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fortitudeoth

@fortitudeoth

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: The.Wanderer

Not getting enough dose of Tharkipan these days.😭

And I meant the awkwardness, the love and affection and maybe Mahir will pull her leg? Looking forward to it.😉

Sarah, I think we can see your tharki mind on. Your first thought when you read what Ash said was THAT

I know I owe you both reviews. They will be coming soon 😉

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nuomi.riceball

@nuomi.riceball

Sparkler

Posted: 6 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: fortitudeoth

Sarah, I think we can see your tharki mind on. Your first thought when you read what Ash said was THAT

I know I owe you both reviews. They will be coming soon 😉

😆 I also await for your review Claireji; yours and Preetiji review are so entertaining. Then the Q&A session 😆

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 6 years ago

#93

Nice update dear
She entered her home again.
Tough for her as she saw so many memories in pictures but didn't remember it.
Mahir bela small convo was good
Update soon please
Thanks

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_nakshi_

@_nakshi_

Sparkler

Posted: 6 years ago

#94

Sarah congratulations for your new ff lately 😆

It's a nice and sweet concept of love between a family

The family bonding was well written

Everything never lasts long and OMG Bela forgot everything

It's really tough time for mahir

But he managed well all the things

The way behir took care of kids you portrayed beautifully

Waiting for more family bond and Bela adjusting and understanding family

Do update soon

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Gems.musingsRN

@Gems.musingsRN

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 6 years ago

#95

Waiting for next chapter. .do update soon dear!

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fortitudeoth

@fortitudeoth

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#96

Hej buddy 🤗

I am finally posting my review. Sorry it took so long

Your chapters are always amazing. I don't know how to praise them anymore. Maybe I should try Danish now 😆

Bella is the perfect mother. She is a natural. She doesn't need her memories to be a mother to her children.

I want to know how Behir's night is together. I am wondering the same as Ash, not whatever you are thinking SaRah 😛

Update SOON. It has been a long time since you updated 😡. I will send you messages to update 😆

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Gems.musingsRN

@Gems.musingsRN

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 6 years ago

#97

Waiting for next chapter. .update soon dear!

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nuomi.riceball

@nuomi.riceball

Sparkler

Posted: 6 years ago

#98

This ff is under construction?

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Monali5

@Monali5

Navigator

Posted: 6 years ago

#99

This chapter is beautifully penned. The most emotional chapter so far. The way you described Bela's emotions(they way she can't relate to her past self and has this constant fear if she can remember her past ) is just commendable .It was all so natural and plain raw emotions and the best part is the dialogues and emotions hit the right chord ,it feels like it's all happening in front of me that for me is the greatest achievement for a writer .This chapter had me hooked to it . I was an emotional wreck throughout the chapter .The father and children bond is so cute!! Continue soon.