BeHir Memory Loss Part 4 UPDATED. - Page 8

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Posted: 6 years ago
#71
And Wwooowww👏 This FF of your's is also so AMAZING...

And the funny things - bela using google maps and mahir calling auntyji to huzoor🤣🤣 This was sooo good🤣
And that mahir getting power of freezing others😲 Wow.

You are the best ❤️Who writes the best
Who knew that you would be continuing the story till here
And reading your FFs gives me the same feel as we watch behir scenes 😳 ...just SUPERB .
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Posted: 6 years ago
#72
This is really fantastic and entertaining.
Actions packed with a lot of emotions and rumours at the same time.
Not to mention it is funny and hilarious at the same time.
And that death eaters 🤣 it's a good reference to Harry Potter.
This is the end Ash Baba? 😒 😭
Why does it feel like you cut at a cliffhanger?
Great update.
Plz continue soon.
Edited by nuomi.riceball - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#73
HEY ASH

sorry for being so late in replying you know the reason😭😭


so how come you again on this wait is it someone is reading about some stuff too much that he or she is back to this os turning it into FS. whatever may be the case we are the lucky ones here more and more of BEHIR TO READ is all that we want

magical moments ahem ahem which one is she talking about. she is pissed he is hugging teddy not his amazing wife. thanks bela even we find that saas-bahu saga extremely boring.
Bela being all sarcastic and she already mastered from nagford university and like every lofar boy vikku was not interested so he is reluctant in using English but our naagrani is mashallah in her accent. Vish and bela believe in taking pleasures of both the world.

such a powerful act in those caves ab energy will get drain that's obvious na and that too with behir I guess they will be keeping a meal and juices in their room which may come handy after such sessions. waise food se yad aaya kitchen romance is pending. ITNA KYA KAR DIYA K NAAGRANI KI BHI ENERGY DRAIN SOMETHING IS VERY POWERFUL OR SHOULD I SAY POWER CONSUMING what the... they did she lasted in coma for 6 months OMG she needs some real strong power backup for next session. Imagine this whole naaglok now knows k behir did hanky panky in caves matlab ye to NEWS HO GAYI aur wo bhi itna powerful k bela ki sari energy chali gayi aur mahir ka dimag.

we need to get a confirmation on juhi poor girl always gets kissed and married by girls why just because she ran away first time blindly writers are punishing her with new things.😲😲

she getting power from another bang bang wow I mean if someone says bela prepare for war that means behir have to closed in a room for longer time this baba is so frank and is advising about everything from love to chexx. vish cannot leave any moment to tease them. power getting downloaded directly 😆😆

so everything is changed in SH and mahir being a kid also is making yuvi's life hell. mahir teasing her and making faces well that would have been such a cute thing to watch ofcourse not more cute then behir kids but still. TEDDY AND CHOMU 😆😆😆😆 CHOMU ASH seriously this reminds of something else. she taking care of him and all and here she is thinking else and mahir is being all child. and those med all these could have been handled well in serial if only they wanted to but they were too busy in writing trash that they forgot what is the actual thing they should show.

ye sabko ho kya gaya hai even you and bela with them eww that was eww but very funny I mean just imagine yuvi's scandalised face when bela would have told that she is interested in not only girls but also aged women like seriously😆😆😆 and mahir having watching them although he would have got heart attack if it had happened in front of him.

behir sharing meal from each others plate wow yar. and by the way which scene they enacted the one with touching navel if yes then poor bela imagine her state after this.


wow ash it was refreshing to read something so sarcastic and funny on that idiotic track although same is happening now with one more person wanting to sleep with bela for child I mean how low can mukta stoop now.

but very well written dear I am impressed that you are good at writing every emotion which shows the maturity of your writing

I will reply as and when I read because I cannot just read and not post a review so it might take some time please tolerate this. thanks for this update


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Posted: 6 years ago
#74
just read the second part and ohmygod Ash kya ho??? Like seriously what are you! Your brain is comes up with such such beautiful things ahhh!!! I am literally dazed! First of all this chapter was HUGE! It took me 2 visits to complete it. And then the details!!!??? wow!! You never ever cease to surprise me with your writing skills, you are very very talented!
I love how you have managed to include sooo many things! the tiredness induced coma was WOW. Words cant express how much i am in awe with your story! The kissed Juhi, harrased Yuvi, Bela acting as gay, everything was beyond amazing!!! If only if only you were there on n3 sets and were a part of the creative team, the ML track would have been so much fun!!

I am eager to read further
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Posted: 6 years ago
#75
i am your slave master!!!!!!
Ek hi chapter mein so many happy cute naughty romantic hot moments and so much sadness and pain too!???

I am not in my senses now
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Posted: 6 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: nuomi.riceball

🤣 the sarcasm is apt 👍🏼 👏


Thanks Nuomi😃
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Posted: 6 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: tashi96

It was so funny to imagine the naagrani talking about the aftermath of "being with Mahir" with the naaguru!

I hope that wasn't the end of it, please!




Thanks Tashi. No a couple of more chapters have been posted. But after that I don't know. I 😃
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Posted: 6 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: mafaaza12

Ohhh nooo

Wats this ash?

U jst wrote os on maahir's ML ri8?

I got confused with the word memory loss with HBTB edkl😆

I think u jst flow with ur words relieved frm twist & turn😉.

I luv it girl👏,

romcom, but with baby maahir its too difficult🤣.

Bela got cleared her confusion regarding tiresome ni8 with Maahir with aghori baba & naagpandit😲😆.
It longed for six months!!!!!


Anyways its a surprise indeed⭐️
Can we expect another surprise😆



Kya karu yaar? Baby Mahir was too cute. I had to write about him. And then Quayamat came and well I just got frustrated. 😆


Thanks for reading and appreciating. 😳

Ab naagguru and naag pandit are knowledgeable ones. 😉 Only they could have cleared her conffusion. 😆
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Posted: 6 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice part dear
Loved it
Continue soon please
Thanks



Thanks Asif. 😃
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Posted: 6 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: Mahi114

Awww

Such a sweet surprise
Loved your surprise


Thanks Mahi. I am glad you liked it. 😃

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