AvNeil FF: Haal-e-dil link to BOOK 2 (PAGE 1) - Page 14

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Posted: 8 years ago
Thanks Shiku, Where's your kat DP? 😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing... Dayawanti Mehta trapped in her own plan...loved it..plz continue
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Electro.Cutie

Thanks Shiku, Where's your kat DP? 😛

Thought to change it after becoming goldie😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
OMG 😲... seriously it's dedicated to me?... I can't express how happy I m... first time a friend dedicated a writing to me...I will never forget this...🤗
This part is super good.. especially the last part I really love it...👏 (till now 5th part was my favt but now this is my favourite part as it is dedicated to me😉... little biased actually)
The way Neil trapped DM is praise worthy... sooo eagerly waiting to see what happens next 😊
Seeing this as the first thing in the morning really made my day🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing update!!
Specially loved the last part a lot...
Loved reading this one
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: pri12

Amazing... Dayawanti Mehta trapped in her own plan...loved it..plz continue

So happy to see this Pri. Thankyou. 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: tuna_star

OMG 😲... seriously it's dedicated to me?... I can't express how happy I m... first time a friend dedicated a writing to me...I will never forget this...🤗

This part is super good.. especially the last part I really love it...👏 (till now 5th part was my favt but now this is my favourite part as it is dedicated to me😉... little biased actually)
The way Neil trapped DM is praise worthy... sooo eagerly waiting to see what happens next 😊
Seeing this as the first thing in the morning really made my day🤗

A reason to never forget me. 😉
Haha it's okay to be biased in moments like this 😳
You're most welcome Tuna
And thankyou so much. 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: naina567

Amazing update!!

Specially loved the last part a lot...
Loved reading this one

I knew everyone would like the last part 😆
Thanks Nainoo 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
it's just brilliant!
Neil always a supercop😃 surpassing Daya ..I loved his interaction with Daya inside the cell..It was well written👏
Poor ketan whenever he does something of brains Daya shuts him up..
Hospital scene💔
you are making me to wait


I am sri😉
Edited by AgnesFan - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hii cutie!!!
The Nutcracker Neil was in full form today...
Dayawanti ke chakke chuda diye...
I wish i could see her face at that monent.. But you depicted that scene so well.. It felt like i m watching this all...

Ketan is really a donkey... I hate him the most...
But i missed Diksha... She should also accompany them in the jail..

Anyways thank you for the treat darling...
I really hope Avni responds to Neil's pleadings quite soon..

God bless you..
Lots of love..
Keep updating this fast...

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