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@sami01

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Posted: 16 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: skeptical
Sammyji,
Meri kudi kuch kam nahi hai. "Love Disclosed" mein age dekho hota hai kya..........😉

haanji haanji bhejo bhejo madam kranti ko bhi zara hum bhi dekhein abhi baithe hain hum bus intezzaar mein .......aur taiyaar hain apne munde ke liye maidaan mein😆

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poetic

@poetic

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Posted: 16 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: skeptical

Come back .........baba ................Come back

Are you a part of the Rat brigade? OMG 🤢

Jaya, didn't know about ur obsession with Skep's Rat? 😆

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poetic

@poetic

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Posted: 16 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: skeptical
Sammyji,
Meri kudi kuch kam nahi hai. "Love Disclosed" mein age dekho hota hai kya..........😉

Yes, yes, yes 😃

Sam, you wait.

Don't go so ga ga over Raju, as yet.

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poetic

@poetic

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Posted: 16 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: skeptical

Poet one request,

Please put your comments on a fresh page everytime. I rarely come back to an earlier page. If you edit and continue on a earlier page, its likely that I shall miss it and I don't want to do that. Pleeeeaaasssseee? 😳

Ok I will surely comment on a fresh post. 😊

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namita25

@namita25

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Posted: 16 years ago

#25

skep a great piece of work as usaul............
I really liked to see BBR's character brooding in positivity while in the serial she was an inane character................
here the entire family is a united group........so much that even BBR's daughter addresses Kranti as choti maa.......
kranti endures all the pain to make her family members happy.........................
Raj is really concerned about Kranti.............thats the basic reason he is sending her to shimla.....he wants her to recover as soon as possible...........
well I am impatiently waiting for the next part

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@chimuli

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#26

Skep as usual beautiful....👏
The way you showed Madhu I liked it ,she is a human here....yes she is!!....
No negativity.......so pure I felt such a good family....
Raj wants her to go to Shimla ...for her benefit only..though he knows how badly he will miss him!
Kranti angry on him for doing so...
Bond between Kranti n Pammi visible as she decides to talk to raj....oh!!...wao!!
n last but not the least the way u showed them in last...I mean both together...😍
...........waiting for next part..😳

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sasha722

@sasha722

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#27

Skepi What a Romantic piece of work
Very touchy , mature love
so aesthetic u r showing their feelings
Mar Jawa my dear
Impatiently Next part

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netu19

@netu19

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Posted: 16 years ago

#28

tit for tat...... 😆😆
if it ll prompt you for faster updates....
wat i wanted to tell you last night is

i dont know what you do
but you do it well
i am under your spell

skepti i adored this introduction!!!!!! it was so romantic and so emotional...
sheer brilliance with which you potrayed kranti s state.....made me so touchy for Kranti....she is so upset....n crying ....doesnt want to go but has to....

i m happy that BBR not negative....her relationship with Kranti so sweet

ohh kranti was so much herself in bashing Raj....her reactions always passionate be it love or anger....
thats wat i loving about all your stories... that characters not moulded on the way....

n loved the comfortable relationship of husband n wife....where she can be herself...she know that he can take it n understand.....
But she knew she would be leaving...
she knows him well enough to know that he wont be changing his mind
since ages havent seen in any show such complete relationship n gud interactions between husband n wife...
but all those abuses were indeed mazedar....Raj being bashed in front of her mother...n she thinks her DIL is right.. rare phenomena....but like this fabolous bonding b/w chaiji n kranti...

loved the way Raj holds her and comforted her..... their immense love....feeling of not being able to live without each other.....was just awesome....
everytime with your scenes u give love a far deeper meaning...

Edited by netu19 - 16 years ago

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akashruti12

@akashruti12

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Posted: 16 years ago

#29

ohhhhh its vry nice skepti...........

u hav shows raj's luv nd care 4 kranti vry nicely..........

its AWESMMMMMM ...............

want 2 read it agn n agn......

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meftal

@meftal

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#30

a great piece of work as usual,good to see madhu acting here positively,kranti as chhoti ma😎 so kranti wanted to chew his heart😆oh my dear raj waiting for next part.,really wanted to read again and again

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