My Angel BeHir FF IF_NC_ENTRY Ch 13 on Pg 44 - Page 43

Originally posted by: fortitudeoth

Chapter 9

Mahir is making Bella study even on a Sunday? 😲 Doesn't he ever take a break?

Try to understand yaar. He misses her. 😉

Mahir is starting to fall in love 😳. You had to write about Sumi and Bella again 😭 😡. We need a ship name for them

We got one. SuLa!!! 😳


🤣 Bella always manages to find a way to tease Mahir. She's perfect for him. This side of hers brings out a different Mahir

It sure does. Very soon we would have Mahir going all tharki on her.

What was that shriek? 😲


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Amazing chapter 👏

Originally posted by: fortitudeoth

Chapter 10

🤣 dress troubles. That's very typical! Aww Sumi helped her dress up for the party

I do that all the time. My has to get me out then.😕😳


"What is this? Gang up on Mahir day?" You said something similar to me a few days ago when I sent you that PM 😉

I got the inspiration from there only.

Mahir asks many questions 😆. But he's asking the right ones!

His right question are going to end up Making him awkward very soon.

The best part for me was when you mentioned that the kiss left a tingling feeling 😳

Another amazing chapter 👏. Finally I have reviewed the first 10 chapters! I have 4 reviews left 😃

Well the guy is growing up. 😉

Originally posted by: fortitudeoth

Chapter 11

Bella is in love

Yes she is!!

She finally took the exams. Wow! I'm proud of her 👏. What treat will she give him? 😳

Her treat will be a treat for the readers as well. 😉

Bella is even bonding with Andy 😭. She is already loved by the Sehgal family. They even let her stay over!
They gonna bring her to their home permanently soon. 😆


When will Behir realize they are in love?


Soon!!

Great update 👏. I am giving you a clap after every chapter 🤣. You'll be getting a few more

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Originally posted by: fortitudeoth

Chapter 12

They are still in a routine even after the exams! Isn't that so cute?

They miss each other. 😆


I need to learn how to post GIFs. I really do! They would help me with my reviews. I will ask Varsha again and maybe this time try to at least do it. But I have already asked her too many times 🤣

I am sure she will tell you... AFTER sending you e punches! 😆


Andy and Sumi haven't missed anything about these two kids! They're trying to set them up. It's good they went to Bella instead of Mahir

If they had gone to Mahir, Mahir would have fainted at the thought of proposing Bella. 😆

I am running out of words to praise you 👏

I am almost coming to the end of this story 😭

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Originally posted by: fortitudeoth

Chapter 13

So this is the treat that Bella had planned 😳

YUP! 😉

Mahir . I am so glad at least Bella was able to express herself. This was a beautiful confession!

Mahir is so adorably cute!! 😳

Andy and Sumi walking in at the end 🤣. This is the highlight of the chapter for me. Again, I need those GIFs 🤣

I knew it would be. 😆 A Tharki gang member after all.


It's Bella's turn to teach Mahir a few things.

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Amazing chapter 👏

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Originally posted by: fortitudeoth

Epilogue

You finished it 😭

😭


This was a beautiful ending. It was perfectly written. I have no words

Wow Ash! You wrote another amazing story. Thank you so much for writing this

Aww Claire... 🤗

I'm so proud of you. You entered a competition and even went to the second round. I can't wait to hear how far you go in the competition. But I just want to say that you are already a winner for me

For me it is the best win when you guys approve. 😳

You get a clap for this update too 👏

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Please create an index for all your stories.

I will, but where? 😉

Originally posted by: fortitudeoth

I am done with my updates 😆. I hope that the wait was worth it. I know I have been asking you to be prepared for many days 🤣. But I am finally done 😃