SS: 7 Days - Mayur : last part & Epi-pg:17 - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
#51
Beautiful update Di.
Thnx for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52
nyc update preeti!
hope they confess soon!😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53
Awesome update..
loved it lods
Beautifully written.
loved it to d coreee
hayeee...MN were really cute here.
i loved d way dey both are feeling for each other...
n i loved dat Mayank was ready to give them a Chance...
loved it lodsss
waiting for d next part...
loved it..
love ya SIS...🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
beautiful update

loved it.

continue soon.

thanks for thepm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55
i am back with my update 🥳

thanks for reading and commenting on my SS 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
Chapter-8

Day-6

Mayank comes to college with determination to talk with Nupur but donot know where to start and where to end. Nupur sees Mayank is about to call her she puts her finger on her lips as if asking him not to call her. Mayank feels irritated that Nupur is avoiding him. At last Mayank slowly goes and stands beside Nupur and whisper "Nupur I need to talk"
Nupur whispers "not in college Mayank, if anyone knows that we became friends tho-"
Mayank keeps an irritating face "tho kya hoga"
Nupur "mazzak vudayenga saab, so let's concentrate on dance for today, we will talk tomorrow now bye I have a lot of work" Nupur goes from there without hearing him.
Mayank sighs "chalo let's wait for my turn to talk with her"
Mayank also becomes busy with his work. Nupur and Mayank do their last rehearsals on stage at the slot given to them. Nupur changes her dress into her Punjabi suits and goes in search of Mayank as almost all people left the college and only few new students left in the campus. Nupur knows where to find Mayank, it is raining heavily. Nupur carries an umbrella and goes to the basketball court at the backside of the college where Mayank always practices with his friends. And she is right Mayank is playing basketball in rain. Nupur goes and stands at one corner; Mayank gives a look to her and turns to play with his ball.
Nupur "are you angry on me" Mayank nods his head cutely without answer.
Nupur "sorry, you know our friends right, and gossips wonot take much time to spread"
Mayank want to ask 'what gossips' but thinks against it still playing.
Nupur "Mayank gussa choda and come into umbrella, you are getting wet and will sure caught cold"
Mayank stops for a while and says "why? Do you fear that if I am down with fever then I cannot perform with you or do you really care for me"
Nupur donot know what to answer, yes she is concern about him but for one second also she did not think that if Mayank gets fever then he cannot perform. She is genuinely concern about him; her silent said it all to Mayank. He felt happy that Nupur is feeling something for him.
He comes and stands infront of her "Nupur after annual day, I am leaving to US. May be I wonot return for two years" he takes a deep breath, "kya tum-" Mayank donot know what to say "chalo chodo" and turns to go.
Nupur feels as if her heart is going away from her hearing to Mayank's words 'Mayank is leaving does this makes any difference to her… yes it makes a difference' she donot what is the different, it is either good or bad but for now she feels the pain of getting separated from him.
Mayank is about to go when Nupur catches his hand "bolnaa"
Mayank takes a deep breath then he decides to say her what he feels but stops thinks for a while and says "dance with me" he forwards his hand to her.
Nupur "no music" Mayank smiles and goes to the shelter where he kept his bag takes his mobile and starts a song, the song which reflects his thoughts and the words what he want to tell her. The dance made them come together so he decided to keep his feelings infront of her in the form of dance.

[guys here is the song from RHTDM, one of my fav song]

Mm hm hm, mm hm hm hm hm
Mm hm hm hm hm, mm mm mm mm mm mm mm

He comes near to Nupur takes the umbrella from her hand and leave it in air, forwards his hand. Nupur slowly accepts his hand; he takes her into the middle of the court. Both are standing infront of each other and the songs starts in full swing.
Mayank places his hand on her waist and starts dancing with her, first Nupur felt it is just a song and starts dancing with a smile…

Dil ko tumse pyaar hua, pehli baar hua
Tumse pyaar hua
Main bhi aashiq yaar hua, pehli baar hua
Tumse pyaar hua
(Chhaayi hai betaabi
Meri jaan, kaho main kya karoon) – 2

Mayank slowly pulls Nupur near without breaking the eye lock and Nupur can notice the change in his touch and the way he is looking at her, she stopped smiling. Mayank makes her swirl a little and then brings her back into his arms…

Dil ko tumse pyaar hua, pehli baar hua
Tumse pyaar hua
Main bhi aashiq yaar hua, pehli baar hua
Tumse pyaar hua

Both stand infront of each other catching both their hands dancing sideways…
Mayank leaves Nupur and comes stands at her back puts his hand either side of her head making her head move according to his hand and then stops suddenly starts tracing her face with back of his hand…

Oh, kho gaya main khayaalon mein
Ab neend bhi nahin aankhon mein
Karvatein bas badalta hoon
Ab jaagta hoon main raaton mein

Nupur moves otherside when Mayank catches her hand…

Ab doori na sehni, har lamha kehta hai

He pulls her back into his arms as if he is telling her not to leave him…

Na jaane haal mera aisa kyoon rehta hai

Mayank leaves Nupur and make a round and bends on his knees infront of Nupur opens his arms singing..

Main deewana tera ban gaya jaane jaana
Main fasaana tera ban gaya jaane jaana

He stands traces her face and then takes her hand makes her swirl four times and makes her bend in his arms…

Haseena gori gori, churaaya chori chori
Churaaya dil chori chori chori chori chori

Mayank sowly rises her back without removing his eyes and conveying his message to her with his eyes…

Dil ko tumse pyaar hua, pehli baar hua
Tumse pyaar hua
Main bhi aashiq yaar hua, pehli baar hua
Tumse pyaar hua

Mayank and Nupur dances on salsa steps almost hugging each other.,
Mayank turns her and hugs her from back singing…

Aarzoo hai mere sapnon ki

He puts his head on her shoulder, Nupur leans back on his shoulder…

Baitha rahoon teri baahon mein

Mayank looks at her, Nupur still leans closing her eyes, he slowly kiss her on her cheek…

Sirf tu mujhe chaahe ab
Itna asar ho meri aahon mein

Nupur turns towards Mayank puts her hands around his neck, Mayank slowly removes her hands and gets separated from her… Nupur gives a confused look, he goes back making a distance between them as if he is telling her that he will leave her soon

Tu keh de haske to tod doon main rasmon ko

He forwards his hand as if he asking her to take the vows to stay together after he left her in India… but Nupur stands for a moment still with a confusion look

Marke bhi na bhooloon main teri kasmon ko

Mayank turns otherside getting disappointed. Nupur as if she understands his communication alittle late runs and hugs him from back

Main to aaya hoon yahan pe bas tere liye

Mayank feels happy and turns smiling at her…

Tera tan mann sab hai mere liye
Hai kya haseen nazaara, sama hai pyaara pyaara

And both hug each other not to leave each other ever.

Gale laga le yaara yaara yaara yaara yaara
Main bhi aashiq yaar hua, pehli baar hua
Tumse pyaar hua
(Chhaayi hai betaabi
Meri jaan, kaho main kya karoon) - 2
Kya karoon, kya karoon, kya karoon

Mayank breaks the hug looking into her eyes slowly bends and kisses her as if he is conveying his heart wish to her, the unsaid words till now what he told her in the form of song and dance he conveyed her through his kiss. After breaking the kiss, he sees Nupur stands closing her eyes confusion is clear on her face. Mayank understands Nupur needs time to understand what just happened between them and to come to a conclusion. He leaves her, takes his bag and goes from the court. Nupur still stands in the court alone recalling what happened just now. She is sure they are not just dancing for a song but Mayank is telling her something, something very important. 'He loves me' slowly Nupur speaks the words out which formed in her brain.
Nupur sits on the bench 'but what about me, do I love him. He is leaving India soon, can we have a long distance relationship. Love is based on trust, can I trust him to core to give this relationship a chance' Nupur goes home still thinking about what happened and what she really wants. Nupur is not a girl who afraid to do what her mind says. If She takes her decisions then she will stick to it till the end. But this is matter of heart, matter of love and life, she want to think before saying yes to Mayank. She donot want a temporary relationship from Mayank, and the way Mayank confessed his love shows his seriousness toward starting this relationship and to give their relationship a chance and he is true to his feels, he left the decision to her leaving her to think before accepting the relationship. Nupur recalls all the days they spend together in these 4 years but the last 6 days stayed apart. She came to know the real Mayank who has a bad man image is not really bad but caring and loving person. His good looks gained him popularity among females but he is not a play boy like he is tagged, he is true person. She likes to be in his company, she started liking everything thing about him.
Nupur "yes, I want to give this relationship a chance, I am falling for Mayank and I cannot deny that, I want give wings to my feelings and want to fly along with Mayank. I can see the sincerity in Mayank's eyes about me. I donot what to think about the future of this relationship but one thing is for sure neither Mayank nor me are entering this relationship for fun." Nupur determined to confess her feelings tomorrow to Mayank after their performance.

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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
That ws very beautiful...
Totally loved it..:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58
It ws very romantic and beautiful update.
Mayank confessed in very beautiful way.Kuch na keh kr bhi sb kuch keh diya.
Thnx for pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59
amazing confession beautiful song 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60
great part..
loved the song.
and the rain dance...

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