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Originally posted by: dinky_05

ahhhh!!!!!😍......skepti ji i hv just read all d updates of love disclosed.......kya kahu... kya kahu mere paas shabd hi nahi hai apki tareef k layak.👏......u know something u r a magician.....truly amazing

each n every lines hypnotizes me.......i m not in state of mind to write anything more............apne jaadu kar diya ...

OK Skepy, me back after re-re-reading the update.

This part is mainly about Kranti's journey to SHimla with her baby and Mother-in-law.

See now I want to take a break and go to Shimla. I think I need a break badly.

First thing first, I love this relationship that Kranti shares with her mother-in-law. Touchwood. It would be so good if the DILs in our country could say so. I always liked Chaijee, even in the soap, and this element in ur FF doesn't make it as a disbelief. The way she holds her hand implies two things -that she cheerishes the love she receives from her, and the trust she has bestowed in her. Very nice,

This update also shows the way that Chaijee understands Kranti on an individual level and not only as her daughter in law. She understands that the only PDA that Kranti shares with Raj in front of others is not only due to her love for Raj, but because of the trust and security and sense of belonging she finds in his being.

Raj is his naughty, abominable sense. But whatever his actions are, his love for Kranti comes through. He hides his anxiety well, but that doesnt mean it's not there.

They were fugitives and were hiding in a shack in the forect. Hmm. Means Raj got actively involved witht he KKs against the British Government. The jungle is not a bad place for romance u see ...

Me waiting patiently for next update.

Originally posted by: poetic

OK Skepy, me back after re-re-reading the update.

This part is mainly about Kranti's journey to SHimla with her baby and Mother-in-law.

See now I want to take a break and go to Shimla. I think I need a break badly.

First thing first, I love this relationship that Kranti shares with her mother-in-law. Touchwood. It would be so good if the DILs in our country could say so. I always liked Chaijee, even in the soap, same here and this element in ur FF doesn't make it as a disbelief. The way she holds her hand implies two things -that she cheerishes the love she receives from her, and the trust she has bestowed in her. Very nice,

This update also shows the way that Chaijee understands Kranti on an individual level and not only as her daughter in law. She understands that the only PDA that Kranti shares with Raj in front of others is not only due to her love for Raj, but because of the trust and security and sense of belonging she finds in his being. Exactly

Raj is his naughty, abominable sense. But whatever his actions are, his love for Kranti comes through. He hides his anxiety well, but that doesnt mean it's not there.

They were fugitives and were hiding in a shack in the forect. Hmm. Means Raj got actively involved witht he KKs against the British Government. The jungle is not a bad place for romance u see ...

Me waiting patiently for next update.

Originally posted by: poetic

Update kab hoga?

Hey even I am not sure but just thought would mention.. but surely this series is too gud.. I am still thinking what next will she cme out of her flashback in next part or u will go ahead with shmla scene.. crazy dreamers u will say but This dose is needed..

thanks again

Hi,

I have been reading your story and juxtapositioned MRD serial with it, what was bothering me was I think I had seen the initial flavours of the MRD serial in an English classic, you know I am talking about the get together where the Guv General was introduced for the first time, the part where Sanjay and Nirmal again meets, the part where the mami is trying to get both her daughters married into rich families. The book which I am talking about is "Pride & Prejudice" by Jane Austen. To me Kranti has shade of Elizabeth & Rajveer has shades of Darcy. The Mami had flavours of Mrs.Bennet and Mamaji of Mr.Bennet.

Now I know why I fell for this serial. "Pride & Prejudice" is one of my most loved novel. It is just a thought that i wanted to share.

regards
Water 😊

Originally posted by: watergirl68in

Hi,

I have been reading your story and juxtapositioned MRD serial with it, what was bothering me was I think I had seen the initial flavours of the MRD serial in an English classic, you know I am talking about the get together where the Guv General was introduced for the first time, the part where Sanjay and Nirmal again meets, the part where the mami is trying to get both her daughters married into rich families. The book which I am talking about is "Pride & Prejudice" by Jane Austen. To me Kranti has shade of Elizabeth & Rajveer has shades of Darcy. The Mami had flavours of Mrs.Bennet and Mamaji of Mr.Bennet.

Now I know why I fell for this serial. "Pride & Prejudice" is one of my most loved novel. It is just a thought that i wanted to share.

regards
Water 😊

Water, you just said it. Pride and Prejudice. Hence my love for this serial never diminishes.

See, Rajbir had pride to start with and Kranti was prejudiced against him from the start.

Me gonna read P&P again.

😊

Poet

Originally posted by: skeptical

The next episode is going to be a little longer than usual and full of adventure and ahem* ahem* 😉

So the update will come tmrw night. It will hence take a little longer for me to write

Ha, is it so? Double doses of adventure and *ahem ahem* ? 😉

Well I am in for it, so a little more patience ain't gonna kill me. 😆 Though it's highly despicable. 😭

And I am also looking forward to MRD ... our way. 😃😆

Thanks for your lovely updates.

Originally posted by: watergirl68in

Hi,

I have been reading your story and juxtapositioned MRD serial with it, what was bothering me was I think I had seen the initial flavours of the MRD serial in an English classic, you know I am talking about the get together where the Guv General was introduced for the first time, the part where Sanjay and Nirmal again meets, the part where the mami is trying to get both her daughters married into rich families. The book which I am talking about is "Pride & Prejudice" by Jane Austen. To me Kranti has shade of Elizabeth & Rajveer has shades of Darcy. The Mami had flavours of Mrs.Bennet and Mamaji of Mr.Bennet.

Now I know why I fell for this serial. "Pride & Prejudice" is one of my most loved novel. It is just a thought that i wanted to share.

regards
Water 😊

Oye Poet,