Few lines...with pic

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@chimuli

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

Ok...friends helloo....
I have written some lines in hinglish..😆....please bear them patiently as I am no poet or more accurate prosaic person..but wait for our gems RK made me write this...😳
And do see the pic too n ofcourse comment ha!😉😊

ab nahi hota humse aur intezaar....🥺
darr hai kahi prayers na jaye bekaar...😲
kab dekhenge hum GP ko again......😃
kahi humare hopes chale na jaye in vain.....😒
though FF ka sahara hai aur VM ka sahara....😛
but again same question kab dekhenge hum unhe dobara.....❓
apni TV set se mera toot gaya hai rishta nata......
vaise bhi MRD ke baad uspe dekhne layak kuch nahi aata........🤔
But being optimistic now only this we can hope......❤️
that they make their appearence soon in a soap!🤗

Edited by tetuty66 - 16 years ago

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pennu

@pennu

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

Awsome tetuuuu.....

Arey wah tetu aap tho bede kavi nikale....

kya poem tha...

bus humaree dil ki baat taap apni andaaz me ki...

tho padkar mazaa agayaa.. yaaar...

and that pic... I simply loved it....

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@sami01

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

aww sana gp se hamara rishta hai aisa ke kya karein hum sab ban gaye kahin kavi ot kahin likhari... on seriosu note i loved ur poem and yaar pic is just awsome......love was indeed a moving sea between their shores of their souls....so so true u captured rk in these two lines.....

bhut ham sab ka pyaar hai besabr aur mujhe aa gaye yaad mirza ghalib wo kehte hain

ashiqi sabr talb aur tamana betaab ..

dil ka kya rang karoon khoone jigar hone tak.....

aur ek sher gp ke liye yeh hai..

hum ne mana ke daga kul na karoge lekin

khak ho jayenge hum tum ko khabar hone tak...

aah ko chahiye ek umr asar hone tak....very well done sana keep it up

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@chimuli

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: pennu
Awsome tetuuuu.....
Arey wah tetu aap tho bede kavi nikale....

kya poem tha...

bus humaree dil ki baat taap apni andaaz me ki...

tho padkar mazaa agayaa.. yaaar...

and that pic... I simply loved it....

Thank you pen..🤗.......
yes I am waiting eagerly to see them again....

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@nikki00

Beginner

Posted: 16 years ago

ahh!!! i miss my mrd sooooooooo much................wat to do ???? kya din the woh bhi yaaro ..............

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@chimuli

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sami01
aww sana gp se hamara rishta hai aisa ke kya karein hum sab ban gaye kahin kavi ot kahin likhari... on seriosu note i loved ur poem and yaar pic is just awsome......love was indeed a moving sea between their shores of their souls....so so true u captured rk in these two lines.....
bhut ham sab ka pyaar hai besabr aur mujhe aa gaye yaad mirza ghalib wo kehte hain

ashiqi sabr talb aur tamana betaab ..

dil ka kya rang karoon khoone jigar hone tak.....

aur ek sher gp ke liye yeh hai..

hum ne mana ke daga kul na karoge lekin

khak ho jayenge hum tum ko khabar hone tak...

aah ko chahiye ek umr asar hone tak....very well done sana keep it up

Thank you Sami....for appreciating pic as well as poem....😳
Yes their love was indeed a sea.................❤️😍
wah wah!!⭐️.........loved these lines you wrote ,so apt!....👏

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sasha722

@sasha722

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

T2 aapi ki jo halta hai
so hum sab ki hai
waiting when I hear from them
Srolling tellybuzz , opening their web site
trying 2 search when de 2 awesome will hit
the screen
cant understand why so much Interza ( waiting )
They were nominated 4 best Jodi, She was nominated
for best Bhahu
Than Why???????????????????????????//

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namita25

@namita25

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

sana...............wah ...wah ..................wah.............
Kya lines likhee hain aapne......................................👏👍🏼👍🏼
aapne to humaare dil ki daastaan kah di.........................😳😳
sach kaha yaar ....... it seems now as if T.V set se rishta toot hi gaya hai.......................😔
there is nothing worth watching................................😔
all we can do is HOPE..............HOPE.....................and only HOPE............................................tthat soon we will a chance to see these amazing people ...............

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Ocean_deep

@Ocean_deep

Beginner

Posted: 16 years ago

Very nice tetuty....
lines are too nice...
yes they depect our anxieties to see them again...
Hope we wont be let down...
Pic and those lines are too good!

~Ocean