AvNeil SS: The World Is Ours [Romance/Drama] - Episode 15 UP!

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Tumpa12

@Tumpa12

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Posted: 8 years ago

#131

loved it
superb
thnx for pm
cont soon

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Wicked_Dreamer

@msm98

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Posted: 8 years ago

#132

Finally you are back and so is Neil Khanna.

Continue Soon. Also, plz post A Fate Intertwined. The last part updated is a real cliffhanger 😃

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Brightglow

@Brightglow

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#133

I read all the episodes in 1 go and i just loved the way u've written and described each little detail...! Amazed at the story !

I've just one word for this and it is "Flawless"...

I so wish the cvs read this and get some brain... this is called creativity..this is called a beautiful story with every thing involved right from hesitation btwn the lead, their confession their romance their love, the family,the drama the characterization... everything is so perfect !

Thanks for writing this piece...pls do update soon :)

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vidya dasan

@vidz2122

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Posted: 8 years ago

#134

Oh my god where were u ... i check my pm daily for ur updates ...

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Globetrotter_me

@Globetrotter_me

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#135

Wow! Simply wow! That is the kind of relationship avneil share. Exceptionally portrayed.

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Spacebound

@Spacebound

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#136

Thanks for the update!!!! I was really happy to see your PM!

Both the chapters were awesome! Finally Neil Khanna took a stand for his Wifey and how! Loved it!

Avni is such a complex character...I loved how you have shaped AvNeil's characters in your story!

Can't wait for the next update😳

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1127246

Hibernated

Posted: 8 years ago

#137

God after ages u updated, it's heading in a interesting angle.

I tnk this is the 1st time I'm commenting on ur works but I have been reading ur ff since long time, even the other 2 ffs are awesome and I personally loved "Fate intertwined" so much plz update at least 1 episode in it, its my humble request.⭐️

Edited by Kathy_927 - 8 years ago