AVNEIL FF : NAINA ASHQ NA HO - BOOK 2 (CHAPTER 47 UPDATED ON PG 60)

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Shailja

@Kshailja

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Posted: 8 years ago

#171

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I wanna scream but everyone will wake up will kick me out of the flat.

Itni raat ko koi aisa krta h kya???

Mere emotions Idhar Udhar udd rhe h... Koi pakdo unhe...

Update ko complan nai peelaya kya?? Abhi bhi mujhe chhota lag rha h...

And ladki next tym jaldi update krna taki padhne k baad hm chilla sake... Khushi se... Bole toh kya jhannatedaar update tha ye.. But i know next will be the most awaited one..

Coming back to update...

Ye scene kahin suna suna lag rha h..

But you described it so so so well..

I was like Vishakha, are ye toh sahi mein same same wahi kr rhi jo Neil bol rha..

That counting. I was too counting with them.. 50, 40, 30...

And then comes last line." tab karunga na main... HELP..."

Yaar ek baat bata, ye Neil kahan milega??

Same yahi wala Neil.. Show ka Neil bhi thik hi h but I love this Neil far more than him. Matlb mujhe ye Neil chahiye.. Ab kahin se bhi la k do ye tmhari zimedari..

Nai toh main sachhi wala Vishakha k types nas kaat lungi😆.. Hehehehehe...just kidding about nas katna but not about Neil... Kahin se bhi order kr k mujhe Neil parcel kr do... Kitna pyaara h ye..

And tune toh precap mein last time dara hi diya tha.. Mujhe toh lga Mark sachhi mein aa gya... Thank God abhi nai aaya wo.. Waise use toh main pehle hi maar dungi.. Mere AvNeil k beech aane ka koshish kiya toh wo..

Or chalo Vishakha is safe..

Lekin plan toh bhayanak tha bhai.. Agar sachhi mein kuchh ho jata toh saaf ho jati wo...😆

And ye Dr. Singh ne sachhai qubool li..

And that Avni's dialogue, " qki wo mera Pati IPS Officer Neil Khanna h." Hayee kitna achha lagta hoga ye bolte hue.. Ab toh done main bhi ek IPS se hi shadi krungi but khud IPS banne k baad..😃

And precap toh bhai kya hi h...

1st episode se hi iss din ka intezaar tha..

Finally, wo shubh ghadi aa hi gyi...

I am going to call news channel wale. They should also witness this moment.

"Aakhir kya h ye Khanna-Kapoor mystery? Q kiya Dr. Singh ne aisa?" Janne k liye padhte rahiye, Naina Ashq Na Ho written by Vihu..

Chalo maine toh promotion bhi kr diya ab mujhe ek copy update se pehle bhej dena...

Update jaldi jaldi..

And itne mast wale update k liye jhappi-pappi sab.. With speed of light (in ur language).. 😆

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shikha

@shikhsk

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Posted: 8 years ago

#172

Omgggh vihuu with ur precap I thought their will be something painful n I was very sceptical bt man u jus turned the table.omfg u r great story teller.God bless you darling .U can have a good career in this Field.Woowww .Now will wait for Wednesday to come so dat I can read the story behind it.Really Amazing a big long distance hug to you n a peck on ur cheek

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__VIHU

@__VIHU

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Posted: 8 years ago

#173

Originally posted by: shikhsk
Omgggh vihuu with ur precap I thought their will be something painful n I was very sceptical bt man u jus turned the table.omfg u r great story teller.God bless you darling .U can have a good career in this Field.Woowww .Now will wait for Wednesday to come so dat I can read the story behind it.Really Amazing a big long distance hug to you n a peck on ur cheek

The precap was quite misleading..😆

Thank you... Thank you sooo much..

Don't know about carrer but I feel immense pleasure in writing this FF..

A warm welcome for your hug Shikha..

And the peck... 😳 That's so sweet of you...

Lots of love from my side

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__VIHU

@__VIHU

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Posted: 8 years ago

#174

Originally posted by: Electro.Cutie
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Yayayay! I am on cloud nine and you know why!! 🥳

Hey Vihuu..
Your ideas are just wah wah! 😳

Cutest scene when Avni did the things that Neil predicted and Vishakha was watching her do that. 😆 I fully enjoyed the scene. ❤️

But.. Vishakha actually hurted herself. I knew it.. She would be so disheartened. For her, life was really very very cruel. For a moment, I thought she was going to die... Naming AvNeil's daughter after her would be too cute. I want a chubby baby for them, telling you beforehand Vihu. 😆

That Dr. Singh! High time you confess 😡

So yay.. The most awaited moment is here. I think next update is the most important. We reached climax!
Update soon honey
Lots of love
Zuu

Look around you Cutie.. You might see me because i m also on cloud 9 with this lovely clourful comment...

Thanks a lot buddy..

The scene was inspired not original... Even then I felt like it'll suite their situation..

So you want a daughter for them.. We'll decide that later...

I m so excited for next update...

Love..

Vihu

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Electro.Cutie

@Electro.Cutie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#175

Originally posted by: vu1998

Look around you Cutie.. You might see me because i m also on cloud 9 with this lovely clourful comment...
Thanks a lot buddy..
The scene was inspired not original... Even then I felt like it'll suite their situation..
So you want a daughter for them.. We'll decide that later...

I m so excited for next update...
Love..
Vihu

Not necessarily a daughter... but a chubby baby! 😆

Yeah we'll discuss this later.

And I am so glad my comments bring a smile on your face. Keep smiling, shining and writing!

Let me search for you through these clouds now.

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RaindropsNRoses

@RaindropsNRoses

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Posted: 8 years ago

#176

Finally u r back...
Omg wat an amazing update...
Read both the parts in one go...
First one was full of cuteness ...
Paratha and pani scene was so sweet ...
Precap was painful
But. When I read the next part
It was just flawless
Wat a twist u have brought in ur story
Loved it thoroughly
I loved the scene when avni did the same as Neil predicted the most
Awesome. Writing
Yayiee finally the mystery is gonna end
I m so happy
Can't wait now
Do continue soon

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pri12

@pri12

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Posted: 8 years ago

#177

Wohhoo We r reaching towards Climax of story🥳

This part was superb..I loved Avneil cute nok jhok near swing

I really feel bad for Vishakha...its all because of her father..

She did drama of her suicide to know truth from her father

Please continue soon :)

Lots Of Love 🤗

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Kriyanshi

@Kriyaina

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Posted: 8 years ago

#178

Wow what an update...

Ohh how well neil knows avni...

Its so adorable...

I wish i can get someone like your story's neil who even without seeing knows what going on avni's mind

Vishakha is so gud...

And finally the wait is going to end...

Ohh god i can't wait...

Pls jldi update kr dena vihu

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Shreya2907

@Shreya2907

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#179

Wow! Visakha is so selfless.. I love her dialogs... Love the way you write vihu.. ❤️

Lastly,,, we gonna know the mystery of kapoor and khanna... After 40 chapters..

You made us die out of suspense..

Last but not the least update soon.. Plz

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niharika

@nihamrm

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#180

Hello vihu!!
I just read the last three updates in one single go, so sorry for being late. But wow so much had happened. So Neil knows Avni too well I just loved the way he described exactly what she's going to do and omg this Dr Singh is our real villain. I'm curious how Neil will react to this. Can't wait to know what happened and what will happen. I must say you're the queen of cliffhangers after every chapter most of my doubts get cleared but there are new questions which get formed.
Please do update

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