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Posted: 4 years ago

You have sheer talent gurl!!👏

Soo gripping and riveting. I am obsessed with this story.. literally obsessed. As someone before also said it, this is what the real n5 should've been like.

Ik you put in updates after 2-3 days (and i get it also, it takes time, effort and emotion to get everything right in the story) but still like a freaking ritual I'll refresh your page 2-3 times every night.🤣

Sam and his quips😆 boy, you'll have to deal with Mayank Vashisth for your whole life. Their conversations are soo fascinating. People rarely stand up to mayank and here in a short span of time he's met singhania's and bani, who don't just stand up to him but give it back ten folds.😆


Farishta... I've got a deep dislike to this word...ughh. I'll be honest, when i read the first few lines of fauxrishta's entry. I was all ready to jump on your bones and be like nooo, you and I had a deal. We don't bring stuff like that here🥺🥺

Then, i calmed down and realized it's you and you've never disappointed me. Hell, you killed off Jaaiii.😆you didn't bring him for fun and games..you bought him for punishment.😡 That he never got in the show.

It truly is right, isn't it...arrogance leads to downfall. Ghamand insaan ka dimaag kharaab kr deta hai. And apparently farishton ka bhi!!🙂

His arrogance over the fact that he is a divine being is gonna get him killed and punished. The way he was so surprised that veer and sam were able to resist him. I wanna see the look on his face when he realises what a blunder he's committed.

Nikhil parikshit was a thorn that vani and singhania's underestimated. And it bit them back in the ass good🙂

Nikhil might not have the power but he was devious enough to bring in who had the power plus reason *however twisted* to kill veeranshu. Not just kill but torture him.

Farishta had my blood boiling. Just a small request, let his punishment be as painful as his torture to veer is. You're a freaking divine being. Hell, even demons have morals higher than you.

Farishta isn't punishing veeranshu, he's torturing him...If he came to punish him, then kill him na. Get it over with. Why the fu*k are you playing with him. What happiness did you get to see him cry out for bani and break down.

Isn't veeranshu supposed to be the one who enjoys torture and killing. After all, he is the crazy one. He has the death rune. But he didn't play with markaat, markaat's death might have been brutual but it wasn't fun for veeranshu unlike this f**king farishta.

I want bani to go absolutely mad with rage, no control whatsoever when sees what they've done to veeranshu. Veer once called her adishakti. Time for her to become rudra kali. Give them the kind of punishment that they deserve and more than nikhil, it is farishta who needs a brutual and deserving death.

Cheelu baby, just a little time more, a little more patience. Your naagin sweetheart is here. And trust me, she's gonna make it alright for you. When you killed markaat, she did tell you na, that she's isn't going to let anyone snatch you away from her, not even you yourself.

Don't veeranshu, don't sympathize with markaat, love. He did what he did due to greed. And you, you're the most selfless person I've ever seen.

Your pain and his pain are not equal. What he got wasn't pain, he got punishment.

Veer's pain has reached a level of agony where he's losing sense of right and wrong. Right now, all he can feel is pain. The kind of pain he doesn't have energy to bear. The emotional trauma is going to be the hardest to get over. That feeling of losing your loved ones, that fear will never go away. Even after knowing it's false, Veeranshu will have a severe case of PTSD. Something that not even Markaat's possesion of his body led to.

And Bani's mental breakdown over seeing her husband like this is yet to come. 😭 She'll have to be the strong one now, handle veer and herself as well. Till now Veer has provided her a shoulder to lean on, now it's her turn to bear the weight.


Ps. As a reader and a vani lover, i hope hope hope that veer will get his wings back. Idc how, let narayan or bholenath give him a boon. Maybe he'll heal because his wings came due to garud's pankh. Id how, but please let him be okay!!🥺

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Dmad

You have sheer talent gurl!!👏

Soo gripping and riveting. I am obsessed with this story.. literally obsessed. As someone before also said it, this is what the real n5 should've been like.

Ik you put in updates after 2-3 days (and i get it also, it takes time, effort and emotion to get everything right in the story) but still like a freaking ritual I'll refresh your page 2-3 times every night.🤣

Sam and his quips😆 boy, you'll have to deal with Mayank Vashisth for your whole life. Their conversations are soo fascinating. People rarely stand up to mayank and here in a short span of time he's met singhania's and bani, who don't just stand up to him but give it back ten folds.😆


Farishta... I've got a deep dislike to this word...ughh. I'll be honest, when i read the first few lines of fauxrishta's entry. I was all ready to jump on your bones and be like nooo, you and I had a deal. We don't bring stuff like that here🥺🥺

Then, i calmed down and realized it's you and you've never disappointed me. Hell, you killed off Jaaiii.😆you didn't bring him for fun and games..you bought him for punishment.😡 That he never got in the show.

It truly is right, isn't it...arrogance leads to downfall. Ghamand insaan ka dimaag kharaab kr deta hai. And apparently farishton ka bhi!!🙂

His arrogance over the fact that he is a divine being is gonna get him killed and punished. The way he was so surprised that veer and sam were able to resist him. I wanna see the look on his face when he realises what a blunder he's committed.

Nikhil parikshit was a thorn that vani and singhania's underestimated. And it bit them back in the ass good🙂

Nikhil might not have the power but he was devious enough to bring in who had the power plus reason *however twisted* to kill veeranshu. Not just kill but torture him.

Farishta had my blood boiling. Just a small request, let his punishment be as painful as his torture to veer is. You're a freaking divine being. Hell, even demons have morals higher than you.

Farishta isn't punishing veeranshu, he's torturing him...If he came to punish him, then kill him na. Get it over with. Why the fu*k are you playing with him. What happiness did you get to see him cry out for bani and break down.

Isn't veeranshu supposed to be the one who enjoys torture and killing. After all, he is the crazy one. He has the death rune. But he didn't play with markaat, markaat's death might have been brutual but it wasn't fun for veeranshu unlike this f**king farishta.

I want bani to go absolutely mad with rage, no control whatsoever when sees what they've done to veeranshu. Veer once called her adishakti. Time for her to become rudra kali. Give them the kind of punishment that they deserve and more than nikhil, it is farishta who needs a brutual and deserving death.

Cheelu baby, just a little time more, a little more patience. Your naagin sweetheart is here. And trust me, she's gonna make it alright for you. When you killed markaat, she did tell you na, that she's isn't going to let anyone snatch you away from her, not even you yourself.

Don't veeranshu, don't sympathize with markaat, love. He did what he did due to greed. And you, you're the most selfless person I've ever seen.

Your pain and his pain are not equal. What he got wasn't pain, he got punishment.

Veer's pain has reached a level of agony where he's losing sense of right and wrong. Right now, all he can feel is pain. The kind of pain he doesn't have energy to bear. The emotional trauma is going to be the hardest to get over. That feeling of losing your loved ones, that fear will never go away. Even after knowing it's false, Veeranshu will have a severe case of PTSD. Something that not even Markaat's possesion of his body led to.

And Bani's mental breakdown over seeing her husband like this is yet to come. 😭 She'll have to be the strong one now, handle veer and herself as well. Till now Veer has provided her a shoulder to lean on, now it's her turn to bear the weight.


Ps. As a reader and a vani lover, i hope hope hope that veer will get his wings back. Idc how, let narayan or bholenath give him a boon. Maybe he'll heal because his wings came due to garud's pankh. Id how, but please let him be okay!!🥺

Seriously dear this was the same reaction that I went through hats off to you for pinning this all down 👏

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Posted: 4 years ago

Please Update the Story Ally Mam.

It's three days now you haven't published the parts.

Bahut excitement ho raha hai ab tooh 🔥💯

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Chapter 84


The property of the colour red is that it is visible from far away. The red colour of blood is visible from far away as well.

“Veer!!!” Balwant shouted. Bani froze at the sight. He was bleeding. Balwant and Daksh ran up towards Veer. Bani stumbled a bit. Slowly making her way towards the place. Bani’s eyes fell on the wings that were laying. Already begun to be attacked by flies. Bani winced. She knew how important his wings were to him.

Balwant touched him. Veer growled loudly. He jumped up and kicked his leg. Balwant barely escaped the kick.

“Veer, dekh sabh theek ho jaayega. Hum tujhe yahan se nikaalne aaye hai.”

“Veeranshu yahan se nahi nikal paayega.”

Bani turned around. The ground shook at her temper. Her eyes were enough of proof of her capable temper.

“Tum mere saamne aane ki himmat mat karna.” Bani hissed.

“Isse wahi saza mil rahi hai jo Markaat ko mili thi.”

“Tum hote kon ho koi bhi judgement pass karne wale? Tum farishte ho. Unke kahe gaye kaam karo. Apna alag se dimaag mat lagao. Jab situations samajhne ki akal na toh akal nahi lagani chahiye. Utna hi karo jitna kaha gaya ho. No one made you the authority to pass judgement on what is wrong and what is right.”

“Veeranshu kisi ko bhi nahi sun sakta. Tumhe bhi nahi. Uss andhere mein bandh hai jahan se use tumhari Roshni bhi nahi nikal sakti.”

Bani balled her fists. She wanted to desperately kill him right there. Her blood-red scales flashed. The ground shook at her temper. A small fissure was created on the ground inside the volcano and hot lava erupted from it. Farishta jumped off at right time. He looked at Bani.

“Main naagon ke baare mein sochta hun. Pure naagvansh ke baare mein.”

“Just shut up. Maine tumse tumhari madad maangi hai kya? Chale aaye muh uthake apni akal lagane. Pata nahi tum khud ko samajhte kya ho kyuki sahi toh tum ho nahi. Apne naagvansh ka sahi galat samajhne ki samajh hai mujh mein. Aadhi cheezein samajh ke chale aaye.”

“Tum pachtaogi, Naagin.”

“Pachata toh rahi hun. Ki tumhe Veeranshu ke paas bhi aane diya.”

“Abhi koi matlab nahi hai. Veeranshu kisi ko sun nahi sakta. Dekh nahi sakta.”

Bani walked up to Veer. She had faith that he could mistake anyone but not her.

“Veeranshu…” Bani tried to tell him. At the touch, Veer reacted by moving violently. Balwant quickly pulled her away.

“Main warn kar raha hun. Don’t. Touch. Me.” Veer growled aggressively. Bani could feel how much he was in pain. All of that pain was coming out as anger and aggression. Bani could feel the madness seeping into his mind. Slowly descending into chaos. Five days.

“Bani, nahi recognize kar pa raha hai.”

“Koi kuch nahi kar rakta. Main bhi apne jaadu ko nahi tod sakta.”

“Daddyji, please kuch toh karna padega. Mujhe nahi fark padta agar Veeranshu mujhe hurt bhi kare par use dard ho raha hai. Uss dard ki wajah se kuch samajh nahi aa raha use.” Bani tried to explain to Balwant.

“Bani, Veer ko pehle yahan se nikalna hoga.” Balwant tried to tell her.

“Nahi nikal sakte. Narayan ke jaadu se jude hai. Koi nahi tod sakta hai.”

Veer started moving violently. His energy breaking out. It was the sign of his madness. The death rune was taking over slowly as the pain subdued Veer’s own inner strength.

“Veeranshu, nahi. Aise nahi haar sakte tum. Tumne mujhse kaha tha pehle. Ki zaroori nahi hai ki sirf dikhe. Aankhen band karke bhi mehsoos ho jaata hai. Main jitna tumse pyaar karti hun usse 10,000 divya varsh zyaada tumne mujhse pyaar kiya toh mujhe kaise nahi pehchaan paaoge. Ek baar mehsoos karke toh dekho.”

The pain was seeping in and adding to the already uncontrolled chaotic nature of death rune. Veer could almost feel the slipping sanity.

When Bani felt that he couldn’t hear her, she started worrying. It seemed impossible that anyone could reach into his mind. He was stuck in the darkness that was just expanding into madness.

“Andhera chahe jitna bhi gehra kyu na ho, Roshni ki choti si kiran bhi use khatam kar deti hai.” Bani tried not to give up. She closed her eyes. The peacock feather fell on her hands. A spark crackled. It was like a small jolt of electricity. Her scales emerged. Blue-black patches appeared on the scale. While generally, the scales just flashed, this time, it didn’t disappear. It stayed. Her snakeskin appearing instead of the human skin.

“Bha…bhabhi…” Daksh moved a bit back from Bani.

“Kya hua?” Bani asked. The sun flashed over her. The shadow showed a silhouette of the seven hooded snake. After a moment, it disappeared. Bani looked at the peacock feather. Bani closed her eyes.

The sight of the idol of Narayan laying over Sheshnaag flashed in her mind. Bani realized what he was trying to tell her. Bani touched the chains. She took a deep breath and tried to gather all her strength. She gripped the chains tightly. With all the strength she could master, Bani tugged the chains.

“Bani, kya kar rahi ho. Nahi hoga.” Balwant tried to tell her.

“Naagin, tumhe pata nahi kya akal mil gayi hai ki ise todne ki koshish kar rahi ho.”

Farishta thought she had gone mad. Then the chains creaked. Three of them stood in shock. Farishta was flabbergasted. She panted. In her human form, it has to be impossible. Bani stepped back and took her Naagin form. 26 feet long cobra. There was black and blue coloration on her regular blood-red scales. The coils surrounded the chain and tried to break them. After a while of tugging the chains, they broke.

The ground shook. Everyone lost their balance and fell down. She was injured. The way she tightly gripped the chains, a bit of her skin was torn. It burned with pain but Bani turned to Veer. Bani saw that madness in his eyes. He was going rip apart everyone.

The growl was animalistic. Veer couldn’t see anyone or hear them. He could only feel the presence of people around. The death rune was seeping in with the madness.

Those who wanted to hurt him tore apart his wings but forgot he had claws. The claws came out. Just as how aggressive a bird is with its wings clipped, Veer attacked viciously anyone who came in 2 meters of his distance.

“Dekho. Yeh hai tumhara pati. Isiliye ise bandh karke rakha tha.” Farishta taunted.

“Veeranshu sanki tha, pagal tha but mentally unstable use tumne banaya hai. Jabse Markaat ko maara hai tabse yeh death rune uske haath pe aa raha tha. Us waqt kaafi acche se control kar paa raha tha. Koi problem nahi ho rahi. Tumhari wajah se aaj sabhi maut aayi hai. Veeranshu ko pata hai khud ko kabh aur kaise control karna hai. Sanki toh humesha se hi tha par logo ko maarta nahi phir raha tha. Apni hadd bohot acche se jaanta hai. Tumhari meherbani hui aur hum sabh maare jaayenge.”

“Mujhe nahi. Usmein woh janwar hai.”

“Janwar mujh mein bhi hai. What part of ‘half-snake’ do you not understand? The whole point of being icchadhari cheel is ki woh cheel hai jo insaan ban sakta hai. Uska mental balance tumne kharab kiya hai. Itna torture karoge toh koi bhi mentally unstable ho jaayega.”

“Quite definitely ending in the carnage.” Daksh agreed.

Farishta tried to be over smart and attacked Veer. The vicious eagle inside Veer wasn’t something that Farishta could handle. He started tearing apart Farishta with his blood. Farishta’s blood spilled over Veer. The blood started to feed on the death rune. He would have killed Farishta.

Bani quickly turned into her Naagin form and coiled over Veer tightly, restricting movement. Veer put all his strength to free himself. It felt like he had just come free and once again was in chains. Bani felt bad doing it but she had to control Veer. Bani faced Veer.

She knew a way to subdue Veer but didn’t know if she should do it. She was hesitant.

“Bani, agar tumhare paas koi tareeka hai Veer ko rokne ka toh karo. Iss waqt Veer ko control karna zyaada important hai.” Balwant assured Bani. Bani hissed and her snake form dug its fangs in Veer’s shoulder. Veer was immune to her poison but she knew just the amount that would knock him unconscious.

After a few moments, Veer stopped struggled. “Bani…” Veer whispered as he started going unconscious. A part of his sanity knew that if there is any snake in the world that would be able to bite him and slowly slip him unconscious, it has to be Bani. No one knew about venom and poisons better than her.

Farishta just looked at the two. The amount of trust that Veer had in Bani to fall off unconscious without hurting her. Farishta faced the brunt of those claws. They can cut through scales like a knife through a piece of cake. Bani uncoiled himself.

“Veeranshu ko bahar le chalte hai.” Bani told Balwant and Daksh. The two picked up Veer.

Bani turned around to look at Farishta. He naagin eyes staring through him. “Mujhe Bholenath ki kasam hai. Agar Veeranshu theek nahi hua toh tum jahan bhi chupne chale jaao, wahan aake tumhari jaan le lungi. Mujhe nahi fark padta agar uske baad mujhe Bholenath 10,000 divya varsh aur shraap de. Par agar Veeranshu theek nahi hua toh tumhe zinda nahi chodungi.”

“Main tumhara dushman nahi hun.”

Bani pointed out the ring she wore.

“Jab tak yeh ring mere ungli pe hai, tabh tak woh har vyakti jo Veeranshu ka dushman hai woh mera dushman hai. Main tumhe abhi isiliye nahi maar rahi kyuki tumhe toh Veeranshu hi maarge. Jo tumne uske saath kiya, uske baad tumhe maarne ka haq toh Veeranshu ke paas hai.”

“Yeh tumhara saathi nahi tha. Isne Jay ko maar diya hai. Adi-Naag ko.”

“Jab baat pata nahi ho toh muh band hi rakhna chahiye. Syllabus pata hai nahi par muh uthaaye exam dene chale aaye.”

“Naagin, tum -”

“Tum mujhe kuch bhi samjhane ka haq kho chuke ho toh tum apna muh band hi rakho. Interest hai nahi tumse baat karne mein. Tumne jo kiya hai Veeranshu ke saath, uske baad tum toh Farishta kehlane ke layak bhi nahi ho.”

They all left the volcano. Bani decided the safe place for Veer was the temple till he doesn’t get better. His cheel powers are subdued here. Till she finds a way to heal Veer, she thought that this is the only place she can make sure Veer doesn’t break out into the madness. The fact that he said her name was enough proof for her that her Veer was still there inside that intense pain and madness.

Bani could heal but she had no idea if her powers could regrow his wings.

“Daddyji, Veer ko yahan rakhiye.” Bani told him. Balwant put Veer down. She had to clean the wounds. Bani winced at sight of his wound. She couldn’t even imagine how much it must have pained. Bani cleaned the wounds. The bleeding went on. It was a wonder that he hadn’t died from the blood loss. His body shook at the pain as she tried to clean the wounds.

“Bas… bas theek hi ho jaayega.” Bani assured. She kissed his head. She couldn’t hold back her tears at the sight of his state. Her own naagin powers are subdued when she is inside the temple.

Farishta couldn’t understand how Adi-Naagin had fallen so deeply in love with her. Someone who was gifted with light walked right into the darkness that Veer held. The way Adi-Naagin who had killed him in their previous life was now the biggest shield for him.

He hadn’t realized just how powerful Adi-Naagin was in this life. He still couldn’t understand how she broke the chains.

Bani could almost feel how much pain he was in. Veer was almost losing it. All alone in the dark. It didn’t help that he couldn’t see or hear her. She had no idea how to reach him when he was completely out of his senses. The torture had poured him into a state where he would react violently to anyone touching him.

His mind was in chaos. He couldn’t get that sight out of his mind. He was dreading it so badly that he wanted to run away. He hadn’t been able to forget the sight of his mother’s killing and the old wounds had come up scraping with this torture.

He got up and started throwing anything that was around him. He just wanted it to stop. Veer couldn’t the temple. He couldn’t see the idol. He couldn’t see Bani, Balwant, or Daksh. Anyone who came close to him was thrown away. The sight Farishta embedded before his eyes were driving him insane.

“Please. Nahi… please…” Veer almost broke into tears. He wanted it to stop. He couldn’t hear anything. In the deafening silence, Veer heard someone playing a flute. He stood up. The flute was beautiful like it tore through the silence and madness.

“Veeranshu…” Bani couldn’t understand. He wasn’t breaking out into a fit anymore. No one else could hear it except Bani.

The flute music had a calming effect. He heard the familiar whistling of the bird. They sang in the background of the tune. Veer tripped over the way as he walked outside. Around in the garden. It was calming. Like slowly soothing his pain. Veer was shaking slightly.

“Jab peeda adhik ho toh samaksh khade apne bhi pehchaan mein nahi aate.” Veer knew only one person with that beautiful voice. His voice was still the same. Same yellow clothing. He was sitting on a branch of the tree that Aakesh used to climb. He swung his leg in the air.

“Tum? Nahi… please jaao. Warna jaldi hi tumhe marta hua dekhunga. Abh aur nahi dekhna.” Veer was almost begging.

“Keh rahe ho jaau par sunayi aa raha hai ki mat jaao…” He pointed out. Veer saw the bird. It flew and sat on Narayan’s shoulder. Not that Veer could recognize him. Veer slowly walked towards him. He saw his own family dead and he desperately wanted to get away from all this.

“Please ise hatao mere saamne se.” Veer cried.

“Yeh kisi aur ka jaadu nahi, tumhara apna bhay hai, Veeranshu. Tumhe swayam yeh baat gyaat hai ki tum iss jaadu se nikal sakte ho par tumhara bhay tumhe rok raha hai.”

“Main kyu darunga kisi se?”

“Kisi aur se nahi, Veeranshu. Khud se bhay hai. Bhay ki tum bhi Markaat ki tarah ban jaaoge.” He jumped off the tree. “Tumhara bhay aur tumhari peeda. Dono se alag nahi ho paa rahe abhi. Pehle dono hi alag the. Peeda toh bohot samay se thi. Jabse tumne apni maa ko khoya hai tabse. Apne andar hi rakhe hue ho.”

“Nahi, aisa nahi hai.”

Veer tried to be in denial. Narayan sat down next to Veer. He looked at Veer with a smile. He was a stubborn little eagle. He had understood Veer really well. All the pain had blocked his mind. He had already been in pain before. He had seen so many of naag naagin killing his mother. He lost his mother and the baby she was carrying. Then the pain of his brother’s state. Veer blamed himself. Teer had taken that attack for him and went out of control. Then his chachi left. Family life was deteriorating. His early childhood had pain. Then Chandrakala. To know everything that he thought about her was a big fat lie.

“Pehle kuch kha lo.” Narayan offered him some food. Veer couldn’t see out of the trap that Farishta had thrown at him. Veer ate hungrily.

“Aisa lag raha hai ki maine sabh galat kiya hai woh…” He pointed up at the sky, “Interest mein saza de raha hai.”

Narayan looked at the injury on Veer’s back. The pain wasn’t letting him use his own mental strength.

An arrow was shot at Veer. Nikhil was outside the temple premises. Veer hadn’t seen it coming. It whizzed towards Veer but Narayan caught it in the middle of the air before it reached Veer. Veer looked up. Narayan just nodded his head and smiled at him.

“Jab itna soch liya toh yeh bhi socha hoga kis galti ki saza mili hai?”

“Shayad kyuki main Bani ki tarah itni pooja ya itne acche kaam nahi karta. Itne waqt tak wahan raha tha Markaat. Abh toh us par daya aati hai. Lagta hai ki shayad use nahi marna chahiye tha.”

Veer offered Narayan a few fruits. Narayan smiled at that. He was hungry. Almost starving but still offered someone else a part of his food. He took an apple.

“Ya phir aisa kuch hai nahi bas tum soch rahe ho.Yeh tumhari saza nahi kisi aur ka karm hai.”

Veer was eating and Narayan blocked every single weapon Nikhil could throw at Veer.

“Farishta…” Veer chuckled at that thought. “He seems a fake one at that. Na toh uske paas angel jaise wings hai na hi halo hai. Waste. Khud ko pankh nahi mile toh mere cheen liye.”

When Veer finally ate, Narayan offered him some water.

“Paani pi lo.” He drank water.

“Thanks.”

He knew better than anyone that Veer just tries to brush aside things that hurt him. He’d brush it off with a joke.

“Jab tak mann se dard nahi hataoge, tabh tak theek nahi ho paaoge.”

Veer’s eyes would go on the torturous sight and he would feel the same pain.

“Tum isse lad sakte ho, Veeranshu. Bas vishwas karna aawasyak hai.”

Veer held his own head, shouting to making it stop. He wanted the sight to be taken away.

“Please ise roko.”

“Tumhari maa ke saath tumhare behen ki bhi mrityu hui thi. Uska dard. Tumhare chachi ke chale jaane ka dard. Tumhare do bhaiyo ki mrityu ka dard.Jise apni maa mana hai uske jhoot ka dard. Sabhi ek saath bhar liya hai. Bahar toh nikalna hoga use, Veeranshu.”

“Mujhe sirf iss sabh se dur jaana hai.”

“Bhaag nahi sakte, Veeranshu.”

“Mujhe ise face bhi nahi karna hai. Saan ruk jaati hai. Baar baa rise dekhta hun toh khud pe gussa aane lagta hai. Control phisalta jaata hai. Aisa lagta hai ki kisi ki jaan hi le lunga.”

“Veeranshu, ek baat batao. Jitna bhog tum utha ke udd sakte ho usse zyaada bhoj uthaoge toh kaise udd paaoge?”

The thing that differentiated Markaat and Veer was his ability to understand. Aakesh had the capacity to stop, listen, think and understand. His desire to truly reach the light set him apart from every Cheel in the world. It was why Narayan had chosen Aakesh to stand up to Markaat. This ability to make the conscious right choice was stronger in Veer. He knew Veer was tired and in a lot of pain. That made him feel weak. That pain had to leave for him to stand strong again.

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Chapter 85


Bani turned to the idol. She wiped away her tears.

“Narayan, aapko toh pata hai. Aap mujhse zyaada jaante Veeranshu. Jab mujhe yakeen nahi tha uspar us waqt bhi aapko yakeen tha Veeranshu par. Mujhe pata hai. Andhera chahe kitna ghana ho, chahe kisi ka jaadu kitna bhi shaktishaali kyu na ho, aapke tej ko nahi rok sakta. Surya ke tej mein aap hai. Chaand ki thandak mein bhi aap hai. Ghane andhere mein bhi aap hai aur Roshni mein bhi aap hai.” Bani prayed to him.

Balwant put his hand on her shoulder.

“Bani, Veer mera beta hai. Mujhe pata hai. Agar koi hai jo maut ko hara ke laut aaye toh mera Veer hai. Tum dekhna. Humesha ki tarah sabko pareshaan karne ke baad laut aayega. Phir hasega aur kahega ki hum sabh pagal hai.”

“Bhabhi, I know Veer bhai theek ho jaayenge.”

Bani walked out looking for Veer. She saw him against a tree. He was corner. Almost like moving away from everyone. Bani had hurt him beyond her imagination but not even once had Veer shed tears or complained. No matter how much pain he was going through, he never broke down but now, looking at him, Bani could only imagine how much pain he was in. For Veer to actually lose his calm and break out into fits. It was a whiplash. Veer trying to control that murderous urge and him feeling even more pain.

“Veeranshu…” Bani tried.

Narayan turned and saw Bani. He smiled. Bani’s habit of not giving up until she has reached her goal made him believe in her to be Veer’s perfect half. He was the most stubborn soul he had come across. If there was anyone who could match that determination, it was Bani. While snakes were notoriously famous for quickly changing their minds, Bani was stead fast on her ground. Once she’s made her decision to stand by someone, she would do it till the end of the world.

Farishta tried to stop Bani but his magic didn’t work. He looked at himself. He couldn’t control anyone or anything.

“Kya kar rahe ho? Roko. Main Veeranshu ko marne ki koshish kar raha hun par pata nahi kaise woh bach raha hai.” Nikhil complained.

“Mera jaadu kaam nahi kar raha.”

“Haan. Yeh Narayan ka mandir. Yahan na toh naagon ki shaktiya hoti hai na hi cheelon ki. Sabh hi yahan normal insaan hote hai.”

“Main aam insaan nahi ho. Mujh mein insaan ka hissa nahi hai. Main farishta hun. Sar se leke pair tak sirf farishta hun. Swarg mein hi janam hua hai mera. Mera jaadu kaam karta hai. Hume kahin bhi jaadu karne se nahi rok sakte hai.”

The only answer was that his magic was gone. Farishta couldn’t understand why. There was no one else who could take away his magic but the Gods. That’s where his magic came from.

Nikhil groaned at Farishta. He should have taken help from someone who is stronger in their resolve. This Farishta seemed to be more bothered for his magic than the job. He had so well managed to manipulate Farishta into believing that Veer had very skilfully manipulated Bani into believing he truly loved her. He had told Farishta about how Veer had killed Jay. Very cleverly skipping the part where Jay had threatened to kill Veer and Meera. He told Farishta about Veer and Shakura’s match. Cutting out the part that the one to do the killing was Bani. All of this was done in a well-planned manner but now Nikhil felt like it was going to waste.

“Bas? Itna hi dam hai tum mein? Veer ko uske galtiyo ki saza dene ki determination khatam? Mujhe laga ki ek farishte mein isse zyada dam hoga. Tum bhi unn naagon ki tarah hi nikle. Phuski bomb ki tarah.”

“Tumhari samajh ke bahar hai. Agar meri shaktiya chali gayi hai toh iska matlab hai ki mujhe saza mili hai kisi baat ki.”

“Tumhe saza dena hai.”

Farishta turned to the idol of Narayan. He couldn’t understand. Did Narayan take away his powers? He couldn’t understand why. Veer was a cheel. That too a cheel who had done so many wrongs. He had killed a naag. He had killed his own kind.

“Kis baat ki saza hai yeh?”

“Iss baat ki saza hai ki tumne ek bekasur ko itni badi saza di hai.” Bani answered. There was so much anger and bitterness in her for this so-called angel.

“Woh bekasur nahi tha. Cheel tha. Cheel hote hi hai knoch khaane wale.”

“Veeranshu ko janam mila hi Markaat ko marne ke liye. Use Narayan banaya hi isiliye tha ki woh Markaat ko haraye. Par yeh baat na tum nahi samjhoge.”

“Naagin, pyaar mein tum andhi ho sakti ho. Main nahi.”

“Tum baat kar rahe ho Jay ko marne ki? Toh uski shuruat maine ki thi. Maine uske venom glands ko injure kiya tha. Pure naagvansh ki jaan khatre mein daal diya tha Jay ne. Kitne hi cheel jo Markaat ke liye kaam karte the, Naagvansh ke chaukhat tak aagaye the. Jay le aaya tha unhe. Jay aur Chandrakala. Naagmani ko Jay ke haath lagne se Veeranshu ne roka tha. Agar jaise tum keh rahe ho, Veeranshu bura hota toh kabhi Naagmani nahi lauta ta. Apne hi paas rakhta aur sabhko yahi lagta ki Naagmani Jay ke paas hai. Aur Naagmani kisi ki bhi baat nahi suntan.”

Farishta just looked astonished.

“Tumhari galti ki bharpaayi mujhe bhi karni pad rahi hai. Meri kya galti thi ki tumne mujhe mere pati ko cheen liya? Aur yeh batao aisa kya hi kar diya tha Veeranshu ne ki tumne usi itni badi saza de di? Tum bhi acche se jaante the ki Markaat koi accha nahi tha ki use marne ki saza di ho tumne. Jay ne bhi koi bohot accha nahi kiya Naagvansh ke liye ki tum use saza de diye. Uske pankh nikaal liye tumne aur itna torture kiya hai ki use na toh kuch feel ho raha hai na toh samajh paa raha hai. Warna zindagi mein aisa kabhi nahi hua hai ki Veeranshu ne mujhe nahi pehchana na ho.”

She was boiling with anger.

“Farishte kehlaane ke laayak hi nahi ho tum. Tumse zyaada toh rakshas better the. Veeranshu sanki tha phir bhi usne tak kabhi kisi ke aise pankh nahi cheen liye. Tum aaye the use maarne ke liye but tumne toh use itna torture kiya hai ki woh pagal hi ho gaya hai. Koi bhi uske aas paas jaaye toh uspar attack kar raha hai. Itni chot pohochayi hai use ki puri tarah toot gaya hai. Maine use bohot dard diya hai. Uska dil itni baad toda hai par ek baar bhi uske aankhon se aansu nahi aaye ya toota nahi par tumne use itna torture kiya hai ki toot gaya hai. Cheelon ko bura keh rahe ho par tumse toh better cheel hai. Markaat khud tak kisi ke family ko aade rakh ke torture nahi karta tha. Tum toh usse bhi zyaada nikle.”

“Adi-Naagin, tum mujhe galat samajh rahi ho.”

“Tum galat ho. Jo tumhare saath hua hai yeh toh phir bhi bohot kam saza hai. Apne ghamand mein tum khud ko hi judge bana baithe. Veeranshu andhere mein rehta tha par khud andhera nahi tha. Nageshwari ne Aakesh ko maar diya uske kuch pal baad hi Bholenath ne saza di kyuki galti hui thi. Toh mera Veeranshu se pyaar karna galat hota toh iss baar saza nahi dete? Kya hi zaroorat pad gayi tumhe khud decide karne ki?”

“Veeranshu -”

“Naam mat lena apne muh se uska.” Bani’s outburst was filled with rage. “Khud ko naagvansh ke well-wished kehte ho, usko maut ke muh mein tumne hi dhakela hai. Agar abh Veeranshu theek nahi hua toh death rune uspar control karlega. Uske baad toh main bhi nahi bacha paaungi Naagvansh ko. Saare naagvansh ko ek hi baar mein khatam kar sakta hai. Tum Veeranshu ko underestimate kar sakte ho main nahi karti. Veeranshu khud ko bohot acche se control karta hai par tumne…” Bani pushed Farishta, “Tumne use itna mentally torture kiya hai ki aisi halat ho gayi hai uski.”

“Ise toh main nahi chodunga. Isne hi kiya hai yeh sabh mere bete ke saath.” Balwant growled. He grabbed Farishta. Balwant punched Farishta hard on his face. Farishta fell down. Balwant had broke into his rage. He grabbed Farishta and threw him against the wall of the temple. Having lost his magic, he couldn’t use them to win against Balwant. Balwant kicked him in the gut and crashed him against a pillar.

Nikhil tried to intervene but Daksh punched him.

“Tujhe toh Veer bhai aisi saza denge ki agle 10,000 janam tak tu yaad rakhega. Bohot halke mein le liye tujhe.” Daksh growled.

“Tu abhi theek karega Veer ko.” Balwant growled at Farishta.

“Daddyji, yeh abhi kuch nahi kar sakta. Inke jaadu kuch aise hi hote hai. Wapas nahi le sakte hai.” Bani explained. Bani picked up and pot and hurled it against the wall angrily.

“Use sirf wahi mil raha hai jo usne -” Bani didn’t let Farishta complete his sentence. He had grabbed his throat and pushed him against the wall.

“Main aakhri baar warn kar rahi hun. Tumhe koi haq nahi hai Veeranshu ke baare mein kuch bhi kehne ka. Tum uska naam bhi lene ke layak nahi hai toh better tumhare liye yahi hoga ki tum chup raho. Warna pata chala ki tumhare shaktiyo ke saath saath zindagi bhi chali jaaye. Logo ko torture karte phirte ho na, main bhi batati hun ki torture kaise lagta hai. Uksaao mat mujhe.”

Farishta pushed away Bani. Daksh punched him in the face harder. Balwant and Pawan both tied up Farishta and Nikhil and put them in two different corners of the temple. Neither of them could help each other.

Bani looked at the idol.

“Kuch bhi samajh nahi aa raha ki kya karun.” Bani almost was in tears.

Narayan looked at Veer. He had never seen a creature of his kind. The only way he’d describe Veer is a creature. He wasn’t so human as to call him a human. He wasn’t animal enough to call him an animal. That is how shapeshifters in general are. Narayan knew he was tired of the dark. The Prince of Darkness felt tired of the dark now. It was the testament of the pain he was bearing. It was a wonder that Veer hadn’t lost control of himself till now. He sat next to Veer.

“Mann mein jo hai use nikaaloge nahi toh udoge kaise?”

“Pankh nikaal liye hai mere. Udna toh bas sapna hai abh.”

Veer looked up at the sky. He felt like a clipped bird. Someone whose wings were clipped. The love for the sky felt like unrequited love at this point. He can’t reach the sky.

“Veeranshu, suno. Mann ki peeda ko ashruo mein baha dena chahiye. Bachpan se leke aaj tak ashru bahaye hi nahi hai peeda ke. Uss har baat ki peeda jo tumhe andar hi andar khaaye jaa rahi hai.”

“Aur kya hi kahu main. Mere aankho ke saamne mere saare apne mare hue hai.”

“Jaise ghrina aur prem mein ek lakeer ka antar hota hai, waise hi maya aur satya mein ek hi lakeer ka hi antar hota hai. Gyaat hi nahi hota ki kabhi satya se maya ki taraf chal rahe hai. Ghrina se kabh prem ki or badh rahe hai yeh gyaat nahi hota parantu prem se ghrina ki or jab badh rahe ho tabh gyaat hota hai. Ussi prakar se kabh satya se maya ki or badh rahe hai gyaat nahi hota parantu maya se satya ki or badh rahe ho toh pata chal jaata hai.”

“Difference hi pata nahi chal raha. Kabhi itna helpless feel nahi kiya hai. Mujhe humesha se lagta tha ki main har cheez kar sakta hun. There’s nothing I can’t do. Pura aasmaan mere saamne jhukta hai. Mom bhi humesha hi kehti thi ki aisa kuch nahi hai jo main nahi kar sakta. Bohot confidence rehta tha iss baat ka. Abh aisa lagta hai ki nahi kar paaunga.”

Narayan gave him a dupatta. It was a really old one. Veer didn’t know how it got here. It was Ishana’s dupatta. Teer and him were painting a dupatta for her. They wanted to give it to her as a gift. Teer’s excellent painting skills and his own decorating part. Not the most beautiful looking one.

A peach dupatta with small floral designs on it. Veer had tried his own fingerpainting. A 5-year-old Veer was super proud of his art work. The smile on her face was so beautiful when she had received it. She could have the most expensive diamond necklace but nothing could match how expensive that dupatta was for her. Veer had himself attached that dupatta to his mother. He loved to see his mother wear it.

Veer took it. He had missed her so terribly.

“Veer, kya kar rahe ho? Can you please stop running around and put on your shoes? School ke liye late ho rahe ho.” His tie was in her hands. Veer was running around his shoes. Tapish and Teer both were busy eating breakfast. She picked him and put him on the chair. “Pareshaan kar dete ho tum. Now, better finish this quickly.” She put the breakfast before.

“No… I don’t want to go to school.” He complained.

“Sorry, Veer, but school toh tumhe jaana hi padega.”

She made him wear the school shoes.

“Kya kya sehna padh raha hai. Chote se bacche pe kitna zulm ho raha hai.” Veer sighed dramatically. Balwant laughed at Veer’s dramatic antics.

“See. Main bhi yahi kehta hun. We can have him home-schooled. Aise alag se school bhejne ki zaroorat nahi hai.” Balwant added.

“Please shut up. Baccha hai. Baccho ke saath nahi milega toh how will he become social? Pata chala bade hoke tumhari tarah bhalu ban jaaye.” She taunted him and turned around to Veer who was now standing on the chair. “And you, Veeranshu Singhania, you better be on your best behavior. Mujhe school se koi complaint nahi chaiye ki tum phir se kisi ke saath ladai kar rahe ho.”

“Simple solution hai ki school se phone aaye toh mat uthao. Toh you’ll not have to listen to their complaints. Or even better, don’t send me to school.” Veer commented.

“Ek aur solution hai tum agar acche baccho ki tarah banoge then I won’t send you to school.”

Veer sighed loudly. “Ramesha kaka, please mera school bag dedo. Pata nahi kis janam ki saza hai yeh. I have to go into an infestation of little creatures.”

Ishana broke into laughter at that.

Veer missed her a lot. He had never worried about a single thing while she was there. It was as if he believed that all his troubles could be erased by her single assurance. He held the dupatta by to his heart.

“Nahi ho raha, mom. I just feel so helpless. Haar gaya ho jaise.” Veer said.

“Veeru, aise haar maan loge toh kaise chalega?” Veer looked up and saw Ishana standing there. She was wearing yellow kurti.

“Mom?!” He was surprised. Veer stood up at the sight of her. She sat down next to him. Veer kneeled down before. Tired and almost losing the war of control. He was almost giving in. “Bas nahi ho raha.”

She held his head and kissed his forehead.

“Itni jaldi haar maan liye? Mera Veeru kahan gaya?”

“Bohot dard ho raha hai. I keep seeing everyone dead. Bani…”

“Someone is really dead if there is no one to remember them, Veer. Immortality iss baat mein hai ki log tumhe humesha yaad rakhe. Jinka naam waqt bhi nahi mita sakta, they are immortal. Jab tum unhe bhula doge tabh they’ll be dead.”

“I just don’t know, mom. Samajh hi nahi aata ki sahi kya hai aur jhooth kya hai. Jise apni maa ki tarah pyaar diya, she turned out to be someone who would be willing to kill me. Kis par yakeen karun?”

Veer had begun to break down all the walls.

“Chachi bhi chali gayi. Kya unhe ek pal ke liye bhi yeh nahi laga ki bas humare liye ruke?”

“Veer, Ahana agar maa hai toh she’s also a person. Being a mother not her entire identity. Being mother is a great thing, no doubt, par sirf wahi toh ek aurat ko define nahi karta. She is more than just a mother to her kids.”

“Gussa nahi hai unpar, mom. I know she probably was right in her place but I miss her. I miss you. Ek baar ke liye lagta hai I should give up the fight and walk to you.”

Ishana looked at her son. That tears he had stuff inside him while watch his mother’s dead body being burnt had struck the tears. Veer had stopped crying since then about anything. Last time he cried was for his brother.

“Your name is Veer, chote bhai.” Teer pointed out. “Tera toh naam hi Veer hai. Tu kaise haar maan le? Saalon andhere mein raha hun, Veer. Par tujhe dekh ke humesha hi Khushi mil jaati thi. Mere hisse ki udaan bhi tu bhar leta tha. Abh kyu nahi. Mere hisse ki udaan abhi aur hai, Veer. Aise beech mein kyu chod raha hai. Mere udne ki chahat abhi puri nahi hui hai.”

“My wings…”

“They’ve clipped your wings, Veer, not your flight. Jab tak dil mein himmat ho, tabh tak koi bhi udd sakta hai. All you need is a bit of courage to fly.” Teer told him.

“This madness… yeh jaise khaaye jaa rahi hai. Dard bhi itna ho raha hai ki mann karta hai ki I should stop fighting.”

“Veer, ek baat bata. Why did you fight Markaat? Kyu tumne Markaat ko marne ka decision liya?” Ishana asked.

“Kyuki woh galat tha. He killed innocent people. He was a tyrant who wanted to destroy everything. Har Roshni ki kiran ko andhera bana sakta hai. Sabse upar banna chahta tha. Which frankly shouldn’t be possible. Food web banaya gaya tha so that there is no one who can be the most powerful in the animal kingdom. Chaos mein bhi toh kahin na kahin order hota hai. Even if we’re freaks of nature, we can’t be such a deviation from laws of nature which is made to protect the innocent. Yeh chain disturb karke sabh kuch khatam kar deta. Isiliye Markaat ko mara. Uski ideology galat thi ki kahin pohochne ke liye someone can give up all their morals.”

“Abhi give up karoge toh tum bhi same hi hojaaoge, Veer. Tu mera beta hai. Mujhe pata hai ki tujhmein abhi bohot himmat bachi hai. 10,000 divya varsh apne pyaar se alag rehke uska intezaar kar sakta hai, uski nafrat seh kar pyaar mein badal sakta hai toh yeh kya cheez hai?”

“Abh dard aur bardaash nahi hota. I can’t bear the sight anymore.”

Ishana simply wrapped her arms around Veer. She hugged him tightly.

“Tujhpar toh meri jaan qurbaan hai, chote bhai.” Teer hugged him. “Tujhpar toh Tapish bhai apni jaan qurbaan kar de.”

“Tumhare liye main hazaar bar phir se wahi maut sehne ke liye tayyar hun.” Ishana said. “I miss you more than you could understand, Veer. Par tu abhi mere paas aa jaaye yeh nahi chahti. I want you to have every happiness in the world and then finally when he decides that you’ve lived your part enough, tabh tu aa jaana mere paas.”

“Tujhse bohot zyaada pyaar hai, chote bhai. Tu mera bhai hai. You’re my twin. Dil mein kitni iccha thi ki bar ek baar tera saath aasmaan mein udd paau.”

“Hum sabh tere liye har baar jaan de sakte hai, Veer. You can’t forever stuff pain in your heart. You feel you can’t fly anymore because you’re too full of every trauma you’ve felt. Dil se nikala hi nahi hai. Kabhi utni azaadi thi hi nahi ki roke apne dard ko baha de. Bas ek baar uss azaadi ko feel karoge toh samajh aa jaayega ki free kaise hote hai. Bani ko udna sikhaya aur khud bhul gaye?”

“I don’t want her to have this broken piece. She deserves someone who is complete, mom.”

“Tum kaise decide kar sakte ho ki use kya chahiye. Tumhe kya chahiye yeh tum decide kar sakte ho par use kya chahiye yeh use decide karne do. Marne ke baad bhi do ghanto tak dil dhadakta hai, Veer. Jab koi pyaar karta hai kisi se, toh iss baat se koi fark nahi padta ki he’s broken or not. Bas use pyaar dena jaante hai. Bani ne tumse nafrat ki par kya iss baat ke liye chodke chale gaye tum?”

“Nahi…”

“Toh agar woh tumse pyaar karti hai toh kaise tumse alag ho sakti hai. People heal, Veer. All wounds heal. You need to give them time. Jab chot mein kuch atak jaaye toh use nikalna padta hai theek se heal hone ke liye. Chot lag jaaye kaanch se toh glass ke saath hi heal nahi kar sakte Veer, it becomes more dangerous. Pehle kaanch ko nikalna padta hai phir jaake wound heal hota hai.”

Veer hugged her.

“I know you’re not alive but this is a part in my mind.”

“Kuch cheezein samjhani mushkil hoti hai, Veer. Farishte ke jaadu mein jhooth hota hai. Traps mein jhooth hota hai. Par Hari ki maya mein bhi sach hota hai.”

“I don’t presume he’ll bother himself with someone like me. Not the most religious person in the world.”

“Vishwas hota hi aisa hai. Patthar ki murat mein bhi kisi ko Hari dikh jaate hai aur kisi ko saamne khade hote hue bhi nahi dikhte. Vishwas hota hi aisa hai. Ho toh sabh hi Hari hai. Na ho toh kisi bhi roop mein nahi dikhenge.” Narayan pointed out chuckling. He was sitting on that tree again.

“Jaise tumhe bohot pata hai.”

“Tum dekh lo. Ho bhi sakta hai.”

“Pata nahi unhe mujhpe hi gussa ho ki maine Markaat ko maara ho.”

“Samrat tumhe bohot pyaara hai na.”

“Sam?”

Veer almost felt panic. Was Sam in trouble.

“Tumhara bhai apni zindagi aur maut se lad raha hai. Tumhare liye, usne Farishte se ladai ki aur bohot chot lagi hai use. Kabse aise lad raha hai. Tumhara bhai zindagi aur maut se lad raha hai, Veeranshu. Tum andhere se lad hi sakte ho na? Tumhare liye Bani puri duniya se lad jaati hai, uske liye toh andhere se lad hi sakte ho na?”

“Sam sach mein theek nahi hai?”

“Hospital mein hai. Critical. 5 dino se hai.”

“Mujhe Sam ke paas jaana hai.”

“Toh tumhe Farishte ke jaadu ko todna hi hoga.”

Narayan jumped off the tree and offered him a hand.

“Vishwas karke dekho, Veeranshu. Sabh kuch ho sakta hai. Vishwas kiya hai toh manushya Chandra tak pohoche hai. Vishwas kiya hai toh tumne Markaat ko haraya hai. Vishwas kiya hai toh Bani ki nafrat ko pyaar mein badla hai.”

Veer took a deep breath. He put his hand in Narayan’s hand. Narayan smiled. The moment Veer did that, Veer could feel his tears fall down.

Veer found himself at the temple. He had no idea how he had reached there. He saw Bani standing there.

“Bani!” Veer said.

“Veeranshu…” Bani ran towards him.

“Sam?” Veer asked.

“Hospital mein hai.”

“Mujhe abhi wahan jaana hai. Please…”

They took him back to the hospital. In that moment, Veer didn’t care about the blood that was pouring out of his back because of the wings being cut. He didn’t care about the pain. He didn’t care about Farishta showing up suddenly. He didn’t care about anything.

Veer started running ahead. Veer saw Tapish, Ponky, Meera, Pawan and Vanshika there. Vanshika was almost crying.

“Sam?” Veer asked.

“Uski condition bohot critical hai.” Vanshika answered, almost breaking down. “Mom keh rahi hai he’s close to slipping into coma. Koi reaction nahi hai.”

Veer went inside the room Sam was kept in. He stumbled a bit seeing so many pipes attached to him. So many machines attached to him. Sam was injured in several places. Bani almost turned around. She hugged Balwant at the sight of Sam. Balwant held her and patter her head.

“Kuch nahi hoga. Theek ho jaayega.” Balwant assured her.

In the time she had known Sam, she had grown really close to him. He was almost her best friend. Someone she could confess her feelings to. Someone who she can tell her deepest secrets.

“Samrat, mazak mat kar. Get up.” Veer told Sam. He had never called Sam by his full name. It had been ages since any of the Singhanias called him Samrat. They all called him Sam. “Dekh already bohot dard ho raha hai mujhe, tu aur mat pareshaan kar.”

When there was no reaction, Veer felt like breaking.

“Main already kaafi apno ko kho chuka, Samrat. Please tu toh mat jaa.” Veer’s voice cracked.

“Veer... ro mat. Theek ho jaayega.” Balwant assured him. Vanshika ran out. She could bear. Veer turned around and looked at her running away. He went out behind her. She was out of the hospital at the back of the hospital. She sat down. Breaking down into tears.

“Kabse keh rahi hun usse. Baat hi nahi sun raha hai.” She broke into tears. She kicked the pots angrily. It was crying with a tantrum. “5 dino se wahin pada hua hai. Na toh hilta hai na hi Aankhen kholta hai. Yeh kya tareeka hai kisi se badla lene ka? Kis baat ka badla hai, yaar? Jab usse aise baat ki thi tabh khud hi hosh mein nahi thi.”

Veer sat down next to her. Meera hugged Vanshika and Bani put her arms around Veer. Veer broke into tears.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Emotional update...😭

Veer...😭

Continue soon...👍🏼

Edited by SilentEyes7 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

SUPERB Work, Very well down 👍🏻

These chapters are ton of emotions.❤️

You have Outdone Yourself Mam. Excellent 👏🏻

The Narayan, Ishana & Teer talks are much needed for Veeranshu.

The fierce Bani Always sets FIRE 🔥

Can't able to Imagine the Condition which Samrat has been Now. Vanshika have faith He will surely Came back by our Author's Grace. He will sort out all the things With you soon.

VEERANSHU Let the tears Fall out. Behne doo ihne mann halka ho jayega. Your BANI is always on your Side....



Please next parts bhi jaldi upload kar dena, Ab wait karna mushkil ho jayega...

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Posted: 4 years ago

Emotional but Amazing

Loved it 💞🥰💕

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Posted: 4 years ago

There's only two words to describe your update " an emotional rollercoaster ". My eyes dried out because of all the crying

. But I am not at all disappointed. As always was hooked to your story. Narayan and veer convo

Ishana and teers appearance gave an aura of sadness and understanding. Hats off to you. 👏

Vanshika is heart broken. Sam ki there kardona please.

Farishtha deserved that for what he did. Farishtha may mean angel but after naagin 5 he is a synonym for devil. 😡. Just hate him.

Next. Mera Bhai Nikhil parikshit. Bani is not going to leave you alone. A little suggestion from me. Please don't kill him easily. Let him suffer. Cut his wings to pieces , stab him torture him I don't care. He deserves it.

Overall I am mesmerized by the update


P. S. Update soon

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This was amazing.


Narayan himself coming and helping veer out was brilliant 👏👏👏👏👏.


I was upset reading chapters 83 and 84..but you outdid yourself with these chapters..I'm glad veer is out of that toxic torture..but I did expect Narayan to give him back his wings..(pls give veer his wings back..its an earnest request from my side🙏🙏.)


Banis determination and her love for veer is the biggest kavach for veer.vani ❤❤.


Bahut acha laga when farishtas powers were taken back..he and nikhil should be killed for what they did to poor veer..no mercy for them.


Hoping sam will be fine..(and can we see ahana chachi returning for a short while?always wanted her to meet bani.)..and veer will get his wings back and emerge out of all this stronger.


P.S missing vani romance..I know now is not the time. But when everything is fine..we need some Bharpayi for it was missing for more than 4 chapters 😜😍.


And the msg i had sent in wattpad..I wanted to say more but word limit had reached and I couldn't.

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