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Posted: 12 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: Faria.



tujhe haar +ve baat -ve tarah se sochna plus bolna accha laagta hai

kitna khus tha maine ab amtl end karne ki baat bol kar meri mood kharab kardi tune


btw bandhan bhi update kar dena. i want to see that hypocrite sameers next step..LOL oops -sams tou teri fav hai...


dekh ek na ek din to khatam karna hi hai re

AMTL khatam hoga to dekh aur do to laayi hu na aur mere store mein abhi aur 3 hai

sam hypocrite nehi hai itni gaaliya mat de usko ab dekhna kitna funny funny moments aayega
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: -Paulomi-


dekh ek na ek din to khatam karna hi hai re

AMTL khatam hoga to dekh aur do to laayi hu na aur mere store mein abhi aur 3 hai

sam hypocrite nehi hai itni gaaliya mat de usko ab dekhna kitna funny funny moments aayega


I tried to like Sam but his each and every moment towards indira made me angry on him. And I really don't want to hate Sam. Par kya kare.. I hope soon he will fall for Indira

and btw waiting for funny moment..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83

3 more FF??????
OMG - really
yeee

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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
dekh ek na ek din to khatam karna hi hai re

AMTL khatam hoga to dekh aur do to laayi hu na aur mere store mein abhi aur 3 hai

sam hypocrite nehi hai itni gaaliya mat de usko ab dekhna kitna funny funny moments aayega

I tried to like Sam but his each and every moment towards indira made me angry on him. And I really don't want to hate Sam. Par kya kare.. I hope soon he will fall for Indira

and btw waiting for funny moment..

hoga hoga sab hoga
Edited by -Paulomi- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
Kiya pallu starting me dara diya huma ..I was like pta nhi muskaan kaha chali gyi h 😕 ..per thankgod mil gyi..awee so sweet apna bhaio ka pass sona tha osa..
Muskaan kitna lucky h..sab kitna pyar karta h osa..our hna b chahiya humara mayur k muskaan jo h..
Very nice update pallu janii..
Continue soon

N yeh kiya sun rhi ho me to ATML ko htam karna k bt lar rhi h..abi to unka.pyar k starting hui h..plzz osa htam mat karna abi..Warna me kati ho jao ge tumse muskaan k tarha ..
Per mujhe pta h to mujhe naraz nhi hna da ge..meri janii 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: rimshazeb

Kiya pallu starting me dara diya huma ..I was like pta nhi muskaan kaha chali gyi h 😕 ..per thankgod mil gyi..awee so sweet apna bhaio ka pass sona tha osa..
Muskaan kitna lucky h..sab kitna pyar karta h osa..our hna b chahiya humara mayur k muskaan jo h..
Very nice update pallu janii..
Continue soon

N yeh kiya sun rhi ho me to ATML ko htam karna k bt lar rhi h..abi to unka.pyar k starting hui h..plzz osa htam mat karna abi..Warna me kati ho jao ge tumse muskaan k tarha ..
Per mujhe pta h to mujhe naraz nhi hna da ge..meri janii 😊


der hai 5-6 chapters baaki hai
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: -Paulomi-


der hai 5-6 chapters baaki hai


Ab new thread per 5 chap achi nhi lgta na acha 10 thk h..oska bd htam kar dina..meri fav ff 😭 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: rimshazeb


Ab new thread per 5 chap achi nhi lgta na acha 10 thk h..oska bd htam kar dina..meri fav ff 😭 😭


mere paas khichne laayak story nehi hai
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Posted: 12 years ago
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CHAPTER - 2

CHAPTER - 3

Since there was a huge crowd in the house for Muskaan's birthday preparation.The whole house was decorated beautifully.Since so many people were there,everyone took their lunch in their room.Nupur brought Muskaan's bowl of food in her room.Muskaan,on seeing the food,squeezed her nose and said,"Mmm ganna!Mu na na!"Nupur said,"Ye oats nehi hai beta.Ye to aapki favourate pea-carrot soup hai.Ye aapko bohot pasand hai na?"Muskaan looked at that food and clapped excitedly and said,"Mu choup!"Nupur said,"Ha mamma ko to pata hai ke Muskaan ko ye kitna pasand hai tabhi to mamma ne banaya hai.Chalo abhi good girl ke tarah khalo,mamma ko abhi bohot kaam hai."Nupur tried to feed her,but Muskaan moved her head away and said,"Mamma Mu na na!Papa?Mu papa?"Nupur replied,"Mamma ke haatho se nehi papa ke haatho se khaana hai?Par beta papa to abhi bohot busy hai.Aaj Muskaan ka birthday hai na to uski tayyari kar rahe hai aapke dadda ke saath milke."Muskaan asked,"Mu papa dadda?"Nupur nodded her head and said,"Ab beta please kha lo.Aap achche bachche ho na,please mamma ko pareshaan mat karo."But Muskaan was not at all ready to be fed my Nupur.She said,"Na papa choup!Papa toyi!"Nupur tried to explain her again and again but Muskaan was too adamant to listen to her.Nupur was fed-up as well as too much tired.She could not stay for long since she had many works to do.But Muskaan's behavior and her stubbornness made her too much angry.She glared at Muskaan and then said,"Hamesha sirf papa papa papa!Uff!Main pareshaan ho gayi hu is larki se.Papa nehi hai aur vo kabhi nehi aayenge kyuki Muskaan mamma ki ek bhi baat nehi sunti hai.Muskaan is a very bad girl."Muskaan on being scolded,folded her lips and asked,"Mu aaap?"Nupur said,"Ha Muskaan aaap!"Muskaan folded her lips more and her eyes flooded with tears.She asked,"Ganni Mu???"Nupur replied,"Ha gandi Muskaan!"This broke Muskaan's barrier of pain and tear drops fall from her eyes.Slowly after giving 2-3 sobbing sound,she burst into tears.She started crying as loudly as she could.She stood up on the bed and started calling,"Mu papa!Mu papa!"She hit Nupur with her little hands and then climbed down of the bed.She came running out of the bedroom and started searching for her father.

Muskaan came into the hall and cried rubbing her eyes.Nupur too came out with her bowl of food behind Muskaan.Anjali and Maadhvi who were there watching for the decorations saw Muskaan crying and running here and there.Anjali asked,"Muskaan beta kya hua aapko?"Muskaan replied,"Mu papa!"Maadhvi said,"Muskaan guriya apne papa ko dhundh rahi hai?Vo abhi bahaar hai."She asked,"Kya hua Nupur kyu ro rahi hai?"Nupur replied,"Dekhiye na ma itne nakhre ho gaye hai is larki ke,jabtak Mayank nehi khilaayega khaayegi hi nehi.Kitne kaam pare hai ma aur ye hai ke..."Anjali said,"Tu bhi na Nupur tujhe pata hai na Muskaan Mayank se kitna pyar karti hai.De aa na usko Mayank ke paas."Nupur said,"Par didi ye to koi baat nehi hui na."Anjali picked Muskaan up in her arms and said,"Chalo Muskaan ko uski bari mamma uske papa ke paas lekar chalti hai."Muskaan said in a crying tone,"Bai mamma ganni mamma!Mamma Mu aaap!"Anjali said,"Hawww!Muskaan ko mamma ne data chalo abhi papa milenge na to papa mamma ko bohot zor se aaap' bolenge."Anjali took her out.On the doorstep,Anjali met Dhruv.On seeing Muskaan crying,Dhruv asked,"Arey Muskaan aur apne birthday ke din itne mote mote aasu baha rahi hai kyu?"Muskaan replied,"Dadda mamma Mu aaap!"Dhruv took Muskaan in his arms from Anjali and said,"Mamma ne Muskaan ko unke birthday ke din daat diya.Bad mamma!"Anjali said him whatever Nupur told her.Dhruv said,"Ooo to Muskaan ko papa ke paas jaana hai.Chalo dadda lekar chalenge."Dhruv took Muskaan to the lawn where Mayank was busy with the decorators for lighting.On getting the trace of Mayank,it became impossible for Dhruv to hold Muskaan anymore.She jumped down from his arms and ran in her shaky legs to Mayank crying,"Papa!Papa!Papa!"Mayank turned back and found Muskaan running by opening her hands and crying.Mayank went to her and picked her up in his arms and asked,"Muskaan ole beta rote nehi na na na!Kya hua batao papa ko?Kisne meri gudiya ko rulaane ki himmat ki hai?Bolo?"She replied,"Mamma choup!Mu papa choup!Mamma Mu aaap!Mamma Mu ganni!"Now Mayank became confused because solving this riddles of Muskaan's words are strictly ladies department,in which he was not a very good kind of expert.He tried to solve this puzzle but he needed help of Dhruv.He went to Dhruv and asked,"Bhaiya ye kya bol rahi hai?"He replied,"Apni beti ki boli bhi nehi samajh paata hai tu.Kaisa baap hai?"Saying he told him whatever Anjali told him.Mayank said,"Ooo Muskaan ke liye mamma soup laayi,par Muskaan papa ke haath se khaana chahti thi aur isiliye mamma ne daat lagaayi.Ye to bohot galat kiya hai mamma ne.Mamma ko punishment zarur milegi.Chalo papa aur Muskaan chalkar mamma ko zor se aaap' kahenge."He took her inside and found Nupur sitting on the dining table and glaring at Muskaan.Mayank asked,"Itni si baat ke liye tumne Muskaan ko kyu daata?"Nupur replied,"To aur kya karti.Ek to ghar mein aaj kitna saara kaam hai upar se maharani ke nakhre khatam nehi hote hai."Muskaan turned Mayank's face towards her and said,"Papa!Mamma Mu papa na na!"Mayank looked at Nupur and said,"Please!"She said,"Maine isko kaha hai ke tum kho gaye aur kabhi nehi aaoge kyuki ye kisiki baat nehi maanti hai."Muskaan said,"Papa mamma aaap'!Ganni mamma!"Mayank said,"Bilkul mamma bohot gandi hai,kaise meri phool si bachchi ko usike janamdin par rula diya.Bad mamma!"Muskaan folded her lips and looked at Nupur in an attitude and then said,"Mu papa aththe!"Nupur said,"Mujhe pata hai main is duniya mein sabse zyaada gandi hu aur papa sabse achche hai."He gave Muskaan's bowl of food to Mayank and said,"To Muskaan ke achche papa khilaao usey."Saying she left.Mayank said,"Thik hai main hi khilaauga."He made Muskaan sit on the table and then started feeding her.But Muskaan said,"Papa toyi!"Mayank said,"Ok papa ek achchi story sunaayenge par Muskaan ko bhi good girl bankar apna pura khaana finish karna hoga."Mayank started telling a story and Muskaan too quietly finished her lunch.

In the evening,Nupur was getting ready in her room.Mayank hugged her from back and said,"Birthday Muskaan ka hai na to usey bahaar sabke saath enjoy karne bhej dete hai,hum yehi andar enjoy kar lete hai na."Nupur was tying her necklace around her neck and said,"Hum uske mamma papa hai na aur vaise bhi tumhaari beti to tumhe chorkar kisike saath rahegi hi nehi.Achcha addicted banaya hai usey.Kabhi kabhi to mujhe lagta hai ke vo tumhaari beti kam aur girlfriend zyaada hai."Mayank put his head on Nupur's shoulder and said,"Arey ek baar bahaar jaayegi na to usko hamaare baare mein yaad bhi nehi rahega."Nupur said,"Mujhe choro Mayank.Abhi muskaan ko tayyar bhi karna hai na."He said,"Muskaan ko bhabhi tayyar kar degi.Dont worry.Tum bas mujhe dekho na."At that time,Anjali arrived with Muskaan and on seeing both her parents especially her father with her mother,Muskaan yelled,"Papa!"She came towards them and pulled her father's hands and parted him from Nupur and then started hitting Nupur and said,"Mu papa!Mamma na!"She made a face and climed onto the bed and hugged Mayank.Nupur said,"Huh!Papa ki chamchi!Bari aayi!"Anjali said,"Tum dono bhi na kamse kam ye romace door bandh karke to karo aur ha Muskaan ko jaldi se tayyar kardo.Mehmaan aana shuru ho gaye hai."Saying she left.Nupur took took out the dress given by Anjali.Nupur was about to change Muskaan's dress,but she removed Nupur's hands and said,"Na mamma na!Mu papa fock!"Muskaan gave her dress to Mayank.Mayank made her wear the dress.Now it was time to tie her hair,which Mayank didn't know how to do,so he said,"Ye mujhse nehi hoga ye tumhi karo."Nupur knew that Muskaan would not allow her to touch her.So she held her ears and said to Muskaan,"Iam sorry Muskaan!Aaj ke baad mamma Muskaan ko kabhi aaap' nehi bolegi aur kabhi bhi gandi nehi bolegi."Muskaan looked at her mother and asked,"Mu aththi?"Nupur replied,"Ha Muskaan sabse achchi hai."Muskaan gave a big smile showing her two teeths and hugged her mother and said,"Mu mamma aththi!"Nupur too hugged her back and said,"I love you mera bachcha.Chalo abhi mamma apni angel ko tayyar kar deti hai."Nupur tied up her into two pony tails on both sides.Nupur brought her in front of the mirror and said,"Ale mamma ki pari kitni khubsurat lag rahi hai."Mayank said,"Hamaari Muskaan is purey world mein sabse khubsurat hai."Muskaan said,"Mu aththi!"Both then took her outside.Muskaan walked to the hall by holding her parents' finger.All the guests welcomed and clapped for her.Shanti came and gave her a black mark and said,"Mere ghar ki lakshmi ko kisiki nazar na lage."After that the cake was brought.It was a very beautiful and big cake.Muskaan exclaimed,"Mamma papa bai cak!"Mayank gave the knife in her hand and then held her hand.He showed her how to blow the candles and she did exactly the same.After that the cake was cut.Everyone wished her and clapped.Nupur and Mayank put a small piece of the cake in her mouth.Shanti said,"Beta ab apne mamma papa ko khilaao."Before Nupur could cut a piece and give that to Muskaan's hand,Muskaan punched on the cake and her whole hand was coved with the cake.She rubbed her hand on Mayank's mouth once and then at Nupur's.She gave cake to all her family members in that way.

During the dinner time,Muskaan was happily playing with her brothers and Anjali strictly ordered them to take care of her.After some time,she started feeling tired since she didn't sleep after lunch.She started yawning.Nupur came to Shlok and Abhay and said,"Chalo bachcho aap dono dinner karlo."Shlok said,"Choti mamma hume abhi bhuk nehi hai,par Muskaan na abhi thore hi der mein so jaayegi."Nupur looked at Muskaan and found her very tired.She picked her up in her arms and went to Mayank.She gave her to Mayank and said,"Mayank zara iska dhyaan rakkho.Isey na neend aa rahi hai,main abhi iska khaana lekar aa rahi hu,dekhna isse pehle ye so na jaaye.Please!Varna ye puri raat jagaayegi."Mayank nodded his head.Muskaan already put her head on his shoulder.He immediately woke her up and said,"Arey re re Muskaan beta dekho kitne saare log aaye hai aapke party mein,aapse milne to agar abhi aap so jaaoge to kaise chalega.Chalo sabse milte hai aur Muskaan ko jo saare gifts mile hai vo sab bhi to dekhne hai na.Chalo chalo!"Mayank continuously talked with her and rocked her in his arms so that she doesn't sleep.After sometime,Nupur arrived with Muskaan's bowl of food.Mayank sat on the sofa and said,"Abhi Muskaan khaana khaayegi.Chalo chalo."Muskaan removed her mouth and said,"Na Mu na!"Nupur said,"Papa Muskaan ko achchi si story sunaayenge.Mayank please!"Mayank started telling a baseless story,but Muskaan believed him and silently had her dinner.After that Nupur washed her mouth and Mayank again picked her up in her arms.Now he kept on talking with all other guests and Nupur too was doing the same.Everyone had dinner and slowly all left.Anjali and Nupur kept the gifts in Muskaan's room.Maadhvi asked the servants to clean the room and ordered everyone to have their dinner.Anjali during the party made Shlok and Abhay have their dinner and so they were already off to sleep.Mayank said,"Nupur ab Muskaan ko tum sambhaalo na mere haath mein dard ho raha hai."Nupur looked at Muskaan and found her sleeping like a dog by opening her mouth.Nupur said,"Ye gehri neend mein hai."Nupur took her and went to her bedroom.She changed her dress and made her wear a diaper so that she can sleep comfortably.After that she kissed on Muskaan's open mouth and said,"Mujhe aajtak kabhi pata hi nehi chala ke bachpan kaisa hota hai,isiliye tu jee bhar ke jeena apne bachpan ko."She kissed on her forehead and said,"Mamma loves you very very much beta."A drop of tear fall from her eyes.

CHAPTER - 4

Edited by -Paulomi- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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THAT was so sweet update..
loved Muskaan a lot...

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