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Originally posted by: pri12

This was superb...Neil is angry and realised his love

plz continue soon

Originally posted by: Gurveen

Fantastic concept
I really wanted to read something on this track
Eagerly waiting for next update
Update soon please

Originally posted by: vidz2122

tum tho best hooo ... jab sab ff mujhe sad kar detha hai ... you make me super happy ... aur ali ... stop that bachpan ki dosth ine ... hate u man .. kabab me haddi ... kyu fikr kathri hu tum itna ... neil se zyada koi avni ko pyaar nahi kar sktha ... neelaaa love u yaaar;

Originally posted by: tanyashah0110

Wow sanju. Both the updates were awesome.. So much in line with whats happening in the serial..

Originally posted by: J.arora

Girl u always make me happy no matter what...

Again an awesome thing coming from ur side...

Neil and Juhi FB was the best part

And how the realization dawned on Neil it was super cute...😳

And waiting for the next part of this...

Lots of love... ❤️

J

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

Nice

Originally posted by: vu1998

Wow...

You updated next part very soon..

Loved it..

Neela tightened Ali's screws...

Keep giving us lovely updates like this...

Originally posted by: Ruhi_Angel

U stopped it on cliffhanger...
Continue soon dear..
Loved it very much..

Originally posted by: mariajamal

awww too good yr