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Priya

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Posted: 6 years ago

#71

Mahir was having poor knowledge about biology😆

Bela was so angry

Nice update⭐️

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Vrishthi04

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Posted: 6 years ago

#72

Fab

The part where Bela told Mahir about the biology book and the reproduction chapter, Iol 🤣 🤣 🤣

I laughed so loud that my stomach ached

That was too funny

Keep writing lovely scenes

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Alemurity

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Posted: 6 years ago

#73

Cvs should learn a lesson nok jhok is now all I need in behir lif

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The.Wanderer

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Posted: 6 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: Vrishthi04
Fab
The part where Bela told Mahir about the biology book and the reproduction chapter, Iol 🤣 🤣 🤣
I laughed so loud that my stomach ached
That was too funny
Keep writing lovely scenes

I always knew that my Mahir was an extremely innocent guy and also a little dumb. 😆

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The.Wanderer

@The.Wanderer

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Posted: 6 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: Arshukaurkhushi
Cvs should learn a lesson nok jhok is now all I need in behir lif

Even I want to see their cute nok jhok instead of constant crying. But since the cvs are in mood to give us that, I plan to write a lot of nok jhok scenes in the coming chapters. 😆

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sonie singh shrivastava

@sonie32

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Posted: 6 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: Vrishthi04
Fab
The part where Bela told Mahir about the biology book and the reproduction chapter, Iol 🤣 🤣 🤣
I laughed so loud that my stomach ached
That was too funny
Keep writing lovely scenes

even i'm also feeling the same🤣

so he thought he pregnant her without...🤣

awesome writing😛

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The.Wanderer

@The.Wanderer

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Posted: 6 years ago

#77

Guys i have a question for you. Can you picture the scenes which I write in front of your eyes? I mean are my words descriptive enough or should be more descriptive?

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The.Wanderer

@The.Wanderer

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Posted: 6 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: sonie32
even i'm also feeling the same🤣
so he thought he pregnant her without...🤣
awesome writing😛

Thanks Sonie!!😆

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Priya

@Priya258

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Posted: 6 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: Ash.raje17
Guys i have a question for you. Can you picture the scenes which I write in front of your eyes? I mean are my words descriptive enough or should be more descriptive?

Yes your words are descriptive enough😊

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The.Wanderer

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Posted: 6 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: Priya258

Yes your words are descriptive enough😊

Thanks. 😊

I want to reach a stage where my readers will actually be able to hear these dialogues in Surbhi and Pearl's voice. You know the kind of feeling you get while reading a really good book? Like the characters are reciting the story to you?

Edited by Ash.raje17 - 6 years ago

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