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Posted: 12 years ago
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Note:Hello Guys !! Marie Here :) Yes After A bit long Gap I am here with an OS..Well i had no plan to write when my finals are just 15 days away :/ But just Monaya Barish remind of Sajan and feeling to write I just Wrote it.. Well I am soory before u read for making it a tym pass more =P however Much Happy to See MoNaya but this Os just from no where is banging my head.. n not leaving me to study :S so I just penned down the starting if you guys are interested then I wil complete it in two or one more part on weekend :) Here it is Enjoy a short begining and Leave An Honest Opinion :) Thank You Very Much For Your Time <3 [And those who were asking for treat of my birthday I seriously was in no mood to give u this OS as gift coz its not like a celebration one :P but still Thank you For wishing me Crazy MonayaHolics n My Lovely Friends My birthday <3 I wil surely compensate it after My Finals :) )

~SaJan OS~
~I Don't Care But Deep In Heart It Hurts~

His room was strange for him...there all alone lying on bed...As benji comes in ...benji tried his best to make him chilled...but he somehow managed to ask him...

Samrat:How is She now ?[He asked with no expression just staring at pic on wall]

Benji: What Abhi bhi Tjhey uski fikar hai ? [Benji Looked at him with an upset Look..He hate mention of her who made his best friends life hell]

Samrat:Benji Please Bata na wo kasi hai ? usko zyada tou koi chot ni aye na ?[Samrat held his hand n asked wid helplessnes..Samrat knew about Benji feelings for her but samrat also knew what he himself feels about her ]

Benji:Wo bilkul tekh hai Samrat..hospital mein tm the.. vo ni.. Usko Pochna Chahye tha..[Benji's eyes were red due to anger for her..benji had saw his frnd enough to suffer because of her]

Samrat:Shut up Benji.. Mera Cellphone khahn hai ? [he demanded his phone however he knew he is right but...]

Benji:No Way Tum kisi bhi sorat mein usey call ni kar rahe .. Wo already tmhari life mein aik musibat sy ...[Benji glared at him n showed his hatred for her]

Samrat:Bas kar ja Benji Please Chashmish k barey mein aik lafz na bolein ab...[Samrat s heart pinched...everything about her hurts]

Benji:What ? So Now Tum uskey lea us ladki k lea Mjh Par chilao gey jo Tmsey Divorce Mang rahi hai ?[Benji just wanted him to be away from her ..from pain she always give him]

Samrat:Benji Please Yeh Gunjan Aur Mera Personal Matter hai..[Samrat lowered his eyes he was feeling guilty but...]

Benji:Good Bye Samrat Soory Mein Apney Dost Ko Apney hi Hathon Apni Zindagi Barbad karty ni Dekh sakta. [ Benji looked at him disbelievingly.. n stormed out of room]

[samrat shouted for him for many times but he may had decided already it was enough]

Samrat:Benji sun na ...Benji.. Dam..Yeh Benji Bhi Na...

"Oh God !! Life mein Kiya Kam Tensions Hain k Ap Mujhsey Mera Aik Best Friend bhi Door Kar rahe ho.. Already Mein Chashmish ko kho raha hon.. Mein Apney aik hi dost ko ni khona chahta hon.. Pata Nahn Gunjan teekh bhi ho gi k ni...Aik Dafa us sey Baat ho Jati ya Dekh leta...Mein uskey begair kasey rahon ga... Chashmish Kab Smjhey gi Wo jo Hamakat kar rahi hai Wo uski zindagi barbad kar dey gi... Wo Usey sirf dhoka dey raha hai...Mein Kaisey Smjhaon Usey.,..."

Tears Came from no where..
...

Fire Was all around her ... She was panicked and screaming...She screamed for help.. She screamed for him..dont know why...but only him..only his name was on her lips...in spite of the fact how much she hated him..still she was calling for him...it was trust he gave her in dat time when they were so called together...

Before she was fainted she was in his arms..he was calling her name with pain which she experienced before fainting...

She woke up with jerk...looked around..she was at her parents place...she wiped away sweats from her forehead n neck..she bitten her lips..n sat on bed...Held her head in Hands...Her head was paining like hell...

She heard the door opened...N looked above saw her friend there with her medicine n water...

Ash:Janti thi k Tum Jago ki Raat key is Pehar.. Is lea tmhari pain killers sath hi ley aye....[Ash tired to smile as gave her medicine but was clearly concern about her friend]

Gunjan:Thanks...[She just replied expressionlessly]

Ash:5th Night in Row Gunjan..Kia ho Gya hai tumhey ?Tum So kuin Nai Pati ? Ab tu tm wasey bhi...[Ash showed her concer while lovingly creasing her hairs.]

Gunjan:Ash Mein ni bhula pa rahi Ash wo Mjhey ni Bholta ..Wo..[Gunjan held her hand n Gunjan's eyes were showing her pain.]

Ash:Kitni Martaba tou Gunjan wo phone kar chuka hai...[Ash looked at her with bit confusion n happy too]

Gunjan:Phone kab ?[Gunjan looked at her with a shock]

Ash:gunjan..us ka phone tm kudh hi attend ni kar rahi....[Ash reminded her how she was ignoring his calls..his texts from the day she had experienced near death ]

Gunjan:Ash merey sar mein bohat dard ho raha hai mein soney ki koshish karti hon tm bhi so joa ja key..[Gunjan lowered her eyes..she didn't wish to share with her anymore..it was mess she created n it was her no one else who should be blamed]

Ash:R u sure? Tm mujhey...[Ash was confused n worried for her]

Gunjan:i am fine Ash Please ...[Gunjan showed as she is interested in sleeping]

Ash:Okay kuch chahye tou bula lena [Ash tried to smile...]

Gunjan:Thank you.[Gunjan replied as she kissed her forehead]

Ash:Ur Welcome Gunjan...[She smiled as she left Gunjan's room]

As Ash Moved out of her room..she sighed...her tears streamed out mercilessly...
...
Gunjan's POV:

It was first day she had argue with him...First night of their wedding...she hated him..he was the reason who made her life hell..he was the reason of separation of her n Raqeesh...It was him who her parents chose for her to get marry..It was worst day of her life back then...She was in no where interested in their marriage or in him..She was there in his room only for revenge..only for writing her fate herself...ignoring every single thing...
...
Samrat's POV:

She was his bride...only for their parents n friends...for him she was nothing more than a tension in her life...his room was hell for him when she was around him..She never left a chance to make his life more harder n hell than ever he could imagine..her attitude was enough to make him rude with her.. If she was not interested in him from day first he was neither dying on marrying her...He had just to bear her for his parents...
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HSFA thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow Sweetheart an Os from you 🥳Just some hrs ago u told me that u wanted to write and here it is. Superb!!<3 Loved it. Awww my poor Sammy and his feelings😭 how helpless he was. Adore Benji and Samrat's friendship My Gunji awww she misses him that even sleep can't giver her solace and Ash and Gunjan 's friendship's nice.

Can't wait to read more now its really interesting. Their hatread and love have to be explored<3😳 You have to update this real soon.
Treat...ummm no need for that. just your love is enough 🤗
Love Yours
Angel<3
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is Awesome..<3
Sajan r married already bt Gunjan LIKES sum1 else..n i guess this raqeesh is not a nice guy.. want to read further..plz do continue:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sajan after a long time
plz cont with this os
chulbuli94 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Marie...SUCH melancholic stuff after Monaya Baarish 😆😆😆

Ulta effect ho gaya 😉

But it's just beautiful !!!

Gunjan loved someone else
Samrat dint care

kya hoga mere Sajan ka??😕

Pls update !!!! ...I can't wait !!!!
mehaksanaya thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome nd benji is such a sweet frnd
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey marie i have been following ur ffs for years now , i m new to this forum and i hope that u all would include me in ur monaya fan gang
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Posted: 12 years ago
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interesting...loved the 1st part
plzz do cont...
All the best 👍🏼 4 your Exam 😊
snowwhite28 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey nice one. Though i always hated third angle in sajan's life. But do continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I can't believe you stopped at that point😲 Please update soon, Marie. Gunjan not in love with an indifferent Samrat Please do not make us wait more.

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