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Posted: 4 years ago
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Aa badiya tha yr🔥🔥🔥❤❤❤

Ye mukhi ne rula diya na humari mukhiyani ko🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Don't worry.Jitna rulaya h utna hasayega bhi.

There is lot more to it.Just wait and watch.😁

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Part 3 is so sad😒...hope thg ll fall in place in the future updates


Thks for this update 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Amazing plz do continue ❤️🥳🥳❤️🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Awsm Awsm awsm 👏👏👏

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: sargamif

Don't worry.Jitna rulaya h utna hasayega bhi.

There is lot more to it.Just wait and watch.😁

Sargam masttt update ❤️...thoda sad but awesome, continue please and keep posting yr updates phataphat only🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Potterhead_05

Sargam masttt update ❤️...thoda sad but awesome, continue please and keep posting yr updates phataphat only🤣

I will update it in a day or two.Anyway Thanks🙂

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Love Beyond Conditions


This is not a continuation of the original series.Just a random part.Bcoz a lot of you were saying that part-3 was really sad.So enjoy the sensuous romance of purvir.

V had never felt so lost before.He just couldn't believe what he saw-everywhere was smoke ,confusion,debris & the smell of raw flesh mixed with gun powder aas he reached the mill.His eyes burnt with tears & surrounding heat.He had to keep wiping them away to be able to see.He didn't know which way to go,which way to see.Where was his bawari?She had been here just few min ago covering the inauguration ceremony of teh new mill & she reached before him as he had work so he was late.It was just few min ago that he had learnt about an explosion in the mill from the driver while he was in the car.He did not know where to look for for his wife-his life-now.V felt drained.He knew his bawari was alive.She couldn't die,when he needed her the most.Not when their life was just beginning to blossom.

V had to fight the tears that rushed to come.He sought her in the rubble & all around it,with only her name on his lips,pushing aside every bit of wreckage he came across.But still there was no sign of her.Where are you bawari?He collapsed to the ground.,shouting for one last time ,bawari when he heard someone calling him & as he turned around he saw his bawari running towards him.They both had a passionate hug.She buried her face in his chest.He held her tightly to his chest.

V-(observing her body carefully)tanne kuch hua to nahi?Kahin chot to na lagi.

P- nahi hum theek hain.

V-(grabs her tightly)main bahut dar gaya tha..Lage tha tanne kho dunga..Pr driver bola ki..

P-ha wo hamara phone aa gaya tha or mill me wo dande nhi aa the the to hum bahar ha gaye.isiliye bach gaye.

V-(smiles)aree bawari..Wo dande nahi network hote hain.

P-ha wahi.

V embraced her.cried hua herat out & P trying to pacify him.They both leave for home.

(In the room)

V-M bahar se itna khadoos chehra banake rakhta hu...Par m tere sath to apna dar baat sake hu na?

P-ao hamare sath apni takleef nahi batenge to kiske sath batenge..Bataiye..

She caressed his cheek.

V-main bahut dar gaya tha ki kahi tanne kho na du..Tu mere ta sab kuch h..Main tanne ghana prem kare hu..Manne chod ke tu kahin na jayegi..m na jee paunga tere bina..Maine waada kar bawari.

P-hum apne kroor singh ko chod je bhala kha jayenge.

He comforts her.V leaned over to kiss her.P looked at V in surprise.However.she did not protest.Just stared.V kissed her again,this time more insistently & she was kissing back.They kissed again & again.V kissed her lips as, her cheeks,forehead,jise,ears & her lips again.He switched off the lights.When V hugged her again,

P-hume dar lag raha hain..Humne aisa kuch..

V-m janta hu..Par m khud ko rok na pa rha hu..

His hand reached her blouse hooks at the back.P grouped his hand hard.He slid his other hand under her dupatta.His palm was at last on her chest & finally on her waist.

P-ap aisa mat kijiye.

She held the bedsheet tightly.He shut her up with another kiss.Ahe wriggled a little but he kept kissing her.She started to respond.Her warmth & softness melted into V.He tugged at the loose end of her lehnga bringing her close to him.It was raining outside.It grew insistent,noisy,thumping the window rythmically.He kissed & naturally his hand went to her blouse.He plundered her neck,planting as many kisses as the raindrops on the window.

V-m teri bahut parvah karta hu.Tu sabse alag hain.m tere m khota chala ja raha hu.aisa pehle kabhi na hua sakshi k sath bhi na.

V gently pushed at ger shoulders to make her lie on the bed.He slid next to her.His finger dipping into her navel.He paused to kiss her there.He places her hand on his body.Passion repressed for years came forth unleashed.He bit her on the neck & kissed her all the time he was becoming one with her.

V-m janta hu meri zindagi ib pehle jaisi na reh jayegi..Or bhi khoobsurat ho jayegi..Sab teri wajah se.

P can only see happiness around her.

What happened only magnified his live for her.He wanted to draw her close,cuddle & keep her with him forever.

Edited by sargamif - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Awesome update n virendar likes her n he has feeling for her but he didn't still understand his feelings for her n he thought he only loves his first wife sakshi but he is not in peace seeing purvi crying n her all hopes is broken by him n he clearly told her that he will never love her n she is very upset n please pm me to whenever you update.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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College Admission

This is my own version of romantic cycle ride & college track.

It is the first day of her college & she is extremely nervous as she is now entering a completely different world taking one step ahead to achieve her dreams but in this happiness/thought she doesn't forget to express her gratitude to V.

(Previous day)

(Kids room)

Juhi-Haathi,to tum bhi kal se kya school jaogi?

P-arrey school to bachche jate h..Hum to college jayenge.

Manas-To tume bhi homework milega ab.

Just then vir enters.

V-Ke baat chal rhi h jungle ke praniyo ke beech mein.jara m bhi to sunu.

P-nhi hum to bas bachchon ko bata rhe the ki kal se hum bhi college jayenge.waise hum apko thank u bolna chahte the jo apne hmare liye kiya.

V-aree koi na.tu hi to chahti aage padna,apne pairon pe khade hona,naukari karna taki apni ma ke liya ek pakka makan banwa sake.ib tu maari patni h..Maari zimmedari h to tere sapne pure karna mera farz h.

And V stops suddenly realising what he just said.

P-(blushes)ha wo to thik kaha apne..hum apne pairon pe khada hona chate h..Ek min.apko ye sab kaise pata.ye to humne apni diary m likha tha..Kahin apne..

Just then V interrupts to avoid her question ya isliye ki kahin uski chori na pakdi jaye.

V-yo ke bad bad laga rakhi h tanne.bachchan ne bhi sone na de rhi..Chal ib

P-par hmari diary..

V-tu chori h ke bandook ki goli.ek bar nikal gayi to choos ke hi manegi wo khoon or tu dimag.yo ke diary diary laga rakha h Tanne..Manne na pata teri kitabe manne kit rakh di.

V-(acha hua jo baat taal di warna is bawari ne pata chal jata iski diary mere pas h)

P on her way to the room thinks about the past incidents that slow & steadily V is accepting her as his wife.

(Flashback)

(In the college-same day)

During the admission.

Principal-Namaste mukhiyaji.ap yaha.koi kam tha kya.?Hume bula liya hota.

V-arrey na..Ya mukhiyani h.iska apke college m dakhila karana h.

Pri.-Mukhiyaniji ap apne documents de dijiye or samjhiye admission ho gaya.waise apke academic records bahut impressive h.samjhiye admission ho gaya.Bas kuch formalities h jo puri karni h..Records ke liye.To bataiye apke pati ka naam.

P looks at V & signals him to tell his name.

P-naam bataiye apna.

V-kyuvtere muh m dahi jam gaya h ke ye mere nam me kaate lage h jo maara nam na bol sakti.

P-hum apka naam kaise ke sakte h.ap pati h hamare r pati ka naam nhi lete.

V-(Proudly)yo baat se..Virendra Pratap Singh

Pri-mukhiyani ji apka

P is about to say Purvi Virendra Pratap Singh but stops remembering that he told her that she is only purvi pratap singh.

P- ji hamara naam..Purvi Pratap Singh

V interrupts .

V-Purvi pratap singh na..Purvi Virendra pratap singh

P sees him in shock while V smiles.

There is more to it but I have to stop it here bcoz I had got some work so can't continue right now.Please bare with me.

Edited by sargamif - 4 years ago

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