ViDev OS: pt2 Deepest Desires of Dev vr2, pg10 - Page 4

Awww yeh to bahut hi mentisental karne wala OS tha. So cute and so good and warm hot chocolate ki tarah.

Originally posted by: Telly_Addict

OMG those line gave me goosebumps after imagining the moonlight scene on Vidhi's face.. this is so so apt for them here...

and so glad you find it beautiful and loved it... sari mehnat safal... sach me i loved this one as my the most beautiful write up ever in last so many years of writing FFs n OS....this one is so vulnerable, palpable ke i can just read and imagine them being so hurting yet in love with each other...

mujhe bharosa hi nahi hota ke ye maine likha hai.. sach me.. ihad to pinch my self to confirm ye sach hai sapna nahi.

thanks again dear and also thanks for sharing beautiful lyrics.🤗

@bold. That is so cute and modest of you.

Keep writing and people like us will be there to tell you it is not a sapna.😁🤗

I loved it, dude.

i wish aisa kuch show mein dekhne ko milta. 😒

Pls iska part 2 bhi banana. 😳

I just love sequences jahan log sapna soch ke alag harkatein karte hain and then they realise ki sach thha....... The free flow of emotions pre realisation and the awkwardness after realisation! You nailed both of these. Just loved it .........

Originally posted by: Anupreeya

I just love sequences jahan log sapna soch ke alag harkatein karte hain and then they realise ki sach thha....... The free flow of emotions pre realisation and the awkwardness after realisation! You nailed both of these. Just loved it .........

thank you so so much.. it means a lot coming from you cause you yourself is such a great writer...i wait for your feedback on all my works so eagerly..... and really thanks for liking it..

ek aur hai.. wo bhi padhna.. 100epi ka hai.. not sure if you read it yet

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/na-umra-ki-seema-ho/5310638/videv-in-my-alternate-universe-os-collection-100th-epi-os-pg-1

Originally posted by: Telly_Addict

thank you so so much.. it means a lot coming from you cause you yourself is such a great writer...i wait for your feedback on all my works so eagerly..... and really thanks for liking it..

ek aur hai.. wo bhi padhna.. 100epi ka hai.. not sure if you read it yet

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/na-umra-ki-seema-ho/5310638/videv-in-my-alternate-universe-os-collection-100th-epi-os-pg-1

Aare koi great writer nahin hun...... Itna mat chadhao jhaad pe........ Bahut kam hi likh paati hun main and it takes too long ...... You write such beautiful and long pieces ...... Mere bas ka nahin hai.......

Ye wala miss ho gaya shayad...... Padke batati hun..... Thanks for posting the link for me ...... Tags bhi miss hote rehte hain aaj kal .... Itna infrequently visit karti hun forum kaam ki wajah se........

Originally posted by: Angel_Shweta

I loved it, dude.

i wish aisa kuch show mein dekhne ko milta. 😒

Pls iska part 2 bhi banana. 😳

thank you so much...

part 2 nahi kah sakti hai.. but a standalone OS kind of to use refrence from this one..

kaam chalu hai.. aayega pakke se thode dino me...

thanks again🤗

Maine ekdum correct naam di , Aapko Lady Dev.

Telly , I am sorry for reading and commenting late.... Time nahi mili yaar aane ko...

Wow wow wow 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰 Bhannat 💕💕 Mast , Superb OS. Dev deewani toh puri tarah se Dev ko dil aur dimaag mein samayi hein. I was able to feel it in this whole OS. Amazingly showcased Dev's feelings. Yogesh helping Dev to outburst his feelings at the intoxication, his advice to him pyaar toh bas ho jaata hein. So apt. Dev drinking and at then at the intoxication level he telling about the consequences that Vidhi is so choti and the gap between them is high was so striking. At Baalghar the way Vidhi balanced Dev, she sitting at his lap,he pinching her cheeks and then lying at her shoulder - oh God!!!! I was visualising all these things and it made me smile like hell. Then the emotional outburst feelings hein Vidhi ...... Dev hugging Vidhi tightly and kissing at her forehead, telling khayalon ki duniya mein he is capable of expressing himself was so touching. And the next morning when he wake up he felt every thing as dream and then going to his home and then realizing it was not just a dream and his restlessness , Vidhi's words - mein Dev sir ko paana nahi chahti, meea ki Tarah pyar karti hun...Wow you nailed it dear. How heart warming, truely lovable Dev was here . Thanks for giving this masterpiece to me. Too good my Lady Dev

Originally posted by: Revutty

Maine ekdum correct naam di , Aapko Lady Dev.

Telly , I am sorry for reading and commenting late.... Time nahi mili yaar aane ko...

Wow wow wow 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰 Bhannat 💕💕 Mast , Superb OS. Dev deewani toh puri tarah se Dev ko dil aur dimaag mein samayi hein. I was able to feel it in this whole OS. Amazingly showcased Dev's feelings. Yogesh helping Dev to outburst his feelings at the intoxication, his advice to him pyaar toh bas ho jaata hein. So apt. Dev drinking and at then at the intoxication level he telling about the consequences that Vidhi is so choti and the gap between them is high was so striking. At Baalghar the way Vidhi balanced Dev, she sitting at his lap,he pinching her cheeks and then lying at her shoulder - oh God!!!! I was visualising all these things and it made me smile like hell. Then the emotional outburst feelings hein Vidhi ...... Dev hugging Vidhi tightly and kissing at her forehead, telling khayalon ki duniya mein he is capable of expressing himself was so touching. And the next morning when he wake up he felt every thing as dream and then going to his home and then realizing it was not just a dream and his restlessness , Vidhi's words - mein Dev sir ko paana nahi chahti, meea ki Tarah pyar karti hun...Wow you nailed it dear. How heart warming, truely lovable Dev was here . Thanks for giving this masterpiece to me. Too good my Lady Dev

thank you so much dear.... main sach bol rahi hu ye sab bina soch ke likha bas ek flow me aur nahi bharosa hota itna acha ho jayega....

am really so so floored with all the praises you people are showering.. thank you so much....

i wish we can see something remotely romantic like this in the show... just thoda sa bhi miljaye to chalega..

btw thanks again

Originally posted by: plmzaq

Awesome

thank you very much❤️