AVNEIL FF : NAINA ASHQ NA HO - BOOK 2 (CHAPTER 47 UPDATED ON PG 60) - Page 20

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Shreya2907

Wow! Visakha is so selfless.. I love her dialogs... Love the way you write vihu.. ❤️

Lastly,,, we gonna know the mystery of kapoor and khanna... After 40 chapters..
You made us die out of suspense..
Last but not the least update soon.. Plz

Thank you Shreya...
And Yes!! Finally... I m ready to reveal the mystery...
Okkk I'll update soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: nihamrm

Hello vihu!!
I just read the last three updates in one single go, so sorry for being late. But wow so much had happened. So Neil knows Avni too well I just loved the way he described exactly what she's going to do and omg this Dr Singh is our real villain. I'm curious how Neil will react to this. Can't wait to know what happened and what will happen. I must say you're the queen of cliffhangers after every chapter most of my doubts get cleared but there are new questions which get formed.
Please do update

Hii Niha!!
Please no sorry...
In writing Neil's reaction... I m feeling nervous.. Because expectations are really high...
Thank you so much dear...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: AgnesFan

at last girl you made your mind to reveal the mystery .. I'm gonna break dance that has been high time

That whole scene of Neil mimicking Avni was adorable
😳😳
Vishaka what was she doing . n I couldn't understand about the plan of Avni n her . has she really cut her nerves . omg . why is she doing it
there must be anticlimax . Mark hadn't come n also Neil is traveling back to find Avni is fine or what . I know there are bleak chances of him to reach Vishaka's house.
n another challenge is there to bring Neil's memory back
exams are over for you
lots of love 🤗

Yes!! Finally..🤗
I would love to join you in the dance... If you could bear my horrible dancing😆

Vishakha planned to attempt suicide... So that her father reveals truth... But she couldn't fake the suicide because Dr Singh is too smart to catch them.. So she cut her nerve really...

Lots of love for you too...

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: lol_rofl

Wow Vihuuu so yayyy finally the mystery is going to unfold wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Yes Ari...
We're on the doorstep of the mystery...
I'll reveal it soon..
I know you're quite busy.. Even then managed to read it.. So thank you dear😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Somewhatwriter

How do you manage to get better and better every single time when to me each chapter seems perfect with no scope of improvement!?
Vihu yaar... you have some sort of magic in you... you are so crazy talented.

Thank you so much for all the compliments you showered on me Shreya...😃
I always feel a wave of happy emotions inside me when i read you so good reviews...⭐️


Each chapter gets me hooked and i refused to get up or do anything, whether it be eating and Im starving... until I finish your chapter
because its story is so alive that i cannot bear to break the world you have created with your description and very three dimension REAL characters.

Well this really means a lot...
When I wrote the first chapter.. I decided leave it there oonly.. But after 40 chapters, reviews like this makes me feel so special.. So a big thank you...🤗


Okay First of All, i havent had a birthday party yet and i dont know whether i will have one
But i know im definitely having a huge party for this mystery for being revealed because My god! I've been waiting since forever so eagerly.

Really!! Hahaha...
Your wait will be over soon..


Secondly... you perfectly did you present their love in the scene where Neil spot on predicted Avni's actions.
Is he dumb that he doesnt know he is Neil khanna!? How doesn't he notice how much he knows about her!
Awww it was sooo cute Vihu... i think I've gotten diabetes yaar.

Thanks again... Actually he's tubelight...
Please don't get diabetic.. I'll reduce the sugary content..

Thirdly, you are so damn clever! You fooled us all with your precap... and can i please know where in your brain you come up with all these ideas, does god himself come to bestow all these ideas to you?

I'll take it as a compliment...
Brain... That scene in which Neil was predicting her actions was inspired by hindi movies...
And I watch serials a lot...

Because they are just absolutely amazing.
Wow your story is so thrilling as well as being so sweet and romantic, a full-on all rounder.

🤗


Fourthly, what a poor angel Vishaka is...
All this time I wanted Neil to Neil Khanna but after seeing the pour soul tolerating so much pain that all while have no ill feelings toward Avni ot Neil just makes me so confused about what I want now. What are you doing to us?!

Vishakha is a larger than life character... Even then I believe that such people do exist...
Well with this line.. I feel like I have succeded in making Vishakha the way I wanted her to be..

She does so much for the couple without expecting anything back, what a perfect character you've created... like she's not even a character of the show but i could still imagine her as if she was real.

She has gone through more than a normal person could have beared... That's why she doesn't want anyone to go through that kind of pain...
The reason for being so selfless towards Avneil is Neil...
The time she spend with him at the hospital and his care towards her( although it is as a friend) often makes her forget the narrow line between Neil Kapoor and Khanna...
So she just want him to be happy... And she know that his happiness is with Avni only...

Now what am I going to do still tuesday/wednesday (whatever day it is in 2 days) you can't leave us desperately waiting like this yaar!?
Im so excited Vihu maybe more excited then I am for the show!!!

OMG!!! This is the biggest compliment I can ever get...
More than the show... Like seriously...
Now, I am double excited to write next part...

Please take care and study well, and eat well and sleep well and have fun till we talk next
Lots of love
Shreya

Study.. Sure I'll never compromise with that...
I just can't wait to talk to you next..
Lots of love...

By the way where do you live??

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Posted: 8 years ago
Yes!! Finally..🤗
I would love to join you in the dance... If you could bear my horrible dancing😆

Vishakha planned to attempt suicide... So that her father reveals truth... But she couldn't fake the suicide because Dr Singh is too smart to catch them.. So she cut her nerve really...

Lots of love for you too...

Mei konsi Remo D'souza part 2 hon ki tum karab ho 🤣 Even donkey will commit suicide watching me dance
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update Vihu
Loved it
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Posted: 8 years ago
This update was just awesome dear... I'm eagerly waiting fr the next update...pls don't make me wait nd pls update as soon as possible...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing updated Vihu. Waiting for the next update..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Ohhhooo Vihu glad to read sooo many chapters in one go... Damn interesting swty..

Loves of kisses and hugs... ❤️

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