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Posted: 12 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: juhi_sajan

hey marie i have been following ur ffs for years now , i m new to this forum and i hope that u all would include me in ur monaya fan gang



Hi juhi it was realy overwhelming to read ur comment lol You are Most Welcome dear :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: PRIYA_luvs_MS

interesting...loved the 1st part
plzz do cont...
All the best 👍🏼 4 your Exam 😊

Thank you so much for commenting n wishes too :) Will update soonish :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: snowwhite28

Hey nice one. Though i always hated third angle in sajan's life. But do continue soon.


Thank you :) I hate tooBut its always fun to watch jealous while falling in love :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: SwaNia_2

I can't believe you stopped at that point😲 Please update soon, Marie. Gunjan not in love with an indifferent Samrat Please do not make us wait more.

You have to🥱 I am going to continue it really Soon Don't worry :) Sajan are made for each other.. But for time being Patience :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: pakpearl

I hate cliff hangers...but only for ur exams,I m sparing u !!!! 😛

Best ofluck 4 ur exams
Best of luck 4 the readers whose Sajan r so weird 😉
Chalo..Monaya ka nasha aasman pe le gaya tha aur Sajan ne zameen per laa patkha !!!!


I hate dm too😕 Hhee thank you g <3
Haha I m going to update soon enough so dont wory so much :P
Hahaha.. Monaya Sajan <3 Something that re-defines Love <3 Relationship <3 Care <3
Edited by MSluvsSI - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: 358674

u actually stopped here 😲 ????????

Continue !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
after a very long time i m reading a sajan os... & i m loving it ... 👍🏼


I wil continue soon :)
Thank you for loving it dear <3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: SM_317

woww awesome..really nice start..eagerly waiting 2 read ahead..do continue soon nd thanx 4 d pm..


Thank You so much :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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[ Note:Hey Guys Thank You for Wonderful Response <3 Here It is Next Part.. If you guys get disturbed of songs then you can stop them ..N yeah Before Reading IF YOU WISh please tune in 'Assan nahn Yeh' n Turn on 'Saibo' which is in middle of update somewhere :P Soory for inconvienene Drop few Comments and Suggestions to let me know how it was :) Continution depends on your response :) Take Care !! Enjoy the Update !! ]
~SaJan OS~
~~Part Two~~
~I Don't Care But Deep In Heart It Hurts~

https://soundcloud.com/moazam-ali/aasan-nahin-yahan-aashiqui-2
{Assan Nahn Yeh From Aashiqi 2}
Months Flew for others.But for both of them they crept...They made them feel worst with each other..They used to fight in morning ..in evening.. in night..on phone..every single comment passed results only in Shouting n Cursing each other...While Arguing they used to behave like two illiterate psycho persons..They were no more civilized with each other... on every call there was more anger n more hatred for each other... but along their family they were most adorable n perfect jodi... They were popular of being like perfect couples to whom their family n friends used to address 'Rab ne Bana Di Jodi' ...But it was always benji for samrat where Ash for Gunjan ... always there to listen their frustration about their marriage...about how much they hate each other..how much they dislike to see even each other face...The situation was worse than anyone could have imagined...
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It was limit..limit for him to see her along any other guy...he was bearing her in his room only coz he still somewhere in heart had think that might at some point she will get ready for compromise..but it was no where in her dictionary... She felt frustrated when he encountered her about guy.. she refused to hear about it.. n blamed him to be liar...Samrat felt himself the biggest fool of world.. how can he even expect from her...he gave her the best news of her life...he announced to give her divorce as soon as it was possible for him...n left the room...She was expressionless..unable to believe..but later she smiles but tears rolled down her cheeks...she looked at the closed door...n was all confused but soon she avoid answering her inner n got more excited to tell this gudnews to her well-wishers according to her..Finally her happiness wil be back in her life..Her love...and Finally he wil be able to get all alone... freedom...his peace...his life...
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Unfortunately or say Fortunately Their Divorce Got delayed as they had to attend a Family Wedding in Amsterdam...She was in horrible state when heard only Samrat n She had to go all alone as others were busy in their schedule...She was no where interested in going with him...where it was horrible for him to imagine too...when she hardly was able to bear him or vice versa ...But thinking it to be last days with him she decided to do this as favour for him...
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The Journey was not so pleasant for both of them... but as soon as their flight landed on Amsterdam...They had different feelings...as the car run by road seeing surrounding around them.. It was good change for both of them..like a break from their life in hell...They looked at each other..n they felt it awkward as they had seen a glint of happiness in each other eyes after a really really long time...The awkwardness ended when they reached at his friend's place.his friend n his to-be-wife welcomed dm in their home...
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They were in their room after some time alone.. tired...randomly thinking...they changed into night suits...As Gunjan slipped in blanket on bed...she saw him near window staring at moon...She smiles a bit..n then shrugged her shoulders..What was that ? She put away her thoughts when heard...

Samrat:Gunjan...[Samrat looked at her who was looking at her now too..It was First time ever that he had started convo in normal way but it was way more unusual as they bother much used of arguing only.. ] See...[Before he was about to say she cut off ...n made it more easy for him]

Gunjan:Mujhey lagta hai k hum aik dosrey ko jitna avoid karein utna hi behtar ho ga... kuin key..Yahan na tum scene create karna chahtey ho gey aur na mein chahti hon...Hum yahan shadi attend karney tak hain...aur jasey hi hm wapis jaein gey...[Gunjan continued as she knew very well.. it was like coming near to something that gives relief after long time..n lil patience wasn't bad choice for them at that time]

Samrat:And we wil get a divorce as soon as we wil go back..I assure you...[Gunjan looked at him who was staring at her face expressionless...]

[They Looked away from each other as soon as they realized there was nothing more to talk about...Gunjan turned n lye down..n put off her side lamp...Samrat looked at his watch n moved to sleep too...They both closed eyes...but sleep was no where...the feeling of sleeping on same bed..even when had a reasonable distances n faced their backs..still ..it was something that made them restless that night]
{If song is still going on You can stop it here :) }
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Gunjan:Samrat Yeh yellow outfit pehnon ya pink wala ?[Gunjan as saw him waking up she showed him two dresses which she had in her both hands]

Samrat:...[Samrat stares at her strangely..Is he dreaming ?or she is asking for real??he was stil on his bed n sleepy but her voice had made him wide awake in seconds]

[Gunjan realized he is shocked n confused...so she decided to make it less awkward for both..]

Gunjan:Wo...Actually I thought a lot last night... We were actually acting like a psycho since our marriage[Gunjan started sitting on bed in front of him..]

Samrat:WE?[Samrat stated as sarcasm...]

[Gunjan shaked her head in irritation n glaring at him too]

Gunjan:MR.Shergill You really need to know Ap hmesha Sahi ni hotey...[Gunjan honestly spoke without fearing about anything ]

Samrat:Han Par zyada Time tou hota hon na ?[Samrat was not ready to accept indirectly that their life was mess because of him.it was only her..]

Gunjan:FINE!! U want things same as they were before so I have no Problem it was that i just thought...Well Leave it...Certainly we don't deserve favours from each other...!! [Gunajn breathed deeply before speaking up as she had to keep her voice low..because she wanted to spend days in Amsterdam happily instead of making it horrible memory for each other...]

[As she left to get dressed..he was smiling seeing her upset but at same time not happy as no doubt he messed up her first try to be friendly...He took it lightly n Got up to change..n saw her ignoring him totally]

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(Saibo from Shor in the City)

https://soundcloud.com/wilson_corley/songs-pk-shor-in-the-city-01
They joined their friend's family at breakfast..who informed them that they had gone for shopping n had asked dm to join dm in Mall later...

Gunjan was clueless.. she was excited to visit Amsterdam as it was one of her favourite place. but she surely was not in mood to ask him to take him out.. Why she should?There was no relation between them..

But she got surprised as he announced that they are leaving for outing in half an hour..

She looked at Samrat who showed himself busy in gossiping more...

As soon as they get dressed for outing they left the place ...
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Gunjan:Where are we going ? [After a long silence while walking on roads ... it was sunny n cool day ...]

Samrat:Don't Know...[Samrat lost in thoughts replied n didn't realize he actually mumbled what he was thinking..]

Gunjan:What?[Gunjan stopped n looked at him with terrifying look]

Samrat:Oh..I mean yahan pass hi Mall hai wahan hi Mayank Nupur Milein gey...[Samrat avoided any eye contact...]

Gunjan:Hm...['He is acting strange'..She thought..]

[A long Pause ]

Samrat:Wo..Gunjan...[Samrat spoke up to break the silence]

Gunjan:Han ...[She replied instantly as she was really hoping for any convo...but then as felt it a bit weird she looked away...n also looked back showing her wait to hear him...]

Samrat:Can we bear each other for a week like two people usually do when they are stuck together on an alone island ? [Samrat looked at her grinning a bit as headed towards end..]

Gunjan:Sure...We have no choice like dm right?[ Gunjan joined him in grinning ]

Samrat:Yea..[Samrat had a wide smile..]

[As they both looked at each other.. n remind the convo again..They Laugh heartily together feeling themselves the only two biggest fools in world...In laughing hard they held each other arms for support as was walking in Mall...Other people were looking at them..n thought how perfect n happy they are with each other n consider them as LOVE BIRDS... They Stopped laughing as they saw Mayur in front of them looking at them with strange looks...Gunjan n Samrat looked at each other n then at them...]
Gunjan:Helooo...[Gunjan waved hand in front of their face]

Mayank:Are you guys drunk ?[Mayank looked weirdly at them..]

Samrat:Mayank NO!![Samrat looked at gunjan doubting at Mayank's intelligence...]

Nupur:Then Why you guys are laughing crazily in Mall? Everyone is staring at you guys ?[Nupur pointed out their strange behaviour..]

[Samrat gunjan moved away their hands from each other..n stared for a second...]

Gunjan:Soory but Samrat ney joke sunaya tha wo bohat funny tha islea..[Gunjan looked at Mayur n said while making a cute soory face...]

[Samrat looked at her innocent face..."Innocent"..He slapped himself mentally...]

Mayank:Joke aur Samrat? OKay What was the joke Let us hear too We want to laugh crazily too ? Right Nupur?[Mayank looked at samrat doubting at their behaviours...]

Nupur:Yea...

Samrat:Oh Leave it ... Gunjan was just saying asey hi.. Let's Shop for you guys ? You guys have big day ahead Exicted Nupur ?[Samrat avoiding eye contact...tried to change the topic n get succeed too as Mayur remember they have still to shop for their wedding...]

Nupur:Yea Gunjan Come I selected a dresss Help me to decide Please..[Nupur held her hand to take her away with herself]

Gunjan:Yea sure ..[Gunjan wasn't happy hearing Samrat 'Asey Hi' ..She didn't knew anything about ignoring ...]

[Samrat stared at her back ..He knew very well she wasn't happy to hear him but he was just avoiding from lying to his friends...But he certainly didn't want anything again complicated between them...they had laugh together for first time...Mayank called him to get his attention..Gunjan was not able to decide she should turn to see him or not..should she not ignore it ? She could tell him it's not a big deal.. they still at even equation like after that laugh...despite of being extreme clash in heart n mind she turned n saw.. him busy with mayank ...before she was able to turn away in disappointment n anger..she saw him looking at him...n there a smile crept to their lips...n there was again the same 'Happy' feeling in heart which they had few minutes before while laughing..They both assure each other from eyes..It's Even Still n they will stick to this even between them ...at least a relation ...but still no name ..]

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To Be Continued :)

Edited by MSluvsSI - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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excellent update
awesome 👍🏼

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