AVNEIL FF : NAINA ASHQ NA HO - BOOK 2 (CHAPTER 47 UPDATED ON PG 60) - Page 16

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Shreya2907

Lovely update...hope the next chapter comes soon..

And coincidentally today is my birthday and you gave a lovely gift by updating this chapter.
Looks like the next chapter is really thrilling.. In wait of it..


Happy Birthday Shreya... God Bless you dear...
Thanks dear...
And yeah!! Next chapter will be really interesting.. So please do read and review that too..
I'll post it really soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: vidz2122

finally updated...
a lovely long update ...
really good
worth waiting vihuuu ... asusual u are awsm
i loved paani paratha part ... haha oven mei paani aur frdg mei paratha
and last part wass just suprb ...
i love this neil kapooor ... ofcrs he is neil ,,, phir be i love this kapoor ... sucha acute momt it was ...
i lovd her their conv insd kitchn ... hehe ..
wowww ...

but praksh dilg hurt me soo much ... poor neil
anyway lovd it
and dont hurt avni or neil this time ...or vishaka .. plz ..


Thank you Vidya...
Your comments always makes me delighted...
You liked Mr Kapoor... Actually he's the remix version of Neil only...
Prakash don't know the really story... So he's also right at his place...
Don't worry... I won't be a sadist... Avneil will be safe and together...
Lots of love..
Vihu
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Kshailja

The wait was so long but the result made up for that...

Mazza aa gya itna long and awesome update padh k..
Though Neil still don't remember but he is on the way..

In the beginning, Avni's description was so cute and it was like full with hearts and roses.. Bas samjh jao mann khush ho gya wo padh k..

Then coming to the dinning table wala scene.. Avni is in full on mode to tease Tillu.. I like it..
And that kitchen scene.. "Kho gya ye sama, kho gye hum kahan".. Ahem! ahem! Sahi mein they need to 'gets room'..
And Shweta is so cool in this story..
"Na parathe fridge mein milenge, na paani oven mein. Ek dusre se nazar hataoge toh sab table pe hi mil jaega"... Hayee kya mast dialogue tha ye..
Though Prakash words were piercing but he doesn't know the situation behind it.. And ab toh Tillu bada ho gya h.. Mature ho gya h.. Sab samjh jata h.. Just love him to the moon and back..

Finally, Dehradun again.. It is really a place which gave Avni her love, life back...
Neil itna sure kaise h ki he is Neil Kapoor. He doesn't have any pic of him from his childhood or of any age.. But as Neil Khanna he has lots and lots of pic.. Akal lagane chahiye na bande ko..
Plus his room is also filled with his and Avni's pic of that 10 days spent together...
They are so cute together.. And that line " Maturity is when we start to know that Tom was innocent and Jerry was the real Jerk"... Hahahaha.. Sahi mein yaar Jerry hi Nalayak tha.. Jab dekho Tom ko pareshan krta tha..
And last part where Avni was blushing hard and Neil just smiled at her reaction.. Hayeee main saj/sad k jaawan..(Ye line jo bhi hota h..Hehehe)

And coming to precap...
Iss Mark ko koi or kaam nai h jab dekho Neil k peechhe pada rehta h.. Chappal padenge ise mere se..
Nalayak samay nikal k mar q nai jata wo.. I hate him..
Jaldi se uska kaam tamaam kro..
And why Vishakha want to suicide? Usne NK ka episode dekh liya kya..Hehehe..
I know you will unfold the story..
Or ye bhi pata h tu hume tadpa tadpa k pehle maar dalegi fir update degi...

This is not fair Vihu...
Achha sa, mast sa and lamba sa update de.. Wo bhi jaldi se..
Waise tera update toh humesha achha and mast hi rehta h bas use or lamba kr de..
Apne update ko complan peelaya kr.. Lamba ho jaega...

Lots of Love and hugs and kisses...
Itna sara bribe de diya..
Ab jaldi jaldi tu update de de again..
Because we are greedy people.. Itne se mann nai bharta..


Aaahaaa!! What an exotic comment...
Aur mujhe is comment ko dekhkar hi maza aa Gaya.

Main samajh gayi... Thank you...

Kitchen scene was too long but I cut it short... And I am so glad that it turn out to be sweet...
Dialogue ki tareef... Aaye haye!! Mere dil vich thand pai gayi...
Tillu bada ho gaya... Pa pa parathe ki jagah... Pa pa papa banne ki umar ho gyi hai...

Shailu.. He do have pics... Because Neil kapoor looked exactly like him... It was just that he don't decorated those pictures in the hall...
As he said " There are certain things in your life on which only you have a right".
Tom and jerry wali line... I was waiting for someone to notice that.. Thank you dear...

Hahahahaha...🤣
I'll ask Tillu to hand over Mark to you... Phir jo chahe karna...

Running to buy complan... Next update complan peekar jald hazir hoga...

Sare hugs kisses ke liye aapka shukriya...
Next update jald pahunch jayega...
Aapko late update ke kaaran huyi asuvudha ke liye hume khed hai...

Love ...
Vihu
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: vu1998

Thank you Vidya...

Your comments always makes me delighted...
You liked Mr Kapoor... Actually he's the remix version of Neil only...
Prakash don't know the really story... So he's also right at his place...
Don't worry... I won't be a sadist... Avneil will be safe and together...
Lots of love..
Vihu

finally you used the term avneil for ur story .. when update takes too much time ... i almst forgt the prevs part ... but for ur story no such probs ... evry i visit forum to read your ff 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: -Mairaa-

loved it
just love the scene where avni looked at at neils room
neils reaction when shwethaa described him ... hahahahaaa
their kitchen wala scene ...
totally epic
pehli baar bolney jarahaa hooon update sooon . bohoth wait
karwayaa iss baar ...

Thank you Mairaa...
Don't worry I'll update soon... Won't make you wait for looong...
Pehli baar bola hai to... Zaroor jaldi update karne ka try karungi...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Dreamer3

Finally you updated..!!!
Morning scene was beautiful..😊
When Mr. Prakash was talking about Mr. Kapoor..He was so broken from inside..😭
Every emotion of Neil was portrayed nicely..👏
Neil's room covered with Avni's photos..❤️
About precap..Yeh Mark phir sy aa gyaa aur koee kaam nhi isyy..😡😆
Why Vishakha is attemting suicide..???
Such an amazing update It was..😊
I know you're busy..But do try to update soon..😊

Finally... Yaar this was the busiest week...
Thank you Aqsa..
Will update soon...

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: vu1998

And Ik vadda wala sorry... For wishing you late...
BELATED HAPPY BIRTHDAY DEAR...
Thank you for mentioning this line... It was special for me.
Actually I made Avni cry a lot. So thought to let her be lil naughty. So glad that you liked her like this.
Building...😆 My dreamhouse... And is inspired by my fantasies...
Awww.. Rula diya... I'll try to make you smile in coming updates.
Lots of love..
Vihu

no sorry ..
yeah I really wanted to see Avni's naughty avatar .
Mark deewana phir se aa gaya . wo kya GPS laga ke rakha hai ? n I love such takkar ki villains
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: vu1998


Happy Birthday Shreya... God Bless you dear...
Thanks dear...
And yeah!! Next chapter will be really interesting.. So please do read and review that too..
I'll post it really soon..

Thank you 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow Vihuu love ot.
Na to prathe fridge main hai or na hi paani oven mai. This line cracked me up.
Oh Khannas know Kapoprs and yes Neil Kapoor exists! But seriously if Prakash know Neil Kapoor so he must had seen him too. Ahhh yea there is some mystery too.
Wow Neil has all pics of Avni. Wow and Awww!!
I am really loving them yarr.
Omg vishaka to commiit suicide?? Oh noo!! And Avni at gun point? Oh noo!!!
Vihu update soon and sorry for being late. But i am so busy nowadays like i have so little time to do some fun LOL
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Posted: 8 years ago
wow
awesome upt
when will neil get to know the truth...atleast a hint?
avni's teasing session was nice
avneil were so adorable
waiting for the next part
cont soon

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