SS: 7 Days - Mayur : last part & Epi-pg:17

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Hey all i am back with my new SS...

I thought of writing OS and when i started it became SS, i thought chalo lets complete it with in 3 to 4 parts but it went to 8 to 9 parts 😆

Bare with me for my mistakes ☺️
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Index

Chapter-1 Page-1

Chapter-2 Page-2

Chapter-3 Page-4

Chapter-4 Page-6

Chapter-5 Page-8

Chapter-6 Page-10

Chapter-7 Page-12

Chapter-8 Page-14

Chapter-9 Page-17 (last part)

Epilogue Page-17
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Chapter-1

Nupur slams her books on the library table with much irritation, the sound made Dia, Pinky and Gunjan jump under their skin.
Nupur "idiot kahi kaa, kanjoos, kadoos, saduoo. He don't know how to talk with a girl. Dil tho kartha hain cheerka rakdu vusee. Darthi pe booj hain by god"
Pinky, Dia and Gunjan sitting in the library of Bhushan college of Arts and Science when Nupur comes in with full of angry mood. Pinky is reading 'how to reduce weight in 10 days' book, where Dia is doing her nails and reading the beauty tips article, and Gunjan is reading some bollywood news in the newspapers. First one to react is Pinky, who is eating her 5th packet of lays asks innocently "tu kiska barama baat karahi hain" Dia who is adjusting her hair says giving a dreamy look "obviously the handsome, stunning macho man of the college Mr. Mayank Sharma"
Nupur glares at her, folders her hand says "introduction katam hogaye, tho muhh band karo nahin to makkieya gusjayenga by god"
Dia pouts a little and bends her head to read the magazine.
Gunjan sighs and says "now what happened?"
Nupur "what happened, that stupid is making fun of me saying that if I dance the stage will fall down for my weight and-"
Dia cuts her says "maybe bechara might be thinking that pinky is also dancing with you so he said like that"
Pinky beats Dia, Dia "oouch" and rubs her hand.
Nupur shouts "will you people be serious" Dia raises her hands in surrender, Pinky silently starts eating her lays and Gunjan "ok Nupur tell us what happened, now what did Mayank do"
Nupur takes a deep breath and says "as you all know I am participating in the dance competition along with Sumer. So I went for the practice and waiting for Sumer. Just then this Bandar with along with his so called chipkoo girlfriend, Natasha and her friend Tanya came their and started commenting on me. Whatever dance step I do he started pointing wrongs in that I am really fed up with him. I feel like banging his head to the wall. What does he know about dance all, he just knows how to make fun of all and roams with girls, the most irritating person on this earth. He really donot have respect for woman and arts. When he sees me I think he undergoes some chemical reactions in his body and just starts irritating me in one way or the other. God knows how many days I have to bare him."
Gunjan coolly says "after today - another 7 days, yes just bare him for another 7 days after that no need to see his face also"
Nupur relaxes taking a deep breath says "yes another 7 days after that I donot need to see that Bandar face".

Nupur, Dia, Gunjan and Pinky are best friends from day one of their college. They met in the welcome party given by their seniors on the first day of their collage and instantly became friends. Nupur Bhushan, yes Bhushan collage of Arts and Sciences is her grandfather's college. Her father Inder Bhushan is the board member of the college but Nupur never behaved like the owner of the college. She is always down to earth. But when she gets angry no one can stand infront of her, she erupts like volcano. Everyone fears to stand before her if they do any mistake; Nupur can be rude and angry at the same time can be kind and caring. If anyone needs her she stands with them without hesitation. But only one person is there in the college whose sight Nupur cannot stand, no it is not due to fear but due to irritation that is Mayank Sharma.

Mayank Sharma is the only son of Sharma family, the next heir of Sharma foundation. He is rich and spoiled brat. He is famous for his devilish handsome features in girls. No girl can deny him if he shows interest. He changes his girl friend's like he changes his clothes. He is never serious with any girl. He sits in the last bench making masti and funs of everyone but this does not mean that he is the weakest student in the class. The first shock came to all when first semester results came out and Mayank lost his first place to Nupur with just 7 marks claiming the second position. Though Nupur is impressed with Mayank for his intelligence and sharpness but never accepted. From then the competition started between Nupur and Mayank. They both hate each other to core; never leave a chance to show each other down. Once Mayank gets the top marks the next semester Nupur beats him. They are popular in the college for their fights. Everyone fears to come between them when they start arguing.

Today they completed their 4 years college life, they got the results and asusal Nupur topped beating Mayank with a very little margin. Just another 7 days of college, on 7th day they will have an inter dance competition conducted in their college and for last time of her college life Nupur is participating in it along with Sumer, who studied along with her. She has only 6 days in her hand to prepare for the dance competition. A lot of colleges are participating in the competition, she want to win this one at any cost.

Nupur hears announcement for her to come to arts class as soon as possible. Nupur sighs and says "ok I think Dance master came; I need to go for the practice. Bye guys hope that Bandar is not there anymore".
Nupur reaches the arts class room to see the first face which she is wishing not to see, Mayank who is grinning like idiot to see her there. She closes her eyes with irritation, mutters some curse and goes inside greets her dance master.
Dance master "Nupur, one bad news and one good news"
Nupur "oh kya hain master"
Dance master "bad news is Sumer broken his leg while driving his bike, nothing to worry he is fine now but he is not participating in the competition"
Nupur feels low "oh", she and Sumer won a lot of competitions before.
Dance master "but good news is we got the replacement"
Nupur's face lightens little and asks "who is it master"
Dance master points towards the person says "Mayank Sharma"
Nupur eyes pops out and she shouts "what?"
Dance master jumps a little to hear the sudden outburst of Nupur where Mayank is still grinning at her like a mad man.
Nupur "no Sir, I am not going to dance with that banda-" closes her eyes "I I mean with Mayank Sharma. Please select anyone in our college but not with him" Dance master is not from the same college. The old dance master left the college as he got some reality show, so Bhushan College appointed new dance master who donot know about the rivality of Mayank and Nupur.
Dance master "why Miss Nupur, I have seen Mayank's dance. He is good at his steps. We have very less time and all the students are busy in organizing the fare well and all. At this last moment it is really good that we got a good dancer who can grasp the steps soon"
Nupur "but sir-"
Dance master cuts her saying "ok Mr. Mayank and Miss Nupur tomorrow at 9 AM at my dance school. We will practice for 6 days continuously and we will rock the floor on 7th day" Mayank smiles at him and nods his head. Nupur reluctantly nods her head.

As soon as Dance master leaves the room Nupur glares at Mayank "I want to win this dance competition at any cost, if you do any mistake I will kill you mercilessly"
Mayank yamns and says "I am not kid that I will be afraid of your damkiya. So don't show your little finger to me Miss Nupur Bhushan. First check yourself if you can meet my standards"
Nupur folders her hands "standards, Mayank Sharma also has some standards"
Mayank glares at her "you will see that"
Nupur "I am awaiting to see that" says with a fake anxiety. Nupur turns and take the paper kept by her Dance master, the theme of their dance.

Nupur goes from the room ignoring Mayank reading the paper, the dance theme is "Lust, Love and Adoration". They are going to show the difference between these three words in the form of dance.
Nupur thinks "can Mayank will be able to pull this dance well, oh god Sumer. I feel sorry for your condition but still want to beat you for your reckless driving and mostly for pushing me in this situation to dance with that stupid Bandar" she puts the paper on her face still thinking "Or can I drop from this competition… NO why should I drop from this competition, if he messes then I can make fun of him. Last 7 days may be I will have a lot of fun to show him down" she gives a evil grin and decides to face Mayank tomorrow for dance practice.

7 days, will Love find its way in these 7 days? The bond they are not able to form for last 4 years can they form in just 7 days. Let's wait and unfold the story…

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Prethi, what a mindblowing start.i really loved it.hahaha mayank is flirty yet brillint n nups is as usual chatter box n brilliant too.loved their competition.very well written.i m enjoying it.plz do cont soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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prethi..
i am loving this ss..

loved the first part..
please please do pm me...

loved it..

it was so awsome...

all the moments of mayur fights came into my mind...

loved it..
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Lovely start dear..
plzz send me pm next ur update
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I loved it😊.
Plz pm me ...
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amazing thanks for mayur one
continue soon 😊
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ok guys i am back with my update...

The dance sequence i am putting in this part is purely my imagination, i tried my best to show Lust, Love and adoration with these three songs... if you feel it is not upto the mark then sorry and bare with me... 😳

i love dancing and i use to dream this dance sequence everytime when i heard about competitions
[i am not a gr8 dance mind you... i just love to dance thats all 😳]

chalo read the chapter and leave your comments 🤗
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Chapter-2

7th day the dance competitions are going with full swing. Mayank and Nupur waiting for their turn, the stage is decorated well. They are going to perform on three songs remixed by framing the required lyrics and music to show the three emotions in three songs with three different backgrounds and costumes. Their Dance master says all the best to both of them and other group of people who going to support Mayank and Nupur and goes to sit in the audience to cheer up them.

Anchor "and now let me call up our next participants Mayank and Nupur from Bhushan collage Arts and Science. They are going to perform on three different songs showing three different emotions of life – Lust, Love and Adoration. Give them a big hand" everyone claps and cheers for Mayank and Nupur.

Slowly the curtains raise and the background setting is shown with black stones like material and showing water pictures, music starts:
The girls are sitting around Nupur on a stone and decorating Nupur, the dressing is little like ancient clothings and jewelly, Mayank is standing turned towards audience and he looks like body guard, stands with a weapon as if he is guarding Nupur. His dress is ancient dressing with dotti and duppata without any top, a waist band around his waist to keep the duppata it at place.
Nupur comes near Mayank and starts dancing:

Raat Ka Nasha Abhi Aankh Se Gaya Nahin
Raat Ka Nasha Abhi Aankh Se Gaya Nahin

Mayank is about to move from her without giving her a look, Nupur stops him holding his hand and swrills near him singing…

Tera Nashila Badan Baahon Ne Chhoda Nahin
Aankhen To Kholi Magar Sapna Woh Toda Nahin
Haan Wohi Woh Wohi

Nupur leans on his shoulder closes her eyes singing…

Saason Pe Rakha Hua Tere Hoton Ka Sapna Abhi Hai Wahi

Mayank pushes her little and tries to go to be stopped by Nupur, this time he looks into her eyes. Nupur gives a triumph smile singing…

Raat Ka Nasha Abhi Aankh Se Gaya Nahin
Raat Ka Nasha Abhi Aankh Se Gaya Nahin

Mayank and Nupur do few steps with little lifts and classic steps…
Light is turned to red so that they reflect on their eyes and make them look so they are in deep romantic mood. The light falls on Nupur's eyes and lips making them shine. She takes the weapon he left on the floor puts it before her; Mayank puts his hands on her hands holding the weapon like hugging her from back…

Tere Gale Milne Ke, Mausam Bade Hote Hain

Nupur turns towards him leaving one hand on weapon, Mayank moves a little far and pulls her near him where she goes with a swirl puts her hand on his chest over his duppata…

Janmon Ka Vaada Koi, Yeh Gham Bade Chhote Hain

Both leaves the weapon and dances moving either side looking into each other's eyes…

Lambi Si Ek Raat Ho, Lamba Sa Ek Din Mile
Bas Itna Sa Jeena Ho, Milan Ki Ghadi Jab Mile

Nupur goes into Mayanks arms; Mayank picks her up and bends her completely…

Haan Wohi Bas Wohi

Nupur still in bends position closes her eyes and trackes her body with her hand, Mayank makes a small turn around singing…

Saason Pe Rakha Hua Tere Hoton Ka Sapna Abhi Hai Wahi

Mayank makes her stand, both sits on their knees infront of each other and Mayank slowly buries his head in her shoulder, she turns her head and closes her eyes… slowly the part of stage goes inside taking both of them inside and lights get slowly dim still song plays…

Raat Ka Nasha Abhi Aankh Se Gaya Nahin
Raat Ka Nasha Abhi Aankh Se Gaya Nahin

They take 15 seconds to change their customes... not much change but Mayank puts his shirt on removing the shervani and Nupur wears gagra takes little time by which Mayank manages the stage...

[Second song]

Mayank stands facing the stage starts singing, slowly lights get turned on,

Chand chupa badal mein, Sharmake meri janaa,
Chand chupa badal mein, Sharmake meri janaa,

Nupur sits on julaa wearing a little blue gagra with glitter duppata and open hair. The julaa comes down slowly…
Mayank turns towards Nupur and forwards his hand, Nupur gives her hand to him. Both starts dancing on slow numbers..

Seene se lagaja tu, Balkhake meri janaa,
Ghumsum sa hai, Gupchup sa hai,
Madhosh hai, Khamosh hai,
Ye samaa haa ye samaa, Kuch aur hai,

Nupur moves away from Mayank singing and dancing..

O oh oh
Chand chupa badal mein, Sharmake meri janaa,
Seene se lagaja tu, Balkhake meri janaa,

Mayank and Nupur stands and looks at sideways acting if some people are doing some pooja..

--Chorus--
Aaja re aaja chanda Ki jabatak tu na aaye ga
Sajanaa ke chehren ko dekhne Ye mantersa jayega,

Mayank moves forwards singing…

Na na chanda tu nahi aana, Tu jo aaya to,
Sanam sharma ke kahi chala jayena,
--Chorus--
Aaja re aaja chanda Tu lakh duya ye painga,

Mayank dances singing… Nupur goes towards julaa smiling

Na na chanda tu nahi aana, Varna sanam chalaa jayegaa

Mayank dances..

Achal mein tu chup ja ne de

Nupur pouts showing her thumb down dancing around julaa

Are nahi baba nahi abhi nahi nahi,

Mayank goes near her pulls her hair little singing..

Zulfo mein tu kho jaane de

Turns otherside making her hair brush his face singing…

Are nahi baba nahi abhi nahi nahi,

Sits on the julaa, swinging singing…

Pyar to naam hai, Sabar ka hamdum,

Mayank dances moving a little distance from julaaa..

Wohi bhalaa bolo kaise kare hum,

Nupur comes towards Mayank dancing…

Sawan ki rah jese dekh morr hai,

Mayank catches her hand pulling her close, when Nupur tries to run away…

Ae,rehene bhi do jaane bhi do ab chudo na

Yo modo na, Ye sama ha ye sama kuch aur hai,

Again as chorus starts Mayank and Nupur stops their dance and looks at the people.

Aaya re aaya chanda, Ab har khwayish puri hogi,
Chandani raat mei.n har sajani apne,
Sajanaa ko dekhe ki. -- (3)

Nupur slowly puts takes her duppata and puts infront of Mayank looking at him throw it. Mayank brings the duppata down. Nupur slowly hugs him and lights gets turned off one after the other making the stage dark and music will be placed at the background.

[3rd song]

First the chorus girls comes on to the stage dancing…

Aasmaan ki baahon mein chaand akela thehra tha
Hey, hey, hey, hey
Raat ki jawaani pe chaandni ka pehra tha
Hey, hey, hey, hey

Nupur comes wearing half saree over gagra and stands in between the girls dancing…

Hey, runjhun runjhun hawa ka jhonka ujli ujli raat

Mayank comes and stands a distance as if he is looking at the girls dancing, girls stops dancing noticing Mayank…

Taaron ki doli mein aayi jhilmilaate jugnu ki baaraat
Sab ke honton pe thehri thi aake koi baat

Nupur is unknow that Mayank is watching her, she dancing closing her eyes imaging Mayank with her…

Dhumak dhumak kar naach rahi thi meri radha pyaari, haan
Dhumak dhumak kar naach rahi thi meri radha pyaari

Mayank asks all the girls to go way and comes near Nupur places his hand around her waist hugging her from back.

Jaane kahan se raas rachaane aaya chhaila girdhaari

Nupur stops dancing breathing heavy stands still with closed eyes, she donot need to know who is it as she is very much knows the touch…

More piya, darrta hai dekho mora jiya
Ho more piya, darrta hai dekho mora jiya
Haan
More piya

Nupur slowly turns towards Mayank, the whole stage has moon lights which are reflecting in their eyes, it gives a feel that Nupur and Mayank are looking into each other's eyes with love and affection. Mayank raises his hand to trace her face when Nupur bends her head with shy and tries to run when Mayank catches her hand…

Na baiyyaan dharo, aati hai mujhe sharam
Haan, chhod do tumko hai meri kasam

Holding her both hands Mayank and Nupur dances little classic steps mixed…

Na, zid na karo jaane do mujhe balam
Dekho, doongi main gaaliyaan bhaanwre

At last Mayank pulls her close and lifts her in his arms making a round.

Chalo hato sataao na more piya
More piya, darrta hai dekho mora jiya
Ho more piya, darrta hai dekho mora jiya
More piya

Mayank puts Nupur on some rock like thing and sits above of it, Nupur hugs her with an expression of love and Mayank puts his chin on her head with affection… their expression are the highlight of the song which shows that they love each other beyond their lives.

Jamuna ke teer baaje mridang
Kare krishn raas radha ke sang
Kare krishn raas radha ke sang
Athron pe geet mann mein umang
Kare krishn raas radha ke sang
Kare krishn raas radha ke sang
Saanson mein pyaas tan mein tarang
Kare krishn raas radha ke sang
Kare krishn raas radha ke sang

The performance is a huge hit and Mayank-Nupur group bagged the award. Mayank and Nupur went to receive the award. After that competition all other college people left the auditorium. The final farewell party for Nupur's batch is started at last in the college premises after their principles speech. Everyone is enjoying the party Nupur is standing along with Dia, Pinky and Gunjan. Nupur hears Natasha and Tanya fighting over Mayank for their next date openly, Dia sighed hearing that, Pinky laughed seeing the scene where Gunjan shakes her head but Nupur was glaring at both of them searching for Mayank who is at drinks counter. Mayank takes the drink in his hand and smiles at the girls; he starts walking towards them and crosses everyone to reach Nupur. He gives the drink to Nupur with a smile, Nupur smiles back and takes the drink. Everyone stops on their track to see Mayank and Nupur smiling at each other and the way they are looking at each other any blind person can tell that they are very much in love, this came as a shock to everyone. But Mayank and Nupur are oblique to the surprise looks they are getting, because they are in their own world.

What might have happened in last 7 days? Let's see in my next part 😉 😳

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