The Ressurection of Kranti... a story

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Posted: 16 years ago
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I am putting this down as a piece of essay writing. In school, we used to be given an outline of a story which we had to expand and write in our own words. Consider this to be one such assignment where Friday's episode was the loose outline. This is not Kranti's POV. This is not to support her either. This is not to run down the hero. Not at all. This is just a story and treat it as reading material only. Of course your comments are most welcome.
Kranti was travelling by the family car to meet her mamaji. She was actually going to meet ther KKs. Her husband had found out about her secret messages to her friends and she was convinced that he was on their trail. She knew he would do anything for his father and the gori sarkar. He had been shadowing her for a couple of days and was at times behaving in an understanding manner. This raised doubts in her. Why was he peeping through the curtains? Why was he being nice to her? What was he upto?
She now realised that he may play the informer for the British. She had heard him so on the phone. In her haste to reach the spot of activity, she slipped and fell. Out of nowhere her husband came and saved her from being crushed under the tempo. She was a bit unnerved and winded from the roll. She was about to thank him. Was she wrong to consider him a swine? Just then a posse of cops came on the scene. Her eyes narrowed. This was a trap after all. She needed time. She wanted her KK friends to get time to escape. So she concocted some story to set the Britishers off the track.
Her husband was going to face the ire of the Brits. Let him. She didn't care. He deserved it. When he returned that evening, he was in a rage. She was happy. He had lost on both fronts. His reputation was in th dumps with the govt and with her too. She found victory sweet and rubbed it in. He didn't like the taste of defeat. But then, did anyone? He was always the one to crush, so when he was crushed he couldn't take it. He threw her clothes in a suitcase and told her to leave the house. He could tell her that because the RB had gone and so had his place with the Brits.
She stood her ground and wouldn't go. So he pulled her by the arm and dragged her down the steps. He yelled at her to get lost and stay out of the house. He threw her down along with her suitacse. She lifted herself up. Tears welled up in her eyes. Why was it that she had to face humiliation over and over again? Her aunt had sold her out for money to the highes bidder. Now her husband had sold her out to the goras. She wasn't afraid of death. She knew she would do anything for her country. Why had she ever tried to think that he was different now?
She wouldn't be played around with any more. She sucked in her breath. She wouldn't cry any more. It was the death of her hope in man. Life was a game of power and money. She wanted no part in such a game. She would go her way. She would live a life that she wanted. The way her parents had lived. She didn't want to think of her husband or his family. She didn't want any encumberences anymore. What was family anyway? She lifted herself to her feet and took a step forward. Her feet were trembling. But she was brave. She slowly walked to the door. She didn't look back. Looking back would be yearning. What was there to yearn for in this house? She didn't want to take anything with her.
She opened the door. There was a new world waiting for her outside. She would begin her new life. Tomorrow was another day. Now she would look for a better life in a free India.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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skepy i like it hope creatives had shown kranti strong here too and i hope they do.....because....her character is very strong not some one who can cry at such stalking by raj..why degrade hero in such way its a soap where he plays hero he was basically decent human being with her why suddenly this highhandedness......its simply not accepted voilence against women is something which cannot be toelerated even at very small levels...
let kranti be the brave one and work towards independence of her country raj can repent alone and .....the time to introduce new character is now i guess but hero needs to brought back .....😔
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Posted: 16 years ago
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i agree kranti shud leave for a while but i highly doubt it!! u hav written very well ..👏......i dun think i hav to mention tht ...cuz u alwayz do!! 😊
i think friday's show was the bomb to which everyone is still blasting😆😆😆!! koi kranti par toh koi raj par!!😉 very decent post ....👏but how much ever u say tht its not any pov .....but its definatly u talking frm kranti's pov!!😆
kya kare .........kranti supporters ghum phir kar kranti par aa jaate hai n raj supporters on raj!! and the issue remains the same!!😆
anyway ...........i luved wat u wrote and i cud juss feel kranti whie reading it!!😊
Edited by Bugger - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Skepti I think this was very well written👏👏👏..even though I m from Pro-Raj camp but I support the fact that Kranti's thoughts in your essay was extremely positive👏👏👏 than what was shown in the actual serial👎🏼
Even in the new promo its shown that Raj actually throws Kranti directly out of the house and other family members r just looking at her😕..then the voiceover says "Will Raj's family support Kranti this time ??"😕..
I will never want Raj's family to show sympathy for Kranti and take her inside and then Kranti too behave like a ninny😡..
Its better if the creatives see this post of yours and actually follow this👏..Kranti better leave from there and pay her full attention only on Country's freedom than anything else😊
Afterwards Raj slowly will realize his mistake and will start his transformation process and also bring back Kranti mission which will b interesting to watch😉😛..
If Kranti continues to sit in the doorstep and cry ,then it will actually kill her strong character😔..and Raj too will never change his views then...Kranti should actually shock Raj completely by walking out of the house without dropping a single tear from her eyes😃..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Beautiful👏 I really like it and i hope that it happens this way in the show as well. It will be a great way of resurrecting Kranti's character. But may be i shouldn't have too many expectations. The creatives do manage to surprise us every now and then but this show and its characters have so much scope and they haven't utilized it fully. So its wait and watch.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Arwen...

Beautiful👏 I really like it and i hope that it happens this way in the show as well. It will be a great way of resurrecting Kranti's character. But may be i shouldn't have too many expectations. The creatives do manage to surprise us every now and then but this show and its characters have so much scope and they haven't utilized it fully. So its wait and watch.

Hello Arwen,
You're right. "its characters have so much scope and they haven't utilized it fully" That is the real tragedy of this serial. BTW I am Skep and I hope we interact more often in the forum. 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: ektay11

wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

amazing

Heya girl, Good to see you after so long. All's well with you?? 😆
Seebz thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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mindblowing skepti👏..
From now if I get any essay to do I'll knock your door Professor Skepti..
Coming back to it, U have expressed her thoughts very well as u have designed the character. I hope our hopes dont go to drain and Cratives take care of it ASAP. you have expressed her death of hope which I think is amazing. Now she would get her confident back which she unknowingly shifed to Raj and fight her own battle without any problem. She should pack-up and leave with-out even turning back making family memebr's realise she is right and had done nothing wrong.
But we know creative sdon't we??They may surprise us or just give us a false hope..We will know it soon...they should show the septh of the show and strength of the plot and a spirit of a KK which Kranti is missing at this time but she used to have. she shouldn't get emotional because they never shared any feeling. If she is a KK, She should take it as opportunity to leave her enemy's house doesn't matter hoe close she got to the family as they are safe. This could work in her favor but she has to be strong. I think..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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@ Skep - thanks and I hope so too. 😊 That's why i have joined the forum, to interact with the people whose views and comments i have been reading for the past couple of months. 😊

Eagerly waiting for todays episode - lets hope that are hopes and expectations are not dashed once again.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wonderful Skep ..........
Was away for the week end and missed a lot ..............
You have brought out K's feeling perfectly ...............
Hope K is show like this ............
I would very much like her to walk out .............without a backward glance ...............

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