Love disclosed Concluded 12/4 - Page 16

Skepi
@Kranti had somehow fastened Raj to her. Those hands told their own story. No one would be able to measure the comfort that she sought from him. No one would be able to guess the amount of stability she gave him. Every time she clutched his hand, she was cementing their bond. And if sometimes she didn't take his hand in hers, then he would offer his hand to her. He needed her to hold his hand ……. and to hold it forever.

ur body language is wonderful
Emotion, passion, 4 oness
the love heat is 2222222good
ur story put me complete Imagination
i am visualizing the complete story


ur 222222good skepi

Pl update the next part soon so we have good Sunday

@ Poetic I read ur post
what an analysis
I loved this part
It's true that he was doing all these to assure Kranti, but definitely didn't mean that he was not terrified. He felt responsible for both lives I guess. That's why he held her close under water to assure them both.
Very Touchy

Poetic i wait 4 ur short stories Pl write
Ur all girls r marvelous when u pen down
Pari, Bonai Skepi, Poetic Ananya

Originally posted by: sasha722

Skepi

Pl update the next part soon so we have good Sunday

Originally posted by: tetuty66

Long time no see ................... where have you been T2?? 😲

Skep I went to nani's house...........😳
thank god u didnt updated when I was away.....😃
haiii...😍........Skep I m loving it....
this snack is deliciousss.....😆

yes Skep......nani is too close to me.....Oh!!..what not all the things that she could,she made me eat ...
ahhhh!!...I loved it too......n fact that she is always on my side when it comes to defending me from my mum's complains.....oh!..I had fun..
And update..yes yes...I am too restless.....n curious n whoa! surprise.....ummm
snack might b too deliciousss............
n after that MRD our way..i mean ur way...😉.....
oh!!.......aap na hoti toh hum dreamers ka kya hota??😲😆..I m waiting for update!!!

Originally posted by: skeptical

Welcome..........Ocean.

Nice to see you turn vocal after being silent.

oh skeptical I had to acknowledge ......
👏..so beautifully you write.......
Ofcourse your writings made me to post here.....👍🏼alongwith the charm of the forum😉

Originally posted by: skeptical

Shall defo try to. Since its the concluding part and an important one, it will need a bit of thinking, since all the loose ends have to be tied up. And frankly speaking its going to be the cutest and the most romantic one.........................not passionate. Let me just read up my book of spells and concoct the best magic potion...................😉 😉

The epi will be dedicated to Poet

Ok my Friendly Neighbourhood Witch,

I am sure you have all the potions and ingredients lined up. I will be veryyyyyyyyyyy patient.

Thank you so much. 😃🤗

Originally posted by: poetic

Ok my Friendly Neighbourhood Witch,

I am sure you have all the potions and ingredients lined up. I will be veryyyyyyyyyyy patient.

Thank you so much. 😃🤗

ahaan......skepy i read the last part.....kya baat hai re......i was actually as tense as raj and kranti would be in similar situation ...ur imagination and river.....thank god u used concept of river...punjab is nothing without rivers and every love story of it is connected to diffrent banks of diffrent rivers....