Vani FF// The Phoenix (Thread 2 Link in Pg 1) - Page 48

Originally posted by: Andetheres

Amazing update. 👏

Loved it when Veer did the last rites of markaat 😊

I think Nikhil lost his mind when he lost his throne.

Anyways waiting for his plots and plans , and how Vani teaches him lesson. And a fierce face off between them and Nikhil. 😆

The entire crazy drunken boys intruding into their in laws house 🤣 It sounded hilarious in my mind too but didn't know if it came across well. But I guess it did come out well as I intended.

Poor Bani😒 , though she tries to defend her Meera di and her stupid sisters - Mahek and Dehek. The boys would end up teasing her. 🤪

She really doesn’t have much support in her family compared to Veer , when it comes to teasing . Poor Bani.😕 Wahi toh. All her devars majorly team up with Veer when it comes to teasing her. 😆

And the combo of Bani and Balwant Singhania was so. I like how they're slowly building a stronger bond. That father-daughter bond.

The cute yet meaningful fight between Vani. 👍🏼

The face off between Shakura , Bani & Singhanias were just Mind blowing. 👏

And Bani’s Tandav and her emotions were beautifully written. 😳

Waiting to know what is going to happen in Banis house with these Drunken boys. 🤣

Poor Meera is stuck with this not so good drunken Tapish now. 😆

Your story is my stress buster , love to read anytime .⭐️

Sorry for not commenting for few days , coz now it’s Exam season , so kinda busy with exams and preparations. 😊 All the best, yaar. Give your best. I'll wait for your comments once you're free.

Waiting for the next chapters eagerly 😃

Markaat had a good way of leaving in chaos.

Wow interesting. Loved it. So so good. Mind-blowing.

Please don't torture veer. Please update soon.

Originally posted by: indigal07

I absolutely LOVE this fanfic!!!!! It's been my joy for the past several weeks reading this. You write so well and have such amazing talent! Thank you so much for taking such strong characters like Veer and Bani, and Aakesh and Naageshwari, and giving them the proper strong sensical, powerful, and strong storyline that you have given them. Such mein. Naagin 5 writers could not even do what you can do. Abh yeh hai Magic, asli Magic! 😉

I'm so addicted to this story and just can't get enough! I love all of the characters including all of the side characters. I'm so glad that Jay and Markaat are now dead. It's so fun to see the story progressing more and seeing more villains like Nikhil and who knows who else in the future. Honestly this fanfic can keep going on and I'll keep reading it. I don't even need the makers version of Naagin 5. Your story is way more epic!
Yaar, mera dil ❤️❤️ It feels really good to read that all of you enjoy the story so much that it even seems like a real version of Naagin 5

I have to say that I absolutely love the characters of Sam and Vanshika and of how you've portrayed them. I really want to see their chemistry build, a slow burn romance the way Veer and Bani's has been. Sam and Vanshika have history, there's so much potential here. I want to see their journey, and of Vanshika slowly getting over her grudges, and Sam's undying love for her, and finally her falling for him (or accepting she's fallen for him since she does love him inside). Please do show their chemistry and progression too. I love that he came into her room drunk at night. It ended at such a great part!!! Ahhhhhhhh the potentials!!!!!! I feel like creating one shots on Sam and Vanshika and they are not even original Naagin 5 characters but the way you have crafted them make them seem so real to me. Truly you have such talent!!!!! 👏👏 Oh, if you do write one shots do let me know. Would love to read them honestly. I think it is a huge compliment for me as a writer when someone the readers can bring their own imagination and pull out fanfictions of characters a writer makes. ❤️

Slow burn for Sam and Vanshika is a different thing. It had already been through that slow burn, I think it at this point where it comes out in flames.

Aur Vani ka kya bataun? Woh toh hai hi EPIC! I love the way you have progressed their storyline and each and every Vani romance scene you write touches my heart and fulfills my desires of wishing to see more romance between them. I love how they are each other's full support, how both of them and especially Bani has come into their full power. I love how Veer understands her so much, and trusts her power and fight skills. The only reason he was holding her back is because he noticed the thing about her emotions, her trauma, and he made sure he was there to help heal her before she fought Shakura herself. Damn all of that was just SO AMAZING!!!!! ❤️

Thank you so much for taking the time to write all this, for your creativity, and the absolute joy you are bringing to Vani fans! I cannot be grateful enough!!

So so eagerly waiting more updates ❤️

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OH GOD....... HOW CAN YOU WRITE SO WELL EVERYTIME.

I HAVE NO WORDS FOR WHAT I AM FEELING NOW....

LITERALLY I AM NOT ABLE TO WRITE DOWN WHAT I FELT AFTER READING THAT 2 FIRE RADIATING CHAPTERS....

IT WAS FANTABULOUS..

AJ TOH SACHI MUCHI AAG LAGA HEE DIIII........

Wahhh another amazing update...

Wonderful...

You are a amazing writer...

Continue soon...

From a story pov..this was written really well.

But personally these are the chapters I will never re read

No offense to you my dear author .this is still my favorite story but itni negativity mujhse sehi nahi jaati.

Ek toh woh farishta..the character I hate more than mukta dhond..his very presence warned me that things are not gonna be good ..but I never knew things were going to be a horror show like this...farishta torturing poor veer and nikhil cutting his wings off..wow...I can't even.

I know for every story..the villains need a small win so that hero can make a greater win later ..(I don't like this concept really but I know many great storytellers work on this.)

But after that dreadful finale that hurt us so bad in the TV.. the mere mention of farishta makes me so uncomfortable and angry.. these 2 chapters..I don't know what to say.

More power to you but I will come back to this story when things are better.

(IM NOT QUITTING..but I can't read so much negativity..aaj jitna padh liya chapter 82 83 mein..I shouldn't have.)

Originally posted by: ratna.nanda

From a story pov..this was written really well.

But personally these are the chapters I will never re read

No offense to you my dear author .this is still my favorite story but itni negativity mujhse sehi nahi jaati.

Ek toh woh farishta..the character I hate more than mukta dhond..his very presence warned me that things are not gonna be good ..but I never knew things were going to be a horror show like this...farishta torturing poor veer and nikhil cutting his wings off..wow...I can't even.

I know for every story..the villains need a small win so that hero can make a greater win later ..(I don't like this concept really but I know many great storytellers work on this.)

But after that dreadful finale that hurt us so bad in the TV.. the mere mention of farishta makes me so uncomfortable and angry.. these 2 chapters..I don't know what to say.

More power to you but I will come back to this story when things are better.

(IM NOT QUITTING..but I can't read so much negativity..aaj jitna padh liya chapter 82 83 mein..I shouldn't have.)

Well, can come back for the next update. I don't like extending such negativity too. I'm not surmounting up more of those scenes further.

But I can understand why you wouldn't want to re-read them 💔 I felt bad while writing too.

Main ek dum se darr gayi ki did I take it over-board. I took no offense but just wondered if it has become too much.

But rest assured, we're back to having them together.

I didn't comment for the previous parts because my exams are going to start real soon and was a bit busy. Loved the way you wrote each and every scene but me and negativity don't get along so well. The worst character in the naagin 5 series was the farishtha. I hate him. So I don't blame you . I love your every update. Hope to read the next part real soon.

Keep it up

Update soon

Writer ji your story is worth something precious. I love it. First thing I do after I fresh in the morning is checking if you have posted a the next parts. Today's part was a cryfest. But you haven't disappointed me. Farishta I really don't think he have a thing called 'dimag'. Uss din Bholenath agreed with Vani relation in temple. Nikhil, I love his character. I don't like the way some ff's and serial's potrays villains as weak. I am a person who love villain character. But farishta is neither positive nor negetive. It hurted me to read that they have cutted veeru's wings. How will he get his wings back. In this parts I felt sorry for Markaat. Anyway I know you will end it in a nice way. And our Vani will be back together. Death rune. Could you please explain what is this rune. I have no idea about it. I am not a person who is booked to this magics and supernatural stuffs. Plzzz. Anyway don't end this soon. I am hooked to this. Waiting for further updates

Loved loved the recent updates!! You're just phenomenal with being so descriptive, the readers can imagine everything. 🤗

And, is it just me, or do other Vani fans have some kind of PTSD when seeing Farishta? Lol the moment he came into the story I started having flashbacks of the last Naagin 5 track when all Vani dreams fell apart, a dreadful feeling this Farishta induces! I loved the writing regardless! Though I'm looking forward to seeing Farishta go.

I have to say, the last update was so painful to see Veer go through all he has. Seeing him in so much pain...gosh, he never deserved it. I want to see how the rest unfolds and how he defeats all this, whether it will be Bani who will save him ultimately or whether it will be himself despite how broken he is right now. Somehow, your versions of Veer and Bani are much stronger than the ones in the show, and honestly your versions of them are how I feel like the show versions should have been--really strong.

Really looking forward to more! Update when you can please ❤️