MayUr SS: Kabhi Sath Na Choote C 12 pg 36 - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
nice update...
Thanks paulomi for the PM :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
Good start
looking forward for next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
lovely update.. jalsi se nupur ko dikhao na..😊
and if possible please PM me..☺️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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interesting concept & start
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: hasiniangel

lovely update.. jalsi se nupur ko dikhao na..😊
and if possible please PM me..☺️

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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Very nice start...nice concept
..lovely update n emotional too...
Jiyu is so cute..papa k ladli..hmm now waiting for nupur entry..
Thanku so much dear for writing ff on mayur..n sorry for late comment. .thori buzy thi..ab jaldi sa next part update karo n pm me next time plzz ..again thanku so much n plz write more os n ffs on mayur 😃
Continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very nice update.
very diffrent story. update soon.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: rimshazeb

Very nice start...nice concept
..lovely update n emotional too...
Jiyu is so cute..papa k ladli..hmm now waiting for nupur entry..
Thanku so much dear for writing ff on mayur..n sorry for late comment. .thori buzy thi..ab jaldi sa next part update karo n pm me next time plzz ..again thanku so much n plz write more os n ffs on mayur 😃
Continue soon

thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 2

AT evening Mayank's office :

Mayank ka phone bajta hain.

Mayank : Hello,

Gayatri : Kaha ho tum beta?

Mayank : Are maa main to office me hi hu. Kyun?Kya hua maa? Aap bahot pareshaan lag rahi ho.

Gayatri : Mere pareshani ka karan tum or tumhari ladli hi hain.

Mayank : Matlab?

Gayatri : Agar tume pata tha ki tumhe aaj aane me deri hogi to tumne Jiya ko dinner ke liye promice kyun kia?

Mayank ko yad aata hain ki usne Jiyana ko promice kiya tha ki wo aaj usse shopping pe le jayega aur uske bad dinner bhi bahar hi karwayega.

Mayank : O shitt!!!Main to ye baat bhul hi gaya tha. Maa please aap usko phone do na..main bat karta hu usse.

Gayatri : Are usne pura ghar apne sar pe liya hua hain. Tumhe to malum hain ki jab wo gussa hoti hain tab ghar ki halat kya hoti hain. Wo ab to apne kamre me hain aur usne kaha hain ki jab papa aayenge tabhi wo kamrese bahar aayegi. Tum kab aa rahe ho beta?

Mayank : Haa maa me agle aadhe ghante me ghar pe hu. Tab tak aap please sambhalna.

Mayank turant ghar ke liye niklta hain. Mayank ghar me pahochta hain. Wo Gayatri se Jiyana ke baare me puchta hain. Gayatri sirf uske room ki taraf ungli dikhati hain. Mayank Jiyana ke room ke darwaje se chupke se ander dekhta hain. Jiyana apne bed pe so rahi thi. Mayank uske room me chupchap jata hain.

Jiyana : Mujhe pata hai ke aap hi ho papa.Par main aapki koi baat nehi sunungi aur naahi aapse baat karungi.Main aapse naraaz hu.Kati!Katti!Katti!

Mayank : Are bapre!!! Itna gussa...Vo bhi itnisi nak pe? Beta I am sorry.Wo kya hain na papa ko bahot important kam tha isiliye aane me deri hui. Please papa ko maf karo.

Jiyana sirf uthkar beth jati hain.

Mayank : Beta abhi shopping ke liye to nahi ja sakte par bahar dinner karne to ja sakte hain na. Chalo jaldi ready ho jao. Aaj papa Jiyana ko ready karenge.

Jiyana : Nehi main nehi jaaungi.

Mayank : Kyun?Maine to kitna plan kiya tha ki hum bahar jayenge, khana khayenge, uske bad hum log Jiyana ki favourite Ice Cream khayenge.

Ice-cream ka naam sunte hi Jiyana ke chehre par raunak aa jaati hai.

Jiyana : Sach papa!!!Hum ice-cream khaayenge??

Mayank : Haa pakka..

Jiyana phataak se maan jaati hai aur vo chalne ke liye bhi tayyar ho jaati hai.

Jiyana : Aur ek bat. Aaj me aapke sath soungi. Aaj aap mujhe story bhi sunayenge aur lori bhi gayenge.

Mayank : Hmmm...ok my Angel . Pakka.To chalo jaldi ready ho jao.

Mayank Jiyana ko tayyar karke uske sath niche aata hain aur Gayatri ko bhi ready ho jane ko bolta hain. Lekin Gayatri mana karti hain.

Gayatri : Are nahi beta. Aaj mujhe nahi jamega. Meri tabiyat thodi kharab hain.

Mayank : Ma kya hua aapko? Me abhi doctor ko phone karta hu.

Gayatri : Are nahi beta. Maine doctor ko phone kiya tha. Aur medicines bhi liye hain. Ab me thoda aaram karne room me jati hu. Tum dono jao aur haa jaldi aa jana..

Mayank aur Jiyana bahaar jaate hain.

At restaurant :

Jiyana aur Mayank hotel me jate hain. Wo dono table pe beth jate hain. Tabhi Jiyana ki najar ek family pe parti hain. Usme Jiyana ke jaisi hi choti ladki apne maa ke pass beth hui thi aur uski maa usse khana khilati thi. Jiyana ye dekh kar naraj hoti hain. Mayank ye dekhta hain.

Mayank : Kya hua beta? Papase naraj ho abhi bhi?

Jiyana : Naa papa..Papa meri mummybhi mujhe aisehi khana kab khilayenngi?

Mayank kuch nahi bolta. Wo sirf uske taraf dekhne lagta hain. Aur man mein bolta hain : Beta me samaj sakta hu tera dard. Lekin kya karu beta? Tumhari mummy ko to khabar bhi nahi hain ki uski raah dekhnewale iss dunia me hain. Wo toh apne hi dunia me mashgul hain aur wo bhi itni ki usne ek bar bhi koshish nahi ki ki uske bad tumhara haal kaisa hain?

Tabhi Jiyana usse hilati hain.

Jiyana : Papa, bolona mumma kab aanewali hain? Unka kam kab khatm honewala hain?

Mayank : Are papa ne bola na mumma ab jald hi humare saath reheko aanewali hain. Chalo ab jaldi jaldi batao kya khaogi? Fir hume ice cream bhi to khani hain na..Chalo batao..

Wo khane ka order dete hain. Khana khane ke bad dono ice cream khate hain aur ghar aate hain.

Ghar aaneke bad Mayank Jiyana ko jaldi so jane ko bolta hain.

Jiyana : Papa aap bhul gaye na ki aap mujhe lori gakar sulanewale ho. fir...

Mayank : Sorry baby..papa bhul gaye..aur wo usko room me change karne ko le jata hain. Change karneke bad wo usse bed pe leta deta hain. Tabhi Jiyana Nupur ki photo saath me lekar let jati hain.

Mayank : Ye kya kar rahi ho Jiya?

Jiyana : Papa jab mumma aayengi na tab me unko aise hi hug karke soungi..

Mayank : Achha!!! Matlab mumma aane ke bad papa se pyar kum hoga na..

Jiyana : Naa papa.. Aap , me aur Mumma hum sab saath ssaath rahenge na fir...

Mayank : Ok ok chalo ab jaldi se so jao.. Aur wo lori ga kar usse sulata hain.

Agle din:

It was Sunday morning:

Mayank news paper padh raha tha. Tabhi Gayatri uske pass aati hain..

Gayatri : Beta wo Jiyana ki school ki diary dekhna jara. Kal me diary dekhna bhul gayi..

Mayank : Haa mom.. Abhi dekhta hu.

Mayank uske kamre me jata hain aur Jiyana ke taraf dekhta hain...

Mayank : Sote hue to bilkul meri pari apni mummy ki tarah dikhti hain..

Tabhi Jiyana aankhe kholti hain...

Mayank : Good morning bachha..

Jiyana : Good morning Papa..

Mayank : Ho gayi meri rajkumari ki neend puri...

Jiyana : Naa papa..thori aur der sone do na...

Mayank : Thik hain lekin papa to aaj Jiya ko bahar shopping ke liye le janewale the..

Jiyana : Sachhi papa...yeee...wow...papa wo kya hain na humare school me na fashion dress ka compitition hain to mujhe naye naye dress chahiye...

Mayank : Haa..to chalo le aate hain na...chalo jaldi ready ho jao...

Jiyana uthkar Mayank ko hug karti hain...aur bhagkar ready hone ko jati hain..

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ketaki19

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