AvNeil SS: The World Is Ours [Romance/Drama] - Episode 15 UP! - Page 3

I have read Jane Austen before but hardly remember it . this was just fab . the whole update in writer's POV n that too the way he visulises the scenario being present in it .

the way you penned their hearts turmoil was more than beautiful . the style of your writing has settled in my heart n please do continue it in upcoming parts too . it's different n just beautiful to see everything through the eyes of narrator .

i felt I was feeling a moving painting . this style of writing is so good 👏

I love every line of yours man ! The confession was just a poem . I can imagine Neil confessing n it was simple n beautiful

I am liking this style of yours. Comrades and narrator give me Austen and another writer ka vibe forgot name. 😆 these two are master of putting off heart to heart talks and avni is like trying to protect herself cause she already went through so much. Neil probably heard ehsaan and zimmedari in her words instead of "I am staying cause I like it here and I like you" . I am glad she came to him and explained the problem, and agree that it's between her and family no need for Neil to intervene. What I like about him is he lashes out but he makes it up in Apolgozy the moment he calms down. Waste no time in ego. Both wants to hear each other saying it first or even give a bit clue but none letting it slip...until he says that!

I am so hooked, update fasf!!!

Loved the 3 updates

Both wanted the other to stay but they cant say...

It happens when u r afraid of rejection...

Neil confessed yess

please update soon