PURVIR OS : ULJHAN

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Below is the OS written by Pallavi Di😳...Am just posting on her behalf...All credit goes to Pallavi Di




ULJHAN

Purvi ka saaman uske room me na dekhkar vir pareshan ho jata hai, phir ek servant vir ko bolti hai ki mukhyani ne apna saaman servant quater me shift kar liya hai.

Sabki nazron se bachta hua vir raat k andhere me purvi k paas aata hai aur door knock karta hai, is baat se anjaan ki darwaze per vir hai purvi darwaza khol deti hai per jaise hi vir ko dekhti hai, wo vir ko ander aane se rokti hai per vir purvi k room me aa jata hai aur darwaza ander se band kar leta hai.

Vir: tu yahan kyu aa gai

Pur: to aur kahan jate, naukrani hai isliye yahan hai. Agar aap kahenge to hum yahan se bhi chale jainge.

Vir: ye to ke kahe ja rahi hai. Aur tera mangalsutra kahan hai.

Pur: hamari shadi to adhuri rah gai, to phir kaisa mangalsutra.

Vir: itni kathor mat ban bawri. Tere gale me mangalsutra dekhta hu to mujhe khud pe garv mahsoos hota hai, yahi mangalsutra mujhe yaad dilata hai ki tu sirf meri hai, sirf meri aur mai sirf tera.

Isi mangalsutra k toot jane per kitna pareshan ho gai thi aur aaj bina meri galati k ise apne gale se nikal diya tune.

Pur: agar aisi baat hai to mandap me mujhe akela chodkar nhi jate.

Vir: agar mujhe teri chinta na hoti to abhi mai tere paas na sakshi k paas hota. Wo to meri bhavna thi sakshi k prati jo usko achanak dekhkar hui. Per pyar ib mai sirf tujhse karu hu.

Tu mane ya na mane. Is mushkil ghadi me Mujhe yu akela mat chod bawri. Mai toot jaunga.

Aur paas k table per rakhe mangalsutra ko uthakar purvi k gale me pahna deta hai. Aur gale lagata hai, purvi abhi to soch me hai ki wo kya kare, per vir use tab tak nhi chodta jab tak purvi use gale nhi lagati.

Vir: mai jald se jald sab thik karne ki koshish karunga. Bas mera saath mat chodna.

Vir ne purvi k chehre ko apne dono haathon me pakad rakha hai aur purvi ne vir k girebaan ko apne dono mutthi me kas kar pakda hai, uski aankhen niche hai.

Vir: aaj mai tujhe ji bharke pyar karna chahta hu.

Pur: mukhi ji, aise mat boliye, hamen kuch ho raha hai

Vir: jo tu mahsoos kar rahi hai, wahi to pyar hai ,wahi pyar mai bhi mahsoos kar raha hu, aur wahi aaj mai tujhe dena chahta hu. Bahut intezaar kiya maine aur bahut kuch sah liya tune. Aaj hamare beech koi nhi aaiga. Abhi tak man se maana tha patni tujhe per aaj tan se apna banaunga tujhe.

Pur: per mukhi ji

Vir : shhhh.... Aaj mai teri ek na sununga. Aaj se mere is shareer per tera adhikaar hoga aur tujhpe sirf mera.Aaj k baad tu mukhi virendra pratap singh ki patni kahlayegi, purvi virendra pratap singh.

Aur purvi ko bade pyar se godi me uthakar bed ki taraf le jata hai

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Di yeh toh bohot ki accha hain.. it's so emotional n d ending was nice 🤧🤧

Show se kuch umeed ki nahi hain par aapka OS padkar accha laga 🥰😍😍

Thank u di!! Pls continue this 😄

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: midniteangel

Di yeh toh bohot ki accha hain.. it's so emotional n d ending was nice 🤧🤧

Show se kuch umeed ki nahi hain par aapka OS padkar accha laga 🥰😍😍

Thank u di!! Pls continue this 😄

Thank you manasvi. Mujhe laga pata nhi kaisa likha hai Maine aankhen band ki to yahi scene mind me aaya, isliye share kiya tumlog k saath

Jab tumlog bolte ho na

Plz continue this

Meri hawa wahin tight ho jati hai🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Wah mere nostradamus 😉

Bas apka kaha sach ho jaye ab

Haye mukhi pur ke pass aya 🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧

Vaise age kya hone wala tha 😋😋😋😗😗😗😏😏😏

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Arey yr..its very very good..

Emotionla kardiya...ab aisa scene mille toh boht badiya..nahi mille toh gum nahi..as aapne de diya

Plz plz continue this..

Why dont u post in on insta amd tag d LORD😉😉😥

I was desperately waiting for something nice..and mill hi gya😁

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Posted: 4 years ago
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thanks for the tag diii 🤗


di ye bhot jyada hi achha hai i got emotional while reasing this. PurVir ke sare expressions meri ankho ke samne aa rhe the... the dialogues are so inluential!! COMMENDABLE ❤️


vir me convincing power bhot hai .. aur aj usne declare kar dia ki how much he craves for her!!

Ye to bhot jyada hi utaawla nikla.. vha pehli patni inke bedroom me hai aur ye servant quarter me purvi ki baahon me kho gye 🥳🤪👍🏼

Bhot sukoon mila ye padhke ki Vir kabhi Purvi ki jagah nhi dega kisi ko ❤️

It was too good di.. pls continue aur haa LORD ko ye padhne ki bhot zarurat hai 😆

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nezuko

Wah mere nostradamus 😉

Bas apka kaha sach ho jaye ab

Haye mukhi pur ke pass aya 🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧

Vaise age kya hone wala tha 😋😋😋😗😗😗😏😏😏

Aisa kuch nhi hoga, saba ki kripa se😆

Haa bas ek meharbani kar di maine bacchon ki aaya bataya tha aur serial me bechari ko naukrani bana diya

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Posted: 4 years ago
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This gives a sukoon on a different level..So beautiful !❤️❤️

Dil kush kar diya Pallavi aapne🤗😳

I badly want to see these things in the show too😒😳😉

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: darkchocolates

This gives a sukoon on a different level..So beautiful !❤️❤️

Dil kush kar diya Pallavi aapne🤗😳

I badly want to see these things in the show too😒😳😉

Thank u aayushi. Mai belief nhi kar pa rahi ki aap sabko itna accha laga.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jaspreet96

Arey yr..its very very good..

Emotionla kardiya...ab aisa scene mille toh boht badiya..nahi mille toh gum nahi..as aapne de diya

Plz plz continue this..

Why dont u post in on insta amd tag d LORD😉😉😥

I was desperately waiting for something nice..and mill hi gya😁

Thank you jaspreet

I m like a frog in the well. Meri duniya bas yahi tak hai, kya karo, aaplog k acche comment padhkar isi me khus ho jati hu❤️

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