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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: -Mairaa-
I really love the way you love the chapters ... you are such an awsome writer .. hats off to you
I really love the lake scene the way he said i love you and the way avni felt him call her . Update sooon ...

thankyou soo much Mairaa..😃😃

updating now..

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Deepti_98
This is amazing!!!
Superbly written👏

thankyou deepti..😃😃

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Posted: 8 years ago

😉

Edited by _SANJU - 8 years ago

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Ekta

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Posted: 8 years ago

Hey sanju

Sorry for late comments

For first part...it was awesome

Avneil's songs depicting their feelings

Both wanted to be with each other

But avni left without telling neil

Both were feeling sad and hurt

Continue soon

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: plmzaq
Hey sanju
Sorry for late comments
For first part...it was awesome
Avneil's songs depicting their feelings
Both wanted to be with each other
But avni left without telling neil
Both were feeling sad and hurt
Continue soon

thankyou E...😃😃

do read other 2 and review...😳

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Posted: 8 years ago

For second update

It was also amazing

Shweta is creating misunderstanding

Neil realize his love for avni

Hope he proposes her soon

Continue soon

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Ekta

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Posted: 8 years ago

For third update

It's awesome

Avneil are missing each other

New twist in story

Hope neil is fine

Continue soon

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Hope09

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Posted: 8 years ago

Hello sweetie...

This part was yet again fantastic ❤️

And thank you for updating this soon..

I hate this Ali... Jahan dekho beech mein aa jata hai😡

And Neela's character was very well justified infront of him..

I guess the last para would be avni's dream...

Again I am being too much demanding par ab kya Karu... Need an update soon

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Posted: 8 years ago

Amazing Sanju...Ali is being a jerk

Finally Avni realized her feelings

and the last part should be her dream please 😭

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Posted: 8 years ago

Fanaa ho sabhi dooriyan.. Jaldi se!😭

Just read all the 3 parts together and loved it Sanju. ❤️

In the first part, they sang the most suitable songs during Antakshri.

In the 2nd part. Yeh Ali ki toh 😡 Neela gave fit in replies to him. You go mama. 😆

And 3rd part... Ali ne Hadd kardi!!

Update soon. Already waiting for the next.

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