|| Ritik Shivanya FF ~ secret admirer~|| Ch2updated

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Posted: 9 years ago
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"Their are many people around u who are ur well wisher nd u knw them vry well bt what abt u secret admirer whom u dnt knw bt somehow u r attched with that person nd suddenly u r fallen for that unknown face what will happen "This is diffrent story nd concept hope u all will like it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey do continue..
Will love to read
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Character sketch:

Ankush raheja: Head of raheja Group of industry. The person who believe that he is no 1 in all field nd he is vry close to his son.

Yamini raheja: Wife of ankush raheja, superstitious nd belives in natural power nd can do anything for his son.

Ritik raheja: The MD of raheja grp of industry. Most eligible bachelor of town. Down to earth person nd close to his parents.

Shivanya : Very sweet simple nd down to earth girl. She is an orphan.

Shesha: Childhood friend of shivanya nd an orphan like her.

Tanvi mathur: childhood friend of ritik raheja. She wants to marry him bcs of his looks nd popularity.

Shailesh mathur: buisness partner of rahejas nd best friend of ankush.

Nd last bt nt the least The Secret Admirer

Rest charachters are same as shown in the show.

Hope u all liked the character sketch
Edited by swalak_shivya - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice character sketch
Waiting to know about our secret admirer😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kit_Kat

nice character sketch
Waiting to know about our secret admirer😉

[B] Tnx will continue tomorrow😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting concept and characters sketch
Looking forward to read the updates
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Posted: 9 years ago
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So now i m going to start fist chapter of this FF hope u all will like it.



Scene 1

Raheja mansion

Ankush: yamini jldi aao we are getting late for confrence.

Yamini: haan aa gyi

Ankush: Ritik kaha hai???

Yamini: Vo orphanage gya hai aapko pta hai na aaj kya hai???

Ankush: Yes i remember aaj ka din mein kaise bhul skta hun

Yamini: Anky ji agr kisi din ritik ko sach pta chal gya toh hm usse kya jawab dnge

Ankush: Ni usse sach ni pta chalega Aesa kv v ni hoga kher chalo mathur hmara wait kr rha hoga .

Scene 2
Mathur mansion

Shailesh: ramya chalo hmlog late ho rhe hai hme jldi pahuchna hai

Ramya: Haan aa gyi

shailesh: Tanvi kaha hai???

ramya : Tanvi aur arjun saath mein hai vo dono direct confrence hall mein milenge. Waise aapko yaad hai aaj kon sa din hai

Shailesh: Aaj ka din mein kaise bhul skta hun

Ramya: Agr undono ko pta chal gya ki sach kya hai toh fir

Shailesh: dnt worry unhe kv kch pta ni chalega chalo hm late ho rhe hai confrence ke liye.

Scene 3
Confrence hall

Reporter1: Mr raheja Aaj aap india ke no.1 buisness tycon hai iss jagah pe pahuch ke aapko kaisa lg rha hai???

Ankush: Yeh mere akele ki mehnat ni hai mere family nd mera sbse accha dost shailesh ne mera saath diya hai isme credit sbko jaata hai aaj mein jo bhi hun unhi ki wajah se hun

Reporter2 : Mr mathur aapko experience kaisa rha ankush raheja ke saath kaam krke kaisa lg rha hai???

shailesh: He is my bst frnd nd we know each other since childhood so its best felling to work with him.

Reporter: Mr raheja hmne suna hai aapke bete ritik aur mr mathur ki beti tanvi ke beech kch chal rha hai kya yeh Sach hai???

ankush: Kher yeh hmari personal baat hai nd agr aesa hai bhi toh hmme koi prob ni hai

Reporter: Ritik raheja is eligible bachelor of india Aur bhut larkiya unse shaadi krna chahti hai vo kisse shaadi krna chahte hai air kb???

Ankush: well yeh toh ab Ritik hi btayega let him decide av toh uski nayi book launch hogi toh aap uska wait kariye

reporter: Ritik raheja ko writing ka bhut shaukh hai kya aapne unhe kv roka ni???

Ankush: Maine usse phle keh diya tha ki usse jo krna hai vo kr skta hai maine kv v usse kisi cheez ke liye force ni kiya hai usse jb jo krna hai vo kr skta hai.

Reporter: waise kaha hai vo???

Ankush: On his way

Scene 3
Orphanage

A BMW car stopped infront of orphanage. A young handsome boy came out of the car with a hot girl.

Girl: Yaha sd hmmari kitni yaadein juri hai hain na

Boy: Haan tanvi sahi kaha tmne

Tanvi: Kaash vo bhi hmare saath hote ritik ('😭')

Ritik: kaash huh life mein sbkch kaash hi hota hai tanvi chalo lets go in
They both entred in orphanage where they met with few childrens nd shared some happy moments. Far away frm them a girl was standing on the door. She was looking at them with hatred eyes.

Girl: Jitna hasna hai has lo qki jb main tmlogo ke life mein aaungi toh tm log hasna bhul jaoge

Ritik: Ab i think hmme chalna chahiye thank kyu ma'am aapne hmme yaha aane diye

Warden: Isme thanks ki kya baat hai har saal aap dono isi date pe Aake orphanage ke fund mein Rupees dete hai thnks toh hmme bolna chahiye.

Ritik: Lets go tanvi we are getting late for confrence

While they where going towards car ritik saw a bouquet on car. He took the boue nd their was a card on it. It was written "All The Best for today" On card. A smipe crept on his face as hi understood that she is the one , His SECRET ADMIRER.
scene4
Radio office
Shivanya: Gd mrng mumbai main hun aapki pyaari dost RJ shivanya aur aaj main bhut khush hun. Do reasons hai pehla ki aaj hmmare the famous buissness tycon Ritik raheja ka b'day hai aur dosra reason yeh hai ki aaj unka new book bhi launch hoga. So girls yahi mauka hai aaj confrence mein aap unse baatein kr skti hain aur apne dil ki baat keh skti hai so all the best.

Girl: Kitna mushkil hai na jis insaan se aap nafrat krte ho uski taarif karna

Shivanya: Exactly yrr koi kaise ritik raheja ko pasnd kr skta hai lgta hai mumbai ki saari larkiya aandhi ho gyi hai

Girl: Saari nhi sirf tm smjhi shivanya ji.
Shivanya looks on

Precap: meeting of RiVanya nd entry of shesha.



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Posted: 9 years ago
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i liked your writting..
do keep writting..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ohk so GIRL is sesha and who is admirer?? Shivanaya ya sesha?
Haila interesting update
So so so waiting for next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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lovely chapter
what ritik & tanvi parents r hiding from them? 😕
wow shivanya as RJ 😃
but why shivanya hate ritik so much? 😕
continue soon

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