Unrequited Love

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Posted: 9 years ago
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It was a blustery windy day in a forest a young woman was sitting in front of a large shivling she had offered bhelpatra and dhatura to her aaradhya. She had also decorated the shillings with Marigold and Roses.

She was in deep mediation.

Rithik was in his home in Mumbai buried deep in his work
Rithik wake up someone was shaking him in mid dream . He was picturising the woman
Rithik
What he was irritated at being woken up
You were sleeping
Not sleeping I dozed for he corrected her

Ragini what are you doing her
She was his childhood friend
I came to remind you we need to leave for your party
I'm too old to have parties
No one is old to have parties especially if he us the guest of honour and has been awarded enterpenur of the year

We need to be at your home before your family
Rithik phone bussed
Rithik you are coming aren't you
Yes Bhangu we are
We
Ragini is coming as well

Bhanu di you called me
Shivanya was at his ancestral home
Neel heart began beating he stopped talking she had the sweetest voice he had ever heard
He wanted to know who she was
He was silent for a long time
He could only hear Shivanya's voice
Rithik are you still here
Yes came the quick answer



Rithik was in a hurry to get home
Rithik yes what is it
What's wrong you are acting weird ever since you talked to your sister
I am fine
A part of him wanted to see the person with that sweet voice which he could still hear

Ragini joined him for the journey . It was a long and very quiet one
Rithik was in no mood to have a conversation with her
What he was scowling at her
Nothing
It rained and poured on the way
Strange thoughts engulfed Neelesh
He kept seeing the same girl this time he could see her big beautiful eyes.

The car screeched to a sudden halt
What happened
Tyre puncture
Drat he hit the steering wheel with his hand
Hold the torchlight for me
Rithik removed his coat and kneeled down
Point here Ragini I can't see
He pulled her arm

The wheel was changed
Ragini switch off the torch
He turned around
Ragini was inside the car
He saw Shivanya standing behind him hiding her face

Rithik sorry dad called
Need any help
No
He diverted his attention for a minute Shivanya had dissappeard
Who was she
Rithik you need to get home quickly and change out of your wet clothes

Shivanya ran to the Shiv Temple and kneeled before the statue of Lord Shiva
Help me she begged the Lord I wanted to hurt him but I stopped
Why I need answers Mahadev
The temple bells began to ring
Shivanya danced like never before
Her eyes body and soul cried out for revenge
Shiva Mahadev would be so proud of you a voice called out from the darkness

Edited by Sadhanamomo - 9 years ago

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SadhanaV thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi all

My name is Sadhana this is my new OS.
Your feedback would be highly appreciated
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow its awesome
i love that last part 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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loved it sadhu
but why u changed the names?
neel?
keep it ritik only na
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Spiritual Begining with "Shivling" n "belpatr"... rememberd my sati n her shiva :)

Contrasting situations of leads...on one side spirtualism n on otherside materialism.., but somewhere a spirtualism in that materialism...

Shivanya... that enchanting name... rithik too fell for it..

" It rained and poured on the way"

" He saw Shivanya standing behind him hiding her
face " the epitome of innocence.. Romantic Romantic...


wow!! That end!! it is like listening tandava stotra... Shivmayam...


Sadhu...nice one... u brilliantly blended many feelings n elements together...escpecially romanticism nd spiritualism...

Great :)

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