PURVIR OS : ULJHAN - Page 2

Ayee Pallavi I missed your writing yrr.💯

Kitna pyaara likha hai..mast ekdum.👏🤗

Thode ideas ese lord saba ko bhi de do yrr🤷😂 aur aage ka bhi batao yrr thoda ki kya hone wala hai😂😂

Baaki this was soo pyaara sa❤️ but also chhotu sa🤔

Ese hi stories dete raho haa😛🤭 Kudos!😊

Originally posted by: pallavi_p28

Thank u aayushi. Mai belief nhi kar pa rahi ki aap sabko itna accha laga.

It's so nice and soothing..I feel like reading it again..❤️😳

Pallu yaar u ar awesome....kya likha hai....

Show ..iska pela aadha hi milega...😆

Sargu thanks for sharing this...

Originally posted by: pallavi_p28

Thank you manasvi. Mujhe laga pata nhi kaisa likha hai Maine aankhen band ki to yahi scene mind me aaya, isliye share kiya tumlog k saath

Jab tumlog bolte ho na

Plz continue this

Meri hawa wahin tight ho jati hai🤣

Lol 🤣🤣🤣🤣

Samaj saktha hoon jab aap os likhti ho aur phir usko hum ff mein badal lene kiliye kehete hain toh 😆🤣🤣

Originally posted by: Anahita_143

Ayee Pallavi I missed your writing yrr.💯

Kitna pyaara likha hai..mast ekdum.👏🤗

Thode ideas ese lord saba ko bhi de do yrr🤷😂 aur aage ka bhi batao yrr thoda ki kya hone wala hai😂😂

Baaki this was soo pyaara sa❤️ but also chhotu sa🤔

Ese hi stories dete raho haa😛🤭 Kudos!😊

Thankyou anahita, tumhare comment ne to emotional kar diya yaar🤗

Aage bas isi tarah dono chup chup kar milenge to accha lagega😆

Saba to lord hai usko kaun idea de sakta hai🤣

Actually this is just a scene not os, isliye chota sa hai

Like karne k liye thank you

Originally posted by: Srilata.Mineil

Pallu yaar u ar awesome....kya likha hai....

Show ..iska pela aadha hi milega...😆

Sargu thanks for sharing this...

Thank u sri

Aadha hi mil jaye

Hum sab bahut santoshi hai😆

Originally posted by: midniteangel

Lol 🤣🤣🤣🤣

Samaj saktha hoon jab aap os likhti ho aur phir usko hum ff mein badal lene kiliye kehete hain toh 😆🤣🤣

Tum meri bhavnayen samjh gai😆

Originally posted by: pallavi_p28

Tum meri bhavnayen samjh gai😆

Hamare forum mein sab ki saath aisa ki hota hain 🤭🤭🤣🤣

Os se shru karte aur ff banjata tha 🤣

Originally posted by: Suppss

thanks for the tag diii 🤗

di ye bhot jyada hi achha hai i got emotional while reasing this. PurVir ke sare expressions meri ankho ke samne aa rhe the... the dialogues are so inluential!! COMMENDABLE ❤️

vir me convincing power bhot hai .. aur aj usne declare kar dia ki how much he craves for her!!

Ye to bhot jyada hi utaawla nikla.. vha pehli patni inke bedroom me hai aur ye servant quarter me purvi ki baahon me kho gye 🥳🤪👍🏼

Bhot sukoon mila ye padhke ki Vir kabhi Purvi ki jagah nhi dega kisi ko ❤️

It was too good di.. pls continue aur haa LORD ko ye padhne ki bhot zarurat hai 😆

Thank you supass

Vir ne ek baar soch liya ki purvi uski hai to ruthe piya ko manana to banta hai na😳

Ek baar realise hone k baad purvi k aage wo sakshi ko bhi nhi rakhega kyunki usne khud hi kaha tha ki purvi ko takleef me dekhkar usko bhi dukh hota hai❤️

Originally posted by: midniteangel

Hamare forum mein sab ki saath aisa ki hota hain 🤭🤭🤣🤣

Os se shru karte aur ff banjata tha 🤣

De me comment karungi bas sochne do itne achhe part ki taarif kaise Kari jaaye 🤧🤧🤧🤔🤔🤔