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JazzyM

@JazzyM

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: srividhya68
awesome upt
loved it
cont soon

Thank you...Great that you liked it.

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JazzyM

@JazzyM

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Gurveen
Fantastic update
Neil knew all along that what waheed doing with Avni
He's such a possessive man
I think the next part is the confrontation part
Update soon

I wanted the policeman in Neil to be aware and his reaction was of a husband more than a policeman...hopefully, that came thru my writing... Thank you for reading and liking it...

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JazzyM

@JazzyM

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Rozy77
Goodness, that was such a fantastic part
I hate that Avni had to go through that leeches advances but was relived to read Neil knew about it and put that rubbish in his place
I'm guessing there would be a confrontation?!
Please do complete this soon

Yeah, The current track on the serial is focusing on Dayavathi Metha but I wanted to bring in a situation where Neil has to handle other cases too. How these kind of situation can impact a relationship. In the serial, given a chance, Avni might have run off but I needed to show that she would support Neil when push comes to shove. The part of Neil being unconsciously possessive and putting a stop to such activity even at the cost of his own investigation...I hope I was able to bring it out in my update.

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996203

Hibernated

Posted: 8 years ago

#34

loved the updates...

continue soon😳😃

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JazzyM

@JazzyM

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: _SANJU
loved the updates...
continue soon😳😃

Thank you. 1 more shot to go... to conclude my short story. 😊

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Rumaisa

@Rozy77

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#36

I've been continuously stalking this thread for the last part...😆

Hoping its long. Please update soon

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srinithi

@AgnesFan

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#37

Read both in a go..wonderful! I just love this possessive Neil..have always dreamt of him doing his police job n Avni waiting for him ...thought Avni would puncture that guy ...but she has become so dependent on him n just decided to shut up (in show too she has turned so weak n dependent on him after she found that he knew her truth) ...waiting for next update ..

not to forget that kiss in part1..