AvNeil FF: Haal-e-dil link to BOOK 2 (PAGE 1)

Electro.Cutie

@Electro.Cutie

Dazzler

21

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#271

Originally posted by: charlottedias05
Excellent... looking forward to the next update. Keep writing...

Thankyou. Will do soon 😳

Reply

Quote

Electro.Cutie

@Electro.Cutie

Dazzler

21

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#272

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
well written..

Thanks dear 😳

Reply

Quote

Electro.Cutie

@Electro.Cutie

Dazzler

21

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#273

Originally posted by: J.arora
Hey Hi electrocutie!😃
Your FF is also too cute like your username.😊
I read all the parts in one go today itself...they were so irresistible ...
Loved avni-neil bonding here...
And the way u described their embarrasment scene was just so sweet...
Looking forward to read more...waiting

Hi dear.

That's so sweet. So glad to have you here.

Thankyou so much. Update coming soon. 😳

Reply

Quote

Electro.Cutie

@Electro.Cutie

Dazzler

21

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#274

Originally posted by: vu1998
Hello cutie!! Thank you dear...
Avneil on Hall couch... 🤣
The couch scene made me smile like fool...
Really very nice...
Aman's face would be worth watching...
Jealous Neil... Omg!! That was so cruel of saasu maa to sprinkle salt on his burns...🤣
Waiting for truth to be revealed in front of Avni..
This was a lovely treat...
Lots of love...
Vihu...

Haha I wanna see AvNeil's faces during Bebe teasing part 😆

Thankyou sweetie. Always making me smile with your cutie comments. 😆😳

Reply

Quote

Electro.Cutie

@Electro.Cutie

Dazzler

21

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#275

Originally posted by: mariajamal
superb

Thanks Maria 😳

Reply

Quote

Electro.Cutie

@Electro.Cutie

Dazzler

21

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#276

Originally posted by: tuna_star
Wow another update... definitely a good surprise 😉
The couch wala scene was☺️...
Don't let Avni leave Neil...😊
U rock...🤗
Update soon...👍🏼

If Avni leaves Neil ghazab hojayega nahi? 😆

Thankyou sweetheart 🤗

1

Reply

Quote

Electro.Cutie

@Electro.Cutie

Dazzler

21

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#277

Originally posted by: vidz2122
Nicee ... bebe tease master... let evryone cont their nib .. lolll

lol thanks Vidz 😆😳

Reply

Quote

Electro.Cutie

@Electro.Cutie

Dazzler

21

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#278

Originally posted by: sweet cherry
Just read both updates
Simply awesome, can't wait to read more

Aww thanks cherry 😳

Reply

Quote

Electro.Cutie

@Electro.Cutie

Dazzler

21

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#279

Originally posted by: Deepti_98
Haye Zuu thanks for the treat🤗
The update was awesome specially that couch wala scene😳
It was so cute
And the way bebe teased them🤣
Jealous Neil
Amazing!!!❤️
Excited for the truth relevation...

Hi Nainooo. You're always welcome.

Thankyou so much. Happy that you liked it.

Revelation hoga ya nahi woh dekhte hai 😉

1

Reply

Quote