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Nikhila Chandran S.S.

@Nikki_Titli

Elite

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#51

lovely start shubhs...👏...cant w8 to read Mayank's entry...😍

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ragini sharma

@-DreamzGirl-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#52

@Shubu\\

What an update ..you are a great Mystery writer ..👍🏼

First GOOD points..

1 nice start

2 mystery concept behind nupur past..

3 For UPDate ...

BAD part..

ita lamba update mujhe padhte padhte pure ..120 second lage ..ita jyada kaise likh leti hai..😡

Agli bar small sige UPdate dena..

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Sujata

@SujaLuvsMayur

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#53

very nice update.

bt so small ... plz updt lil long from next time.

mistry was grt ... waiting for reveal.

continue soon.

thanks ofr the pm.

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-Symphony-

@-Symphony-

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#54

🥳Toh shubaharambh ho gaya😳

Loved the update😃 I love the fact that u made Mayu the same old angry young man😆 Love him like dat only😳

Can't wait to see how u're gonna unfold the story😛

Next update...more jaldi plz😆

p.s loved the "mayu watching her intently" bit lol

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mayur_eternal

@mayur_eternal

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#55

Totally luved the first chapter..😊
Thank God u msged me abt this ff..otherwise I wouldnt have seen it(esp after u changed ur username😆)..
As much as it is romantic,I find it mysterious too.So both of them work in creative fields.Interesting..even before meeting MayankI kinda feel that his character has more shades.I'm soo looking forward for their first meeting.😊

Update soon...

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#56

shubsss
congo hun
veryyy nice start
loved it so much
oye do cont
love ya

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.SA.

@.SA.

Trailblazer

Posted: 13 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: StrongHope
like i said kal its absolutely fantastic👏👏 i love how you describe minute to minute detail without making it boring😊 reminds me of JKR😆 yes my patri doesnt go past HP and JKR when it comes to writing😆 love the way you described nupur's character😃😃 its perfect👍🏼the house description is also fab😃😃 i could literally visualize it😊Oh so mayank is mona's cousin not bad😉😆 (PS: mona reminds me of mona singh all the time😆) yay shilpa is in the story🥳 love you for this🤗 i missed her later in mjht was watching old scenes of theirs too the other day when nupur called up his house before rose day and his mum picked up and she screamed dekho mujhe tumse koi baat nahin karni hai, apni mummy ko phone do mujhe unse shikayat karni hai🤣🤣🤣 painter: nice profession and unique too😃😊 love the ending👍🏼
thanks for the pm loving every bit of it🤗

my writing reminds you of JKR ???😲😲 awww...thanks Rubu 🤗

i picked the name mona at random,never thought about mona singh.😆

Shilpa is going to play an important role in MN story.😃

Originally posted by: --.munchkin.--
🤗...shubu!!!!!!!...🤗 ...amazing update !! a real great start...plus still maintaining the mysterious element...donno Its only me who is getting that mystery - mystery feeling ...LOL :P
Anyways I loved the way u penned down the part...the way u described each n every details was really gud :) and staring started frm now only hun ! the furious Mayank, is he ?? 😆 lets see...do continue soon...😃

and thanks for the updates..😳 🤗

thanks a lot munchkin 🤗🤗

thanks for always being there for me & always encouraging me.

yeah whats Mayank with out a bit of anger?? that would be like food with out salt & spice.😉😆

Originally posted by: --.munchkin.--
😆 woh toh pehle ki baat thi n that was a mistake i guess ! I dont know! me wants romance...ab tujhse nahi yeh demand karungi toh kisse karun ?? 😉 🤣

So, chup chap meri baat suno..😳 waise bhi mjhe feeling aaying, this mayank wud b very romantic sa..😉😆

if you say so.😉🤣🤣 may be it was a mistake,may be it was not. who knows???😆 achha??? you have a feeling Mayank would be romantic??😲😲

even i don't know ,how is he going to behave with Nupur.😉😆

Originally posted by: -Symphony-
🥳Toh shubaharambh ho gaya😳

Loved the update😃 I love the fact that u made Mayu the same old angry young man😆 Love him like dat only😳
Can't wait to see how u're gonna unfold the story😛

Next update...more jaldi plz😆

p.s loved the "mayu watching her intently" bit lol

thanks Tanu.

main update jaldi hi karti hoon ,once a week.

par aap padhne ki jehmat to uthayein na?? 😳😳

Originally posted by: -SupriyaluvsMN-
awesum update shubhs!😳

thanks Priya.😊

Originally posted by: mayur_eternal
Totally luved the first chapter..😊
Thank God u msged me abt this ff..otherwise I wouldnt have seen it(esp after u changed ur username😆)..
As much as it is romantic,I find it mysterious too.So both of them work in creative fields.Interesting..even before meeting MayankI kinda feel that his character has more shades.I'm soo looking forward for their first meeting.😊

Update soon...

thanks Amu.

Edited by .SA. - 13 years ago

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.SA.

@.SA.

Trailblazer

Posted: 13 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: Bhawna_arti
Nice update.

thanks.😊

Originally posted by: --WHATEVER--
beautiful update Shubs..🤗
loved it..❤️

thanks a lot Anji . 🤗

Originally posted by: --Ruchi--
Beautiful update shubhu..loved it❤️

thanks Ruchu,😃

Originally posted by: gopi06
interesting updt
cont soon
thanks for the pm

thanks Bhargavi.😊

Originally posted by: dreambig
Nice update!

thanks.😊

Originally posted by: shafyyy
amazing update

thank you.😊

Edited by .SA. - 13 years ago

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.SA.

@.SA.

Trailblazer

Posted: 13 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: Auroni.92
That ws very beautifully written...The detail description of the place and house make u imagine all..
And the last part ws even more interesting...eagerly waiting to meet this mysterious painter...i mean mayank..😆
Loved it..cont soon...

thanks Auroni.😃

Originally posted by: --Sanchu--
interesting...

really nice start Shubhi :)
do continue soon :)
will be eagerly waiting for it :)

thanks Sanchu.😊

Originally posted by: crazymayurian
osom

thanks 😊

Originally posted by: love.mayurarti
Congrats fr new ff...
and update was jst fabulous...all the description was mindblowing

thanks 😊

Originally posted by: mayuloveu
interesting update

thanks .😊

Originally posted by: nikki028
lovely start shubhs...👏...cant w8 to read Mayank's entry...😍

thanks Nikki.😃

Originally posted by: raginisharma
@Shubu\\

What an update ..you are a great Mystery writer ..👍🏼

First GOOD points..

1 nice start
2 mystery concept behind nupur past..
3 For UPDate ...

BAD part..

ita lamba update mujhe padhte padhte pure ..120 second lage ..ita jyada kaise likh leti hai..😡

Agli bar small sige UPdate dena..

thanks Gini.

pehli baar kisi ko small update mangte dekha hai. 🤣🤣

Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur
very nice update.

bt so small ... plz updt lil long from next time.

mistry was grt ... waiting for reveal.

continue soon.

thanks ofr the pm.

thanks Suja.😊

Edited by .SA. - 13 years ago

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.SA.

@.SA.

Trailblazer

Posted: 13 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: -Anila-
Awesome Start SIS...👍🏼
That was class apart...👏👏👏
loved it to BITS...😍
Beautifully written wid sooo much ease n grace...😳
jst loved it to d coreee😳
i was actually being able to imagine Every single thing of dat update...
d countryside, d house, d Painting n most importantly Mayank looking at Nupur intently...at d end...😍😍😍
Hats off...⭐️⭐️⭐️
it was Awesome...
jst loved it to BITS...
do continue super soon plzzz
love u lodsss...🤗🤗🤗