Mera himat, mera takat, mera pyaar (avneil one shot)

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Somewhatwriter

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Gurveen
Brilliant...

Really? Wow thank you!

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Somewhatwriter

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: lol_rofl
Nice one shot.
DM is so cheapde yrr.
Neil is tuly a gentleman.
Love it
Do write more

Thank you so much! Yeah i know, i wrote it yet i still felt disgusted at her actions aww thank im glad i could portray him that way because he always is on the show. Of course i will! I really enjoyed reading all these supportive comments. Thank you so much for the encouragement

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__VIHU

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Somewhatwriter

Oh no please no need for ji and all im probably younger than tou and no formalities necessary. Thank you so, yeah it was super long... i hope i didnt bore you! Aww thank you, i didnt think id ever hear that about my hindi!

Thank you so much, i didnt think id potrayed the feelings well to be honest. Thank you, yeah after seeing ali in recent episodes i just wanted to give him a slap and thought i could through my wriring 🤣

Oh wow im glad you liked my line, im glad it made you laugh! Thank you so much for being so welcoming and supportive, your so lovely. I cant wait to write more for you guys.

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