Judaaii ff part 4 updated on page 11

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Hello guys

Hum sabne jo theory banai hai., usko lekar maine ye ff likha hai.

Isme sabka thoda thoda dimaag hai. So, dedicated to all purvir fans. ❤️

Hope u guys like it.

Ur likes and comments are always encourage me to write more and more. ❤️


Part 1

Purvi ne vir ko abhi tak maaf nahi kiya tha.

Is baat ko 7 din ho chuke the. Ek din purvi ko kitchen me akela paakar vir uske paas aata hai. Pur vir ko andekha kar apne kaam me buzy rahti hai.

Vir: ib bas bhi kar. Teri ye chuppi mere se bardaast na hoti. Ib maafi de bhi de. Aur jo tune maaf na kiya na to ib mai maafi maangunga bhi na. Sari galati mere akele ki na hai. Kuch teri bhi hai. Maine khud tujhe boys hostel jate dekha tha. Yo baat bhi tanne mere se chupai. Ek baar khud ko meri jagah rakh k dekh. Tujhe kaisa lagega agar mai kisi aur k saath.......

Dono ek dusre ko dekhte hai.

Vir wahan se chala jata hai.

Purvi apne aap se: mukhi ji sahi to kah rahe hai. Tu sach me bawri hai, purvi. Agar hum mukhi ji ko kisi aur k saath dekhte to shayad jaan hi le lete, sahan nhi kar pate is baat ko.

Bechare mukhi ji, kitni baar unhone humse maafi mangi.

Per ab bas. Abhi jate hai unke paas aur kahte hai, humne aapko maaf kar diya.

Vir painting room me sakshi ki tasweer k aage khada tha.

" Ye bawri mere man ki baat na samjhti. Sakshi mai tujhe dhokha na de raha. Per is bawri ne apne vyavahaar se sabke saath saath mere dil me bhi jagah bana hi li. Ek baar wo mujhse baat kare to mai usse bataunga ki mai us se kitna prem karta hu.

Chahe uska jawaab jo bhi ho.

Tabhi purvi wahan aati hai.

Purvi: aap yahan kya kar rahe hai?

Vir: sakshi se teri hi baat kar raha tha.

Purvi: Accha, to hamari shikayat kar rahe the(smile)

Tabhi purvi sakshi ki tasveer ke aage jati hai

" Sakshi ji, aap mukhi ji ki baat bilkul mat suniyega...... "

Aur tasveer dekhkar chaunk jati hai.

Tasveer me wahi aurat thi jiski madad purvi ne shivratri wali raat ko ki thi aur sudha k saath NGO bhej diya tha.

Purvi: ye.. Ye.. Kaun....

Purvi apne kadam piche leti hai

Vir: ke ho gaya tanne?

Purvi: ye tasveer......?

Vir: ye sakshi hai.

Purvi ne jo suna use vishwaash nhi hua. Uske paron tale zameen sarak gai. Wo bhagti hui apne room me kanha ji k paas aai.

Mukhi: bawri kahinke

Purvi: he kanha ji. Ye hamara jeevan kahan le ja rahe hai aap? Aaj hamara astitva kya hai, hamen khud bhi nhi pata. Sakshi ji zinda hai aur mukhi ji ko ye baat pata bhi nhi hai. Kya kya socha tha humne. Per ab nhi, mukhi ji ko pata nhi chalna chahiye ki humne unhe maaf kar diya hai.

Hum sakshi ji ko is ghar me wapas le kar aainge. Meri naarazgi mukhi ji ko sakshi ji k kareeb le aaigi.

Hum mukhi ji ko dorahe per nhi dekh sakte, jahan unhe sakshi ji aur hamare beech kisi ek ko chunna pade.

Waise bhi mukhi ji aaj bhi sakshi ji se hi pyar karte hai. Wo is haweli me aaigi to mukhi ji hamen kuch din me bhul hi jainge.

Purvi apne aap se baatein kiye ja rahi thi aur roye ja rahi thi kyunki usne ye nirnaya(decision) le liya tha ki uska pyar uske ander hi dum tod dega....

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Di mereko abhi se Rona aa rha he isko padh k or show me bhi yhi hoga 😭 purvi Kabhi thodi selfish kyu nhi ho Sakti 😵kam se Kam selfless to na ho MERI maa


Anyways clean writing Di Ik aap abhi or rulane wale ho par m in for it 😆 #sadist

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Piyaazzz

Di mereko abhi se Rona aa rha he isko padh k or show me bhi yhi hoga 😭 purvi Kabhi thodi selfish kyu nhi ho Sakti 😵kam se Kam selfless to na ho MERI maa


Anyways clean writing Di Ik aap abhi or rulane wale ho par m in for it 😆 #sadist

Ro mat meri piyu. Serial me na sahi per ff me to sab thik kar hi sakti hu.😆

Thanku for ur comment❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Your way of writing Pallavi it is just👏

Accha toh ab show mein yeh hone wala hai 😎

Yeh badhiya kiya atleast ham pehle se hi prepare ho gaye honge

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Amaraddict

Your way of writing Pallavi it is just👏

Accha toh ab show mein yeh hone wala hai 😎

Yeh badhiya kiya atleast ham pehle se hi prepare ho gaye honge

Thanku asma for liking my writing. 

Show me kya hoga pata nhi per this is my emotions. 😊

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: pallavi_p28

Ro mat meri piyu. Serial me na sahi per ff me to sab thik kar hi sakti hu.😆

Yo to sau takke ki Baat bolo Aapne 🤣

Koi na Di jitta rulana he rulao me to khud Ka Likha hua padh k roti rehti hu sabne rone ki dukan kholi he 🤪

Thanku for ur comment❤️

Aapko thank you achhe achhe SS likhne k liye 💖

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Chalo acha hain sakshi k aane se aag dono taraf barabar lagegi..Maza to ab aayega😆🤪🥳

Leads rote hue r tadapte hue jyada ache lagenge😆

Pata nahi m kitni badi sadist hoon

This is simple,sweet and crisp👏.Chota ff bada dhamaka🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Pallavi yr😭😭😭

Chalo ab idea hai kya hone wala hai🤧🤧🤧🤧

Ap please continue rakhna ye👌👌👌

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nezuko

Pallavi yr😭😭😭

Chalo ab idea hai kya hone wala hai🤧🤧🤧🤧

Ap please continue rakhna ye👌👌👌

2nd part is on the way.

Tumko accha laga🤗

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Originally posted by: pallavi_p28

2nd part is on the way.

Tumko accha laga🤗

Acha

Bhut acha

Chalo acha hai jaida wait nai karna padega fir

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