ViDev OS: pt2 Deepest Desires of Dev vr2, pg10 - Page 2

Originally posted by: zack69

Awesome. Kaash yogesh itna posotive😔.

thank you so much🤗

Abhi thodi der mein read karti hoon

Thanks for tagging me Telly

Very well written

Kaash Yogesh itna positive hota kitni help hoti Dev Aur Vidhi ko

And the feelings and confession of dev are very well written by you

Amazing 👏

Hi thanks for tagging me dear. It's just awesome.

Beautifully written. 😍 💕❤️😍💐

Thank you so much for this beautifully woven dreamy OS for us.🤗😁

Just want to share that I'm on my way back after a hectic night duty, and reading this OS has literally freshened me up. Plus reading it while listening to 'Aaoge jab tum o sajna ' (Jab we met) , the lines

चंदा को ताकूँ रातों में

है ज़िन्दगी तेरे हाथों में

पलकों पे झिलमिल तारें हैं

आना भरी बरसातों में

सपनों का जहाँ

होगा खिला खिला

बरसेगा सावन..

fit perfectly for when Dev kisses her forehead.

(Have aleady registered this OS as a beautiful episode in my mind. Itna acha likha hai ki sab imagine hua aur butterflies feel ho rahi thi☺🙈)

Originally posted by: Telly_Addict

tag 2

Thank you for the tag

I was thinking to write ff on this track but you wrote it better than what i thought

So good yar

Originally posted by: zack69

Awesome. Kaash yogesh itna posotive😔.

thank you 🤗

aur waha Yogesh positive nahi to kya hua ...humne bana diya positive.. apne ViDev ke liye kuch bhi

thanks again.

Originally posted by: Geeta06

This is so Emotional yaar.. Dev aise bhi apni feelings express kr skta hai.. Ye to imagine bhi nhi kr skte the... But you put it very beautifully yaar.. Sab kuch mind mein play ho rha tha sath sath padte hue. Beautiful❤❤❤

I know OS hai... Agar ho sake to next part likhna... Only if possible.. Agar nhi bhi rab bhi ye bahut hi jyada beautiful hai..

Thank you so much for such a sweet os yaar

thank you so much dear 🤗 so so happy that you liked it and you could imagine it all cause i literally imagined this myself so vividly while thinking and then while writing...

drunk confessions are so true to heart and shows characters complicated situation, cause once sober that sensibility becomes their biggest enemy. So once that sensibility is away such trapped - helpless characters only then such character can feel and convey those feelings.

and am so glad you could feel that all.

next part abhi to nahi writing this was so draining...abhi kuch naya soch nahi paa rahi hu.. agar socha to likhungi jarur.

thanks again...🤗

Originally posted by: Parud7

Awesome my dear. .. This is soooooo perfect. Thanks for tagging me.

Ho ske to pls continue this. Dev to ab nazren hi nhi milaa payega🤣

But mjhe smjh nhi aaya vidhi ne dev k coat pe kiss kb kiaa?? 🤔

thank you so much dear.... continue hoga ke nahi pata nahi.. cause this one is perfect as it is and iske aage agar acha nahi hua to i'll be sad.. still dekhti hu agar socha to try karke batati...

regarding coat watch the episode where Dev wears Vidhi's shirt... till 4th button its open so i used that as reference

thanks again.🤗

Originally posted by: Shinika

Hi telly

It’s very realistic and true to the nature of dev. You portrayed his emotions specially his helplessness, his pain of being far yet close and his childish behaviour being close with vidhi,His hesitation about her knowing his real feelings is very apt.👏👏 Kash makers aapse yeh scene churaliye tho maza aayega.🤩

But maine iske aage ki story bhi maanga hai kaise dev fumble karega vidhi ki saamne justify katthe huye🥰

Main bahut lalchi Hu behan tho aapko aage ka shot bhi dena padega our koi bahaana nahi chalega🤣

Thank you telly🙏 for writing this yeh dekhne ka bahut man tha mujhe show me par aapki yeh story padhkar ek ek scene meri aankho saam ne play hote huye feel huva.🤗

If possible pls pls pls (dev sir ki duuuuuu…….Sri taraf jithna lamba pls) give the next shot. Take your time but finish it on happy note.❤️

thank you so much dear....🤗 for giving me the idea for this one.

i always wanted a powerful confession.. either in rain thats like announcing to the world and cant step back...

or such drunk ones... cause they are the most heartbreaking one.. when the character has no one but Alcohol at their back to give them that courage to speak up even as drunk... its the most helpless form of confessions and it pains me everytime i watch it in my kdramas.. and so glag it conveyed the emotions to you.

aage ka hoga ya nahi aur kab..i cant comment as of now.. abhi thoda office ke kaam me busy hu to lets see next weekend.. aur waise ye likhna bahut draining that to abhi thoda stepping back from writing.

thanks once again...❤️