Love disclosed Concluded 12/4 - Page 14

Hi friends ......

Originally posted by: skeptical

My mermaid,

Actually, long ago there was a thread devoted to this......uhm it was called MRD and P&P. So many people have had similar thoughts

Originally posted by: skeptical

Oye Poet,

Intezaar karo................ once this Love Disclosed is done, I shall devote all my energy to MRD and continue to finish it. No spin-offs in between.

Then I am going to continue with my Moonbeams and one more. Both these stories will not involve any character from MRD. Joey had told me to shift to FF section if the forum closed down by then or to go to Writer's corner. If the forum is still existent, I shall start these stories here itself.

Lekin abhi Dilli thodi duur hai...........😉

Skep,

Then I can wait for eternity. 😭

I don't want to finish, though I know I am being selfish.

IT's the only link to the MRD we loved, I love.

For once I will be selfish.

Originally posted by: Dawn Idol

Hi friends ...... Gr8 to have you back, Walter

I'm back after a long long break ..........

How I missed you all ........... missed you too

The first thing I did on my return was to check MRD forum ....... it is like home-coming for me .....

🤗🤗.............. to all of you .......... muaaahhhhhhhh

And now to the most imp part .....

Skep .... my dear ............ I've told this before and am not bothered I'm repeating myself ..............oh I don't mind 😉

You raise the bar every time you add a part to this story ..........

Hats off dear ...........* low bow* ........

I read the last 2 parts together .............

And ........ WOW ................!!!!!!!!

I am floored !!!!!!

The marriage part was super-duper ..............

What a fab portrayal of a rougish Raj ........ and Kranti .... unable to do a thing about it in front of the family ..............

But then ....... she doesn't hesitate to hold his hand in public .... in front of the family ........ what a brilliant mix of a Shy, demure Kranti ...........

and a Kranti, who deeply loves her husband and is not afraid to express it .......

Such a wonderful display of deep affection & love .. .... physical & verbal ........ expressed & implied .......

Totally loved this display of feelings between husband and wife .......

Kranti's display of love towards Sehar ........ Sighhhhhhh ...... made me want to go and hug my Mom !!!!!!!!!so sweet

And Arwen ....... remember once we were talking about passionate scenes ?

We had agreed it Skep makes up her mind to pen one down ......

It would a class act ...... ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh 😉

That is what the scene in the forest was ........

Passionate ..... sizzling ........ crackling ..... and yet so tastefully described .......

Loved the totally supportive Chaiji & the lovable boistrous Kullu ......

Kewal and BBR being perfect in their respective parts .......

🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 to you my dear ......

......... once again Skep ........... U r the BEST Thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

Originally posted by: skeptical

The next episode is going to be a little longer than usual and full of adventure and ahem* ahem* 😉

So the update will come tmrw night. It will hence take a little longer for me to write

Ahaaa😛... so this time our santa have bag full of adventures and ahem ahem....😉

Originally posted by: pennu

Ahaaa😛... so this time our santa have bag full of adventures and ahem ahem....😉

We kids are waiting near the chimney dear....😃
throw the update soon....

thanks a lot for the update skep..............
so finally Raj managed to bamboozle the Brits..............by remaining underwater for a long time..............😊😊
I really liked the way he did it...........👏👏👏
skep I was totally hooked on while reading this part.......👍🏼.👍🏼
he took all the precautions to ensure his safety as well as that of Kranti.Their love for each other is clearly evident............ finally they managed to find a cache where they could stay safely.........
and now for the last part...hmmmmmm😍....................loved it to the core....................
these lines clearly show the depth of their relationship:

Those hands told their own story............................ Every time she clutched his hand, she was cementing their bond. And if sometimes she didn't take his hand in hers, then he would offer his hand to her.

and dear plz update the next part soon:

Well Skep....u sure know how to keep the readers hooked on to your stories😊
agree with Dawn...u r fast becoming my favorite author....

loved today's part👏....a clever Raj is a really nice thing........and loved the way u portrayed Kranti's vulnerabilitiy......
and the ahem ahem had me blushing blushing😳 my mom must be wondering what's up with me..am i feverish or what....cant exactly tell her the cause of my ailments now can i 😆

eagerly waiting for the next part now...
thanks

Well Skep....u sure know how to keep the readers hooked on to your stories😊
agree with Dawn...u r fast becoming my favorite author....

loved today's part👏....a clever Raj is a really nice thing........and loved the way u portrayed Kranti's vulnerabilitiy......
and the ahem ahem had me blushing blushing😳 my mom must be wondering what's up with me..am i feverish or what....cant exactly tell her the cause of my ailments now can i 😆

eagerly waiting for the next part now...
thanks
and the ahem ahem had me blushing blushing oh my God !!!!!!!! kuch zyada likh diya kya? 😲

Fantabulous Skep ............. Hats off .............