AvNeil FF: Afeemi Hai Tera Mera Pyaar(Part 18,Pg 46//Oct 17) - Page 11

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Posted: 8 years ago
I love ur FF n every characters.loved the trio bond of Neela aman n avni.avni trusting him n taking care .Neela amol bond was fab.Neil was not dere bt was mentioned very well.n avni n Ali bond was fabulous.now I want to see how avni proposes neil.pls continue.n thanks for PM
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Posted: 8 years ago
Arre wah!!
Really nice yaar..
Bebe is really a sweetheart...
Shailu i love Neela.. Hope this mother son will bond like avni and neela...
Ali inni jaldi maan gaya... Good for him...
No Neil... Your punishment is ki next update full on Avneil hona chahiye...
"Itna obvious hai kya?" hahaha... I loved it...
Rhea ko mat bhoolna next update mein...
Ali Avni special propose for Neil...
Excitement level is extremely high...
Update asap..
Love... Hugs... Lots of flying kissi...
Vihu
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Posted: 8 years ago
This is superb!!!
I loved Neela and Amol scenes..Pta nahi show mein kab milenge 😆
Ali Avni scene was also amazing...I want Ali to be her best frd not psycho lover..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Beautiful!!!
The part was very heart warming!
Amazing dialogues and loved Avni-Aman-Neela Bond
Glad to see the positive Ali here
And the last convo was very cute...
Update soon!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Electro.Cutie

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Unres..
YAY first 🥳
Shailja even before I read the part where you said you wanted to focus on every relation of Avni.. I felt it already while I was reading.
This was really beautiful. I loved it. I am getting an inexplicable feeling after reading this because it is all about love and care in every relation. Beautifully written.
All the dialogues are so apt that I can hear them saying it.. especially Avni and Ali convo. Superb!
I am so glad to see this side of Ali.. thanks to you. Seriously, I prefer this Ali!!
Lots of love
Zuu


Thanks Zuu..
I m glad you liked it...
I just want happy happy moments to show.. And Ali is really a nice guy, pata nai show mein q aisa kr rhe h uske saath..
And Avni is not much focusing on Amol, which was her main aim...
So I focused on that too..
Thanx again..😊




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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: -Mairaa-

Woooe such a nice chapter

Loved how yu showed neela and amols relation .
Update soon

Thank you so much..
I m glad you liked it..
Will update soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: shikhsk

I love ur FF n every characters.loved the trio bond of Neela aman n avni.avni trusting him n taking care .Neela amol bond was fab.Neil was not dere bt was mentioned very well.n avni n Ali bond was fabulous.now I want to see how avni proposes neil.pls continue.n thanks for PM


Thanx alot..
I m glad you liked it..
And there will be a lot of Neil in next chapter..
Will update soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: vu1998

Arre wah!!

Really nice yaar..
Bebe is really a sweetheart...
Shailu i love Neela.. Hope this mother son will bond like avni and neela...
Ali inni jaldi maan gaya... Good for him...
No Neil... Your punishment is ki next update full on Avneil hona chahiye...
"Itna obvious hai kya?" hahaha... I loved it...
Rhea ko mat bhoolna next update mein...
Ali Avni special propose for Neil...
Excitement level is extremely high...
Update asap..
Love... Hugs... Lots of flying kissi...
Vihu

Thank you Vihuuu...
Ali achha h bas raasta bhatak gya tha.. Isliye jaldi sudhar gya...
And ab sab clear h so AvNeil, AvNeil hi milenge...
And Rhea ko bhoolenge nai use bhi sudharna h..
Will update soon..
Love you too dher sara..
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: pri12

This is superb!!!

I loved Neela and Amol scenes..Pta nahi show mein kab milenge 😆
Ali Avni scene was also amazing...I want Ali to be her best frd not psycho lover..


Thank you so much..
I m really glad you liked it..
Ali ab wapas apna Ali ho gya h.. So ab sab achha hi hoga...
Bas show mein bhi achha ho jaye..

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Posted: 8 years ago
Thanx alot...😊

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