Judaaii ff part 4 updated on page 11 - Page 5

Originally posted by: darkchocolates

Pallavi..🤗

Finally read both the parts😳Damn This is so painfully beautiful❤️

Purvi..Itni Mahan kyun hai..😭The yearning and longing they were feeling for each other..Is so beautifully expressed..

Please Saba Mam ko aap replace kardo..🤗

And do continue this..❤️

Thanku aayushi❤️

Yes 2nd part is more painfull. But hope aage kuch accha likh paun😊

Aur saba mam ko apna kaam karne dete hai😆.wo wahan khus hai aur hum sab yahan😆

Sholly Di me late ho gyi par Aapne phir rula Diya 😭😭😭😭😭😭

Especially the last part 😵😭 yo Sakshi ko kab sach pata chalega ab sehna mushkil ho rha he 😭😭

But anyways Di fabulous as always👏👏

Rulana to koi aapse seekhe 🤣

Originally posted by: Piyaazzz

Sholly Di me late ho gyi par Aapne phir rula Diya 😭😭😭😭😭😭

Especially the last part 😵😭 yo Sakshi ko kab sach pata chalega ab sehna mushkil ho rha he 😭😭

But anyways Di fabulous as always👏👏

Rulana to koi aapse seekhe 🤣

Actually me sab pareshan ho gaye mere ff se, sholly😆.koshish karungi jaldi se jaldi bind up karne ki. Maine jaan bujh kar nhi rulaya😔😆

Originally posted by: pallavi_p28

Actually me sab pareshan ho gaye mere ff se, sholly😆.koshish karungi jaldi se jaldi bind up karne ki. Maine jaan bujh kar nhi rulaya😔😆

Mereko to Rona bada Pasand he 🤣typical sadist

Part-3

Mukhi aur sakshi ko ek saath kamre me dekhna, ye purvi k liye kisi pariksha se kam nhi tha. Per wo apna dard kiske aage roti. Isliye siskiyan muh me dabaye chupchaap chat per chali gai aur mukhi k saath bitaye khubsurat palon ko yaad karne lagi.

Tabhi Vir wahan aa jata hai. Purvi mukhi ji ko chat per dekhkar khus hoti hai per chehre per koi bhaav nhi aane diya usne. Mukhi dheere dheere purvi ki taraf badhta hai. Dono ek dusre ki bagal me khade chand ko dekhte hai.

Mukhi: wo! Sakshi so gai thi aur manne bhi nind na aa rahi thi. Waise hamare beech aisa kuch na hua. ..

Purvi: aap hamen safai kyu de rahe hai.?

Mukhi: safai na de raha, bas bata raha hu ki mere aur sakshi k beech kuch na hua aur phir.....

Purvi jaise yahi sunna chahti ho aur usne rahat ki saans li. Per use yaad aaya ki use mukhi ji se jald se jald door hona hai.

Purvi: hamen bahut neend aa rahi hai. Hum jate hai.

Mukhi purvi ka haath pakad use rokta hai.

Mukhi: ruk bawri!

Bawri, ye shabd purvi k kaano me mishri ki tarah ghul gaye. Sakshi k aane k baad mukhi ne pahli baar use is naam se pukara tha.

Mukhi: kitne dino baad hamen yu akele me samay bitane ka mauka mila hai.

Purvi mukhi ki taraf dekhti hai. Kyunki wo khud bhi mukhi k saath rahna chahti thi.

Mukhi: kitne din ho gaye teri bakbak sune hue, tere tau ki kahaani sune hue. Kitne din ho gaye humne ladai bhi na ki. Ek baar manne acche se daant hi le. Kasam khata hu, kuch na kahunga. Chupchaap teri daant sun lunga.

Vir ka dard uske shabdon se saaf jhalak raha tha. Purvi bhi mukhi ki baatein sunkar bhawuk (emotional)ho jati hai. Dono wahin baith jate hai. Kuch der tak dono ne koi baat nhi ki, bas shant baithe rahe. Is ghari unke beech shabdon ka koi kaam na tha, dono ki aankhen hi kaafi thi baat karne k liye.

Kuch der baad

Mukhi: ek baat puchun? Tune apne bare me sakshi se aisi choti baat kaise kar di. Tune ye kyu bola ki tu aaya(nanny) hai.

Mukhi purvi per adhikaar dikhata hua apni awaz ko thoda tez karta hai

"Tu mere bacchon ki maa hai. Wo tere bhi bacche hai"

Purvi mukhi ki baatein dhyan se sun rahi thi.

Purvi: to aap sakshi ji se kya kahte ki hum kaun hai? Us samay hamen jo sahi laga humne wahi bol diya.

Waise aap khus to hai na sakshi ji k aane se.

Jaise purvi mukhi ka man padhne ki koshish kar rahi ho.

Purvi: aapka pyar, aapki patni ek baar phir aapke saamne hai. Bahut kismat wale hai aap mukhi ji, her kisi ko uska pyar naseeb nhi hota. Aapko to ye mauka bhagwaan ne dusri baar diya hai.

Mukhi (sochta hai) : tu galat bol rahi hai bawri. Is baar mere dil ne tujhe apna pyaar mana hai, apni patni swikaar kiya hai.

Purvi: kahan kho gaye?

Mukhi: mai yahi baat tujhse karne wala tha. Sakshi k wapas aane ki khushi to hai per bechaini si rahti hai. Bahut badlaav mahsoos kiye hai maine sakshi me. Wo pahle aisi na thi. Uski ki gai choti choti harkat manne ye sochne per majboor kar deve hai ki wo sakshi hai bhi ki na.

Purvi ko lagta hai ki Uske wajah se mukhi ji sakshi me badlaav mahsoos kar rahe hai. Aisa na ho isliye jaroori hai ki mukhi ji sakshi ji k saath jyada se jyada samay bitaye.

Purvi wahan se uthkar jane lagti hai.

"Bahut raat ho gai, ab hamen jana chahiye. Aap bhi jaiye, agar sakshi ji jaag gai to aapko kamre me na dekhkar pareshan hongi.

Aur jane lagti hai.

Mukhi: meri baat sun bawri

Kya hum her raat mera matlab hai roj raat ko..... Chat per.... Mil sakte hai kya?

Mukhi hichkichate hue puchta hai

Purvi: ye sahi nhi hoga

Aur chali jati hai

Purvi jate jate sochti hai: hamen maaf kar dijiye mukhi ji. Aap sakshi ji k kareeb aaye, uske liye hamen aapse door hona hoga.

Mukhi: kyu tu manne khud se door kar rahi hai bawri?

Next morning

Purvi bacchon ko udas dekhkar unse puchti hai: kya baat hai genda aur khargosh, itne chup kyu ho?

Manas: wo bilkul acchi nhi hai, unhone hamen daanta.

Purvi: kisne?

Manas: sakshi mummy ne.

Hum to unke saath khelna chahte the per unhone daant kiya.

Purvi ko samjh nhi aa raha tha ki sakshi ne aisa kyu kiya. Wo bacchon ko samjhati hai ki unki tabiyat thik nhi hai na isliye. Chalo hum tum dono k saath khelenge.

Purvi mukhi ji ki raat wali baat yaad karne lagi. Ki sakshi me bahut badlaav aaya hai.

Ek din sabke saamne achanak sakshi ne purvi se kaha

" Tumne itne saalon tak mere bacchon ki dekhbhaal ki hai per ab mai unke saath samay bitana chahti hu. Aur agar tum is ghar me rahogi to wo mere paas kabhi nhi aayenge. Isliye tum ye naukri chod do.

Ye baat sunkar mukhi shock ho jata hai aur

" Nahi ,purvi kahin nhi jaigi. "

Sakshi ki baat sunkar purvi rone lagti hai jaise ek baar me uska sabkuch loot liya ho kisi ne

Per wo sochti hai ( accha hoga, jo hum is ghar se chale jaye)

Purvi: sakshi ji sahi to kah rahi hai. Hum is ghar me rahenge to bacche kabhi inke paas nhi rahenge.

Aur roti hui wahan se chali jati hai.

Mukhi sakshi ko gusse se dekhta hai aur kahta hai

" Purvi kahin nhi jaigi, aur ye mera aakhri faislaa hai"

Mukhi purvi k peeche jata hai.

Purvi packing karti hai tabhi mukhi wahan aata hai.

Mukhi: ye tu kya kar rahi hai?

Purvi: hamen jane dijiye mujhi ji, hum sab ki bhalai isi me hai.

Mukhi: isme kisi ki bhi bhalaai na hai. Na teri, na bacchon ki aur na meri. Chal ,meri chod. Kya juhi aur manas tere bina rah pawenge?

Purvi: unhe rahna hoga.

Mukhi purvi ko bahut samjhata hai per wo nahi samjhti aur rote hue jane lagti hai.

Mukhi: jo tune ek kadam aur aage badhaya to mera mara hua muh dekhegi.

Purvi shouts: ye aap kya kah rahe hai.

Mukhi: ab tu soch le tujhe kya karna hai.

Aur gusse me wahan se chala jata hai.

Purvi rote rote wahin baith jati hai.

Ek din mukhi panchayat se wapas aata hai to purvi ko ghar me nahi dekhta hai. Wo sabse puchta hai.

Sakshi: wo chali gai

Vir: jab maine mana kiya tha....

Sakshi: maine kuch nhi kaha, wo apni marzi se ghar chodkar gai hai.

Gusse me mukhi wahan se chala jata hai aur sochta hai

" Bawri aisa kabhi na kar sakti, wo meri di hui kasam kabhi na tod sakti. Per wo bina bataye kabhi kahin na jati"

Mukhi purvi ka phone try karta hai. Purvi ka phone switch off hai. Mukhi ko kuch thik nhi lag raha tha. Usne purvi ko khojne k liye apne logon se kah diya aur khud bhi apni bawri ko dhundhane k liye haweli se nikal gaya.

Mukhi k paas ek call aata hai

" Mukhyain hamare kabje me hai. Agar wo zinda chahiye to akele ,bina kisi se kuch kahe, jungal k paas jo purani mill hai, wahan aa ja"

Mukhi ko hairani hui ki gundon ne firauti ki maang nhi ki. Per ab uske paas purvi ka pata tha.

Sorry jyada lamba ho gya.

Jhel lena aur comments jaroor karna. ❤️

Guys judai part 3 updated on page 6

Once again interesting update👏yo sochke ki finally Purvir akele to honge bhale hi kidnapped par saki se to better hi he 😆 mereko ab rona nhi aa rha 🤣khushi ho rhi he 🤣

Haan Haan mereko pata he me baawri hu 😂 Kuch Naya Aaye to batana 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Next update jaldi dena 😆

Di I badly want something like this to happen in the showunka chori chipe milna..This will be cherry on the top ❤️😳🥳☺️

Pallavi di first of all I've become a fan ur style of writing.Ap itna simple r sober likhte ho & I feel this is the speciality of ur writing.❤️M apki writings s connect kar pati hu bcoz of its simplicity & u are able to dig out the emotions within us.😳

Maine itna lamba comment kisi ff pe nhi kiya but today I felt like to do so.❤️

Next part m restless vir milega..I m so damn excited🥳😳

Originally posted by: Piyaazzz

Once again interesting update👏yo sochke ki finally Purvir akele to honge bhale hi kidnapped par saki se to better hi he 😆 mereko ab rona nhi aa rha 🤣khushi ho rhi he 🤣

Haan Haan mereko pata he me baawri hu 😂 Kuch Naya Aaye to batana 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Next update jaldi dena 😆

Piyu tune comment bhi kar diya..r m likhti hi reh gayi

Iss baar bhi pehli baar comment nahi kar payi🥺💔

Originally posted by: sargamif

Di I badly want something like this to happen in the showunka chori chipe milna..This will be cherry on the top ❤️😳🥳☺️

Pallavi di first of all I've become a fan ur style of writing.Ap itna simple r sober likhte ho & I feel this is the speciality of ur writing.❤️M apki writings s connect kar pati hu bcoz of its simplicity & u are able to dig out the emotions within us.😳

Maine itna lamba comment kisi ff pe nhi kiya but today I felt like to do so.❤️

Next part m restless vir milega..I m so damn excited🥳😳

Thanku sargam.

Aaplog acche comments karte ho to dil khus ho jata hai.

Aur itne lambe comments k liye thanku🤗 padhkar accha laga