Hello Meeri..Extremely Sorry for too much late comment...i seriousely saw your pm now and read it in one go...it was Fabulous and Awesome Story...Quite Unusual coz imagine Sajan as uncivilized and illitrate couple while fighting is completely unexpected for me..but same time this thought made me laugh...😊 all parts were mind blowing...gradually Sajan started feeling somthing for each other...best part was Gunjan's reaction on "Chashmish"😃
Awesome scene it was...Sajan's cute bickering was written very nicely...and the last part was cutest..boat scene. rain scene and kiss were Superb😳
ok last part i have not read yet..will comment on it later
Edited by gunurlove - 12 years ago