ViDev OS: pt2 Deepest Desires of Dev vr2, pg10 - Page 9

Original to original hi hota h telly uska koi tod nhi. And jo tumne ye likha hai isme actual videv chalkate hain unki dil ki gehrayi nazar aati hai. Tumne Acha kia jo original bhi post kia. Mjhe tumhare dono version pasand hai. Is se ye pta Chlaa k hmari telly writing mein hr level ki dhurandhar hai😊

Haan mjhe romance pasand h inka pdhna kyuki show mein bht boring n slow chlra hai. Jo love progression inko dikhana tha vo nhi hora to hm os se hi kam chlare hain but it doesn't mean k i like hewaniyat level always🤣 even sober dev pe mera bhi dil atkaa hai.

Thanks for tagging me. Keep writing like this 👍🏼

Hey telly,

It so good writeup.

I personally liked the latest version.

Suits dev.❤️

Haye..Itna cute hug..🙈☺

both version are good! Second one is more close to the original character isiliye more acceptable, no doubt about it.

P.s. playing- 'kaise mujhe tum mil gayi' from gajini while Videv are embracing each other🌸

कैसे मुझे तुम मिल गयी

किस्मत पे आये ना यकीं

उतर आई झील में

जैसे चाँद उतरता है कभी

हौले हौले, धीरे से

गुनगुनी धूप की तरह से

तरन्नुम में तुम

छू के मुझे गुज़री हो यूँ

देखूँ तुम्हें या मैं सुनूँ

तुम हो सुकूँ, तुम हो जुनूँ

क्यों पहले ना आई तुम

कैसे मुझे तुम मिल गयी

किस्मत पे आये ना यकीं

This was very much realistic and I could feel the depth of emotions in its purity. First one was pretty good, but as I said that was challenging for you to write something which you are not much comfortable. Here it's like I could sense the real Dev every where and the whole depiction of emotions were poured with your soul. I really loved it to the core as this was natural and but more than the previous one for it's relatibility. Thanks a lot for tagging me.

Loved this version.

Thanks for sharing.