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pri12

@pri12

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#21

This was superb...Neil is angry and realised his love

plz continue soon

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Gurveen

@Gurveen

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Fantastic concept
I really wanted to read something on this track
Eagerly waiting for next update
Update soon please

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vidya dasan

@vidz2122

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#23

tum tho best hooo ... jab sab ff mujhe sad kar detha hai ... you make me super happy ... aur ali ... stop that bachpan ki dosth ine ... hate u man .. kabab me haddi ... kyu fikr kathri hu tum itna ... neil se zyada koi avni ko pyaar nahi kar sktha ... neelaaa love u yaaar;

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tanyashah0110

@tanyashah0110

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Wow sanju. Both the updates were awesome.. So much in line with whats happening in the serial..

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Hope09

@Hope09

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Girl u always make me happy no matter what...

Again an awesome thing coming from ur side...

Neil and Juhi FB was the best part

And how the realization dawned on Neil it was super cute...😳

And waiting for the next part of this...

Lots of love... ❤️

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__VIHU

@__VIHU

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Wow...

You updated next part very soon..

Loved it..

Neela tightened Ali's screws...

Keep giving us lovely updates like this...

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Shilpi ❣️

@Sakhiiheartbeat

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#27

U stopped it on cliffhanger...
Continue soon dear..
Loved it very much..

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Ifa_Hassan

@Ifa_Hassan

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#28

I really love the way you love the chapters ... you are such an awsome writer .. hats off to you

I really love the lake scene the way he said i love you and the way avni felt him call her . Update sooon ...

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996203

Hibernated

Posted: 8 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: Zenab78
She left after listening to Shewta's word
He is upset that she left without saying goodbye
Both are restless and sad
I hope Neela will do something to unite them

Update soonish Sanju

thankyou zenab...😃

going to update soon...😳

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996203

Hibernated

Posted: 8 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: lol_rofl
That was just amazing Sanju.
So gradually both are realizing thats good😃
I am waiting for next update.
Just cant wait to read more n more.
Love u buddyyy

Thankyou A😃

updating shortly...

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