for Vishakha...its all because of her father..
She did drama of her suicide to know truth from her father
Please continue soon :)
Lots Of Love 🤗


Ms Kaur... Look finally your all confusion and suspense will be cleared...
Thank you so much...
Vishakha is a larger than life character of my fantasy...
So glad you liked her...
Next update jaldi update karne ka try karungi..
Love..
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Posted: 8 years ago
at last girl you made your mind to reveal the mystery .. I'm gonna break dance that has been high time
That whole scene of Neil mimicking Avni was adorable
😳😳
Vishaka what was she doing . n I couldn't understand about the plan of Avni n her . has she really cut her nerves . omg . why is she doing it
there must be anticlimax . Mark hadn't come n also Neil is traveling back to find Avni is fine or what . I know there are bleak chances of him to reach Vishaka's house.
n another challenge is there to bring Neil's memory back
exams are over for you
lots of love 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow Vihuuu so yayyy finally the mystery is going to unfold wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
How do you manage to get better and better every single time when to me each chapter seems perfect with no scope of improvement!?
Vihu yaar... you have some sort of magic in you... you are so crazy talented.
Each chapter gets me hooked and i refused to get up or do anything, whether it be eating and Im starving... until I finish your chapter
because its story is so alive that i cannot bear to break the world you have created with your description and very three dimension REAL characters.
Okay First of All, i havent had a birthday party yet and i dont know whether i will have one
But i know im definitely having a huge party for this mystery for being revealed because My god! I've been waiting since forever so eagerly.
Secondly... you perfectly did you present their love in the scene where Neil spot on predicted Avni's actions.
Is he dumb that he doesnt know he is Neil khanna!? How doesn't he notice how much he knows about her!
Awww it was sooo cute Vihu... i think I've gotten diabetes yaar.
Thirdly, you are so damn clever! You fooled us all with your precap... and can i please know where in your brain you come up with all these ideas, does god himself come to bestow all these ideas to you?
Because they are just absolutely amazing.
Wow your story is so thrilling as well as being so sweet and romantic, a full-on all rounder.
Fourthly, what a poor angel Vishaka is...
All this time I wanted Neil to Neil Khanna but after seeing the pour soul tolerating so much pain that all while have no ill feelings toward Avni ot Neil just makes me so confused about what I want now. What are you doing to us?!
She does so much for the couple without expecting anything back, what a perfect character you've created... like she's not even a character of the show but i could still imagine her as if she was real.
Now what am I going to do still tuesday/wednesday (whatever day it is in 2 days) you can't leave us desperately waiting like this yaar!?
Im so excited Vihu maybe more excited then I am for the show!!!
Please take care and study well, and eat well and sleep well and have fun till we talk next
Lots of love
Shreya
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Posted: 8 years ago
Sorry I am late!
I found the starting part to be so cute that I can't explain
Awww... Neil and Vishakha enjoying in the swing and talking about Avni
The way Neil described what Avni is about to do was so so so so cute... I had a huge smile on my face while reading that part...
And the way Neil held her in her arms
So finally the mystery is resolving
I am loving the pace with which the story is moving
Really intriguing and interesting
Poor Vishakha... I really felt sad for her
She deserves better( Hope she does)...
Excellent plan by Avni and Vishakha
Overall a cute and intruiging update
Waiting for the next part very eagerly
Lots of Love

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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing update
Neil knows Avni so well
Vishakha and Avni's plan made dr. Singh confess his mistakes
What will the truth behind his wrong doings???
Eagerly waiting for next update
Update soon please
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Kriyaina

Wow what an update...

Ohh how well neil knows avni...
Its so adorable...
I wish i can get someone like your story's neil who even without seeing knows what going on avni's mind
Vishakha is so gud...
And finally the wait is going to end...
Ohh god i can't wait...
Pls jldi update kr dena vihu

Hii Kriya!!
So glad to know that you liked it..
Of course.. I pray to God that you wish come true and that too very soon..
Yeah!! The wait will be over in next update..
Thank you for your revi Kriya..
Okk jaldi karungi..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thanks Shibu..😊

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