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Posted: 8 years ago
#11
Wow
The first part of the song really suits AvNeil
Edited by Electro.Cutie - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#12

You know I can't smile without you
I can't smile without you
I can't laugh and I can't sing
I'm finding it hard to do anything
You see I feel sad when you're sad
I feel glad when you're glad
If you only knew what I'm going through
I just can't smile without you

You came along just like a song
And brighten my day
Who would have believed that you where part of a dream
Now it all seems light years away

Barry Manilow Can't Smile Without You.

A marriage that she had forced on Neil, a relationship that he had chosen to endure. What was the reason, till now she could not fathom? Dayavanthi Metha is still out there but no longer free. She is in jail of her own making, a jail where her mind was suffocating her abilities. Yes, Neil's plan with the doctor had borne fruit, without the anxiety medication, Dayavanthi Metha was slowing but surely going insane. Aman/Amol was still in the dark about his family. Neela ma felt slowly but surely, he will get to know the truth from Dayavanthi Metha's mouth. Different plans were being placed. Next week would be game week to execute the full plan to make Dayavanthi Metha spit the truth about Ayesha ma's death.

Neil her husband. Lean and muscular thanks to years of training. His golden skin had been warm and rough when she had accidently touched him a few weeks ago. He had come out from shower; a towel was draped low around his hips while he dried his hair with another. His rock-hard abdomen had clenched involuntarily at her touch. It had thrilled her. She still flushed, her skin tingling whenever she thought about the scene. He had raised his eye brows and had swaggered away in his confident policewala precise moves. He came back wearing indigo-blue kurta salwar. It skimmed his athletic body and he looked stunning. He stunned her further when he told her that he was taking her to eat her favorite chaat. He had driven to the Sharma Chaat Bhandar at Vaikunthlal Mehta Road. The toasted warmth of cumin, the bite of cayenne wafting in the air made her mouth water. While she enjoyed the food, Neil was on the look-out. She could identify the hard policewala look on his face. The searching in his eyes, his loose-limbed pose, cagey as tiger.

A : Are you sure you don't want to get one of your own chaat?

N: I'm sure. His words were clipped with anger.

Avani hated his mercurial mood. He had never acted like that before and yet it was happening constantly in the past 2 weeks. Just when she thought they had found a truce, it slipped away. It was like dark storm clouds rolling in suddenly and blocking out the sun. She also noticed that he no longer touched her, the flirty banter had ceased. It had hurt when it should not. She could not gauge her own feelings.

A fat tear appeared on Avani's eyelids. Before it could roll down, Neil had it captured in his fingers. He curled his finger under her chin made her look at him. "Ananya, you are not weak. You are strong woman who struggled thru out her young life. The struggle is part of who you are now, you are defined by your strength. She had wanted to believe that, she wanted to believe that Neil could look at her and not see the torment that had overwhelmed her.

Avni pulled her chin from his hold and bent her head. "I'm sorry I've been a burden. I know I'm not the wife you wanted. You should have someone who will improve your life and be an asset to you.

N: Enough. Stop talking or I will make you shut up.

A : We can divorce quietly and ...

Neil had bent his head and claimed her mouth with his. Her knees buckled as she clung onto his shoulders. His fierce kiss lit something deep inside her. A dangerous fire that she had tried so hard to ignore. It roared through her veins as she returned his kiss. Avni whimpered when Neil pulled away. Her stomach clenched with anticipation. But Neil was not looking her, he was looking in front of him with a sheepish smile on his face. It was a 360-degree turnover.

N: Hi guys. What's up? Didn't expect you guys to be here.

Neil's gaze clashed with hers. Slowly his eyes narrowed and there was a warning in his eyes to follow his lead. Her pulse skipped hard as she saw the determined glitter in his kohl black eyes.

N : Meet my wife Avni Mehta. He introduced Ananya to the 2 gentlemen dressed in crisply ironed white kurta salwar and a fancy saree clad lady. All 3 looked polished to the tip of their Italian handmade shoes. There was nothing ordinary about the 3 of them. Ananya was still reeling over being introduced as Avni Mehta. What was going on? Neil had her arms in a dead tight grip, which meant this was important and dangerous.

One of the guys had greeted Neil by calling him Neil Mehta. Avni was dazed with the turn of the conversation. All 4 started talking about guns; from the make to the caliber was discussed. Thru out the conversation, Avni had gleaned that Neil was posing as gun smuggler and the 3 were prospective buyers. She knew it was dangerous and her stomach had churned with worry. After length conversation, all of them had trooped outside the Chaat shop. She didn't object as Neil bundled her into the backseat as if she was a delicate treasure. She didn't say anything until she noticed he wasn't getting into the car with her.

A: What's going on? Her eyes widened as she realized he was staying back with his new friends. "You are not coming with me?

N : No. DD take her straight to Ali's house. "Damn it Neil, Avni said through the thick glass. But he had turned away and followed the 3 guests like a warrior heading in for battle.

DD had told her that Neil was investigating a case and she was to keep the name of Avni Mehta until everything was secure. He had refused to give her any other information. DD had dropped Avni at Ali's place and had told her to stay there until Neil contacted her.

That had been 2 weeks ago. Fear, cold and hard had twisted in her stomach as she had waited for Neil. Now, this call...a request to wear the red dress. The sleeveless red gown fitted her like a dream, a sleek confection of criss-crossed chiffon and silk that hugged her torso and hips and fell to her ankles in gentle flare. A yellow gold necklace that spanned past Avni's collarbone. The matching drop earrings were heavy and swayed with her every move. Her finger was adorned by an ornate ring that went with the set. Avni paced the bedroom, hoping to find serenity, but nothing relieved her agitation. Her high heels clicked against the tiles and the stack of bangles clattered with every move. The water fountain gurgled loudly and the fragrance of the flowers were overpowering. Where was Neil? Why had she ever agreed to this?

N: Ananya.

She whirled around at the sound of Neil's voice. Her pulse skipped hard when she saw him walking towards her. His hair was worn long and a hint of beard darkened his jaw. Today he wore a long red tunic and designer pants but the casual wear didn't hide his powerful and masculine body. She felt a flutter low in her belly when she was his keen dark eyes roam her figure. She was keenly aware of how the dress clung to her curves. Ananya dragged her gaze to Neil's face. Only then did she notice the darker shadows and the deeper lines around his eyes. His angular features were harsh and mesmerizing. He looked older. Harder.

N : Shall we go. Neil held out his hand...

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Posted: 8 years ago
#13
Phew...Just uploaded Shot 1
Let me know of your thoughts...hopefully, this time around the length of the update will not make anyone feel disappointed ...

Would appreciate any feedback...

- Jazzy...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#14
Its amazing Jazzy, Please do update soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#15
Oh wow
Thanks for updating so soon and making the 1st part longer
Such an amazing and thrilling part
Thoroughly enjoyed it
They're meeting after 2 weeks and I'm curious to read the changes between them now
So excited for the next one

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Posted: 8 years ago
#16
Awesome..
Mindblowing...
Loved it really...
Thanx for lengthy post.. Enjoyed reading it
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: natzcreado

Wow its amazing. Do continue soon...



Have update on Page 2. Have a look ...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: charlottedias05

Very nice... But tooo short post... Do write longer ones... Dil maange more 😃



Longer update for Shot 1. Check it out
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Posted: 8 years ago
#19
Amazing update
They kissed too
Update soon please
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Posted: 8 years ago
#20
Oh jazzy it's amazing yrr. I am imagining Avni in that red gown. Oh la laa.
She will be looking mesmerising. Haye.
Please update soon as possible.
Love you.

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