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This was superb...Neil is angry and realised his love

Fantastic concept
I really wanted to read something on this track
Eagerly waiting for next update
Update soon please

tum tho best hooo ... jab sab ff mujhe sad kar detha hai ... you make me super happy ... aur ali ... stop that bachpan ki dosth ine ... hate u man .. kabab me haddi ... kyu fikr kathri hu tum itna ... neil se zyada koi avni ko pyaar nahi kar sktha ... neelaaa love u yaaar;

Wow sanju. Both the updates were awesome.. So much in line with whats happening in the serial..

Girl u always make me happy no matter what...

Wow...

U stopped it on cliffhanger...
Continue soon dear..
Loved it very much..

I really love the way you love the chapters ... you are such an awsome writer .. hats off to you

Originally posted by: Zenab78

She left after listening to Shewta's word
He is upset that she left without saying goodbye
Both are restless and sad
I hope Neela will do something to unite them

Update soonish Sanju

Originally posted by: lol_rofl

That was just amazing Sanju.

So gradually both are realizing thats good😃

I am waiting for next update.

Just cant wait to read more n more.

Love u buddyyy