ViDev OS: pt2 Deepest Desires of Dev vr2, pg10 - Page 3

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jenakashish011

Lovely.💝

Impressive and successfully emoted Dev's feelings.👏👏👏

thank you sooooooo much dear and so glad it was successful in conveying Dev's emotions and helplessness ...

thanks again 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
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thank you ji... 🤗

and so happy it made you feel to be in ViDev dreamland...


main to kab se baalghar ke unke room me fly on the wall ki taraf bas tukur tukur ghoor rahi hu.. am to still in that dreamland.


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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Scissor

Aisa laga episode dekh liya 👏awesome

thank you ji smiley31

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: prs_725

Abhi thodi der mein read karti hoon

aap kya abhi bhi dreamland me hu atak gaye.. aaye hi nahi wapas padh ke..


waiting for you...

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: magicalworld

Thanks for tagging me Telly

Very well written

Kaash Yogesh itna positive hota kitni help hoti Dev Aur Vidhi ko

And the feelings and confession of dev are very well written by you

Amazing 👏

most welcome dear...

and so glad you find Dev's tormenting confession believable....it was so hard to think and write but glad it was able to convey what i wanted it to.

thanks again 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: sumaishu

Hi thanks for tagging me dear. It's just awesome.

Beautifully written. 😍 💕❤️😍💐

thank you sooo much dear... so happy you liked it.❤️❤️❤️


thanks again 🤗

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Originally posted by: Chakor07

Thank you so much for this beautifully woven dreamy OS for us.🤗😁

Just want to share that I'm on my way back after a hectic night duty, and reading this OS has literally freshened me up. Plus reading it while listening to 'Aaoge jab tum o sajna ' (Jab we met) , the lines

चंदा को ताकूँ रातों में

है ज़िन्दगी तेरे हाथों में

पलकों पे झिलमिल तारें हैं

आना भरी बरसातों में

सपनों का जहाँ

होगा खिला खिला

बरसेगा सावन..

fit perfectly for when Dev kisses her forehead.

(Have aleady registered this OS as a beautiful episode in my mind. Itna acha likha hai ki sab imagine hua aur butterflies feel ho rahi thi☺🙈)

OMG those line gave me goosebumps after imagining the moonlight scene on Vidhi's face.. this is so so apt for them here...

and so glad you find it beautiful and loved it... sari mehnat safal... sach me i loved this one as my the most beautiful write up ever in last so many years of writing FFs n OS....this one is so vulnerable, palpable ke i can just read and imagine them being so hurting yet in love with each other...

mujhe bharosa hi nahi hota ke ye maine likha hai.. sach me.. ihad to pinch my self to confirm ye sach hai sapna nahi.

thanks again dear and also thanks for sharing beautiful lyrics.🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: SanchiIndu


Thank you for the tag


I was thinking to write ff on this track but you wrote it better than what i thought


So good yar

thank you so much dear... for such kind words 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
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tag 3

behno still waiting ke aap log kab darshan doge yaha...

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